FF Jaaneman Chap 6 updated Pg18 25/3 pm sent later - Page 13

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luv angel thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Right lookk I'm commenting!
For those who don't know me Im the silent Aluu!
The FF is going great!
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the sms part
haaye i felt it was romantic
u knw sms can sometimes be soooooooo romantic

'Heer' she read aloud.

'So Mr Prem, lagta hain apko pata hain ki yeh mera number hain... kya reply karo...' Heer thought to herself.

'I know....' Heer said replying to the text...

Prem was sitting on the sofa downstairs, when his phone vibrated beside him. Picking it up, he smiled and read it to himself aloud.

'Prem.... name toh acha hain.... thanks for what you did on the plane today, otherwise god knows what would have happened...'

Prem replied, and left his phone on the sofa and started to watch the film again.

Heer lay awake in her room, not able to go to sleep until she got a reply. Finally hearing her phone vibrate she squealed and sat up....

'No problem for plane incident.... and thanks for appreciating my name.... tumhara bhi itna bura nahin hain... but just not as good as mine...'

Smiling to herself she texted back with a reply just as witty.

'Acha, mujhe toh lagta hain ki Heer, Prem se tora zada acha hain... waise bhi tum hi toh the jo mera naam phi itna muskari thee....'

'Erm agar mujhe yaad hain, toh it was you who whispered my name once at the airport when I saved you from falling, and once on the plane when you were asleep on my shoulder...'

'Woh...'

'I'm joking.... don't worry...... anyway have a good night and sweet dreams.........'

'You too...'

'Heer..............'

'Prem...'

so it looks like even my new fav wrds r "Prem'' and Heer now......

loved it

they r the best brothers ever on indian television......and my all time fav

thank u for giving such a sweet emotional brotherly moment between Preet and Prem.........loved it.............Cutest scene

and then Prem calling Harman Chepo......lolz tht was so funny

and they meet again

Prem.........heer.............Prem ................Heer

Premeer

and the last part.................... Prem holding her hand and saying,"Heer"

and preet looking at his pb........... looking at a girl like tht........kuch toh zaroor hai..........now Preet would surely get started

thank u for updating it after such a long time............

loved it

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey marium...plzzz continue this ff soon...plzzz i m dieing to read the next part
Edited by khajju - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Haha Maz ur lazy like me 😲 both of us dont like updating 🤣 🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey i m a new reader of this FF.
pls do add me in ur PM list.
nd pls update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey _Mariam_

Read your story few days back. Very interesting concept & fun characters.
Enjoyed reading all the chapters so far.

Mausi is so very sweet.
Preet and Prem are adorable bros and best friends. So cool.
Meher and Heer also same best sisters and friends. Love their relationship.

It's nice to have Harman as Prem's buddy and Ash as Heer's.
The sangeet/ bachelor's party being in same venue is hilarious 😆 1st time hearing about it. Prem's comment about Harman saving money is so right by having two celebrations in same place.

Dialogues are interesting and keeps the story moving well.
The way PH met and coincidences are very nice.

Love this story. It would've been fun to find out what happens when Heer also sees Prem.

Thanks for very interesting FF. Really appreciate that you took time to write or fans.

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Posted: 13 years ago
update pls
nd also add me in ur pm list
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Posted: 12 years ago
update plzz...add me in ur pm list too😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey guys well I basically got busy with study's that I comp forgot about my ff anyways I have graduated now and currently I am looking for a job and free 😆 so I am going to write an Arhi version of this ff of myn and then thought that if u guys are still interested to read I can carry on posting chapters here please respond and tell me how u feel

Mariam
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Mariam 😃

Ty 4 visiting here.
Congratz on graduating All the best for job hunt 👍🏼

If you'd like to write then I'm looking forward to see the updates.
Thanks.

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