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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey...
just read all da updates now.....
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now i m chanting PREM

HEER
PREM
Heer
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hey awesome update i read all the chapters its great please add me to your pm list
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continue soon
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awesome part
loved the blow prem gave
hope heer calls prem
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WAITING EAGERLY FOR THE NEXT MEET TRACK WHEN PREET WILL MEET MEHER AGAIN😍PLZ START MEET LOVE TRACK SOON😃AS I AM A DIEHARD MEET FAN😆 & U R A FANTASTIC WRITER👏
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pleasepleaseplease post the next part soon! this is awesome :)
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hey it is really awesome FF plzzzzzzzzzzz update it ASAP i am eagerly waiting 4 its next part plzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Hey guys i wasnt able to update as I had my examz but now as my examz are over I will be updating tomorow thank you everyone for commenting on my ff and pressing the like button i really appricate it
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sure.....we're waiting .....hope you did well!
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Hey Guys Here i am with the next update I know i am updating after a long time hope you like it 😃

FF Jaaneman Chapter 5
'Didi!' Meher screamed as she saw Heer walking upto her with a trolley full of luggage!
'Meher' Heer whispered, smiling at her innocence.
Getting a tight hug from Meher, both girls where extremly happy to see each other after so long.
'Didi, I missed you so much! How long are you going to stay this time?' Meher asked, whilst taking hold of the luggage trolley and departing for the exit.
'Bas Meher, shaadi katam hoke I have to return, last year of studies. Then I'll permantly move back, with you!' Heer said smiling.
'Okay didi, so where first, home or shopping?' Meher asked.
'Meher, we will go home, drop my luggage of, then go straight to the mall.' Heer said.
Leaving the airport, Meher had walked ahead, and started to put the luggage into the car, with Heer walking behind her.
Turning around one final time, she smiled and whispered, her now favourite word.

'Prem.'

'Didi, chalo, car ready hain' Meher said, with Heer walking behind, and entering the car, leaving the airport.

'Yeh pagal ladka kithar hain. Jaane se pehle doh baar phone kiya tha yaad karne kilee!' Prem muttered to himself. Walking towards the exit of the airport, he decided to make his own way home.
Stepping outside, he shut his eyes and felt extremly relaxed.
Opening them he pushed his hair out of his eyes and hailed a taxi, to go home.

'Meher, chaabi tumhare paas hain?' Heer asked.
'Haan Di, yeh le.' Meher replied handing back the key of the house.
Opening the door, both sisters held hands and entered there own house after nearly a whole year. Smiling as the memories came flooding back, they looked around absobing in their surroundings.
'Didi, ek saal mein Saab kuch kitna ajeeb lag ra hain' Meher said.
Heer not being able to speak, just nodded. With the house being clean, as Meher had supervised it to be clean before the arrival of Heer, both girls smiled, and left the luggage leaving for their day full of shopping!

With the taxi entering the huge gates, which opened to reveal the oversized Juneja Mansion, the taxi driver could not keep his mouth closed.
'Bhai Saab, app ether retein hai?' he asked.
'Haan...' Prem replied busy in his phone.
With the taxi stopping outside the mansion, Prem stepped out, taking hold of his own luggage before the driver could help, and smiled at the sight of his home, after nearly a year of being away from it, and his lovely family. Turning around he took his wallet out and paid the driver.
'Yeh lo, aur shukriaa' Prem said.
The driver was suprised at the maaners, as all rich people he had heard about were rude to every extent. Smiling, the taxi driver hailed his goodbye and left the mansion drive, with the huge black gates shutting on the departure of his car. Turning back around once again he walked upto the front door. Digging his hand deep into the pocket of his trousers he pulled out his key to the house, and opened the front door. Walking inside he, was suprised to see the mansion completly empty. Taking the luggage inside he shut the door, and walked in slowly and looked around to see if anyone was present. Finding no one, he walked into the kitchen to get himself a glass of water.

'Meher, chal, tori shopping karle te hain. We need a few dresses for the wedding!' Heer said, walking into a shop full of wedding attires.
Both girls split up, and decided to buy two dresses each.
Meher almost immediatly found her self a very light green ghahra choli for the mehndi, and turquoise blue for the actual wedding.
Heer on the other hand was extremly picky, and it took her longer to choose her outfits. Finally deciding on a yellow, with tints of red ghahra choli for the mehndi, and her favourite colour of pink for the wedding. Both girls where pleased with their shopping and left to find matching jewelry.

Prem drank his water and left the glass on the side of the counter, being an old habit, and walked back into the living room, when he heard the door open and shut again. Steeping back and hiding behind a pillar he saw his one and only mausi. Smiling he tip toed behind her, and place his hands around her eyes and stayed silent.
Mausi still for a moment.
'Premm' she said smiling.
'Kyaa mausi, humesha recognise karlete hain' Prem said slighlty whining, and taking his hands off his Mausi's eyes.
'Prem Beta' She said and took her favourite son into a long hug. Although she had always treated Prem and Preet equal, Prem had always had a soft spot in his Mausis heart, and Preet always said that she loved Prem more than himself.
'Ahh, Mausi I missed you soo much!' Prem said.
'Mein bhi, abb jalde se waapas aagaa' Mausi said.
'Baas Mausi, ek aur baar London jaana paregaa, phir uske baad mein aapke paas humesha kilye aajoygaa.' Prem said.
Both breaking out of the hug, Prem asked a question to his pyaari Maussi.
'Aacha Mausi ek baat bateyee. Appko humesha paata kaise chal jaata hain ke mein hi hoon.' Prem said pushing his shoes off, and sitting down lying his head on Mausi's lap, who had already sat down.
'Baas beta, mein apne bacho koon baut achee tara se jaante hoon.' Mausi said.
Prem shut his eyes being so tierd from the flight. Mausi let him lay there for a few minutes, until he fell fast asleep, gently getting up, she placed a pillow under his head, and left for the kitchen, instructing the servants to stay quiet. Her laadla was sleeping. Prem was sleeping.

'Didi, aaj mein baut thak ge hoon, magar baut maza ayaa app ki saat shopping kar ke, abb bas kal mehndi hain.' Meher said to Heer, who was slouching on the sofa due to being so tierd.
'Haan Meher, chal mein jaake tora aram kar loon. Phir kal baut taakan hogee.' Heer said and left for her room.
Lying down on her bed, she shut her eyes for a moment, but realised her sleep had vanished. Opening her eyes again, she looked through her bag, trying to find her mobile, but instead came across something else. Pulling it out she was suprised at what she saw.

'Such a great day off from Uni! But I'm sure I'm forgetting something. But what?' Preet thought to himself as he walked out of his room and downstairs.
'Ahh choro, don't stress your sensitive head!' Preet ended and walked towards the sofa. As he was behind it he could not the see the person lying on the sofa. Walking upto it he rolled over onto the sofa, being a usual habit!
A few minutes passed when he heard soft muffling. Then a more of an angry voice. A voice he recognised.

'Preet, you idiot get off me!'

Standing up almost immediatly, Preet was shocked as he remembered what he had to do.
'PB....' Preet began, but couldn't finish.
'Preet tu andaa hain. Could you not see me on the sofa. One more minute an I would of died.' Prem said sitting up.
'Thankgod, PB naraz nahin hain!' Preet thought to himself.
'Kitna mota hogeya aaj kal tu.' Prem said.
'PB, me aur mota, shahid app apna weight ki baat kari hain.' Preet retorted back.
'Mera weight. Tujse shahid zaada hoon kyu ki I have muscle. And as you will never of heard this, muscle weighs more than fat. I have muscle on my body wereas your full of fat, idiot!' Prem said.
Preet knew that Prem was in his masti mood as his PB would of told him off for answering back, but rather continued their little argument.
'PB, mein aur mota!' Preet asked shocked.
'Hain tuh Mota, that's Mota, M-O-T-A, Mota' Prem said, spelling it out, whilst walking up towards Preet.
'PB, I'm not the fat one you are!' Preet said steeping back as Prem walked nearer to him. Seeing Prem not giving up, Preet smiled and whispered, 'PB, mein bhi aapka hi bahi hoon' and started to run around the huge mansion with Prem following closely behind.
'Aacha hain Preet tori exercise hori hain!' Prem joked. Angry Preet turned around and chased his PB this time. Prem being older was always that small bit faster than Preet.
Mausi had stepped out of the kitchen to see what the noise was, and saw her two pyaari sons chasing each other. Smiling she remembered how in their childhood they would do the exact same thing.
Walking up, she stood in the middle of the living room, where Prem came at full speed and hugged Mausi from behind.
'Baas Preet, tu jeeta! Tu mota nahin hain!' Prem said tierd.
'Yeh hoi na baat!' Preet said puffing his collar.
Sitting down, Mausi sat beside him, with Preet on the other side.
A few minutes passed, until Prem moved his hand behind Mausi and hit Preet on the head!
'Yeh kis baat ke lye?' Preet asked.
'Duffer, for forgetting to pick me up from the airport' Prem said.
'Sorry PB, I knew I was forgetting something!' Preet said. 'Aur PB I'm seeing you after so long and your after my weight. Do I not even get a hug?' Preet asked standing up.
Smilling Prem got up and hugged his favourite, one and only brother, his Preet.
'Missed you!' Preet whispered.
'Me too!' Prem said ruffling his younger brothers hair and smiling at his innocence at this age!
'Chalo, ladko khana table phi hain. Both of your favourite!' Mausi said leading them both to the table.

'Yeh kiska number hain?' Heer spoke to herself, but then read the name next to it.

'Prem'

'Arre Prem beta, teek toh hoon na?' Asked Mausi as Prem coughed all of a sudden!
Calming down he nodded and wondered what had happened all of a sudden, and felt like someone had taken his name.

'Yeh isne kab likha, I wonder.' Heer spoke to herself. Grabbing her phone, she saved the number. Droppig her phone on the bed, she picked it up again and went onto her texts, opening a blank one she thought of what to write. Unable to, she wrote her new favourite word and name,
'Prem'
And then carried on pressing the send button. Smiling at what she just did, she left her phone on the bed to go find Meher and get everything ready for the next day.

'Preet kal mendhi hain, toh Harmaan ko phone kar aur ek bachelers party organise kar!' Prem suggested.
'Great idea PB, mein abhe karta hoon!' Preet said and walked off to phone Harmaan.
'Prem mein abhi ayee tori deer mein. Mandir jaree hoon!' Mausi said and left the house for the mandir.

Prem got up and walked towards his room, and sat on his comfy bed. Grabbing his phone he realised he had a text. Reading it an instant smile appeared on his face.

'Prem'

'I knew she would text me!' Prem said. Saving the number, he pressed the reply button, and also wrote a similar message.

'Heer'
Precap: Wedding Prem and Heer meet each other prem cant take his eyes of heer meher and Preet have a fight
Ok here is the Part hope you guys liked it feel free to criticize and credit goes to my partner in this FF Alu for righting this part will be waiting for your comments 😃

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