FF Jaaneman Chap 6 updated Pg18 25/3 pm sent later - Page 12

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Posted: 15 years ago
jst mind blowing ..... luv dis sibling bonding....they are superb...
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It was a really really sweet update Mariam

Loved the brothers and sisters bond..it was really lovely
how Mausi recognized Prem was like K3G but adorable
awww...Prem was soo sweet to the driver :D
and really nice ending with Heer's text...I was just waiting for tht
to come...
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely sibling part
loved their bondage. you has written very well to feel their love.
wating how are they going tomeet their partners.
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hiiiiiiii 😊 awesome part..............👏 when r u updating???????????? can't wait yaar n pm me.......
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Guys I know I havnt updated my ff in long tym as i got busy with things but now i am back if you guys still want to read let me know
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Posted: 14 years ago

ya plzzzzzz do continue it

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please continue.........and add me to ur pm list :)
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Hey guys I am back with the next chapter I know its been ages since I have updated but I had examz projects, assignments as I am in last yr of uni before I graduate i got a bit of free tym and decided to update this FF hope you guys enjoy it 😊
Chapter 6 Jaanemaan

Heer walked into the room, later on that night, tired from the endless chattings between her and Meher. Sitting on the bed she picked up her phone, and saw one new message. Opening it she smiled.

'Heer' she read aloud.

'So Mr Prem, lagta hain apko pata hain ki yeh mera number hain... kya reply karo...' Heer thought to herself.

'I know....' Heer said replying to the text...

Prem was sitting on the sofa downstairs, when his phone vibrated beside him. Picking it up, he smiled and read it to himself aloud.

'Prem.... name toh acha hain.... thanks for what you did on the plane today, otherwise god knows what would have happened...'

Prem replied, and left his phone on the sofa and started to watch the film again.

Heer lay awake in her room, not able to go to sleep until she got a reply. Finally hearing her phone vibrate she squealed and sat up....

'No problem for plane incident.... and thanks for appreciating my name.... tumhara bhi itna bura nahin hain... but just not as good as mine...'

Smiling to herself she texted back with a reply just as witty.

'Acha, mujhe toh lagta hain ki Heer, Prem se tora zada acha hain... waise bhi tum hi toh the jo mera naam phi itna muskari thee....'

'Erm agar mujhe yaad hain, toh it was you who whispered my name once at the airport when I saved you from falling, and once on the plane when you were asleep on my shoulder...'

'Woh...'

'I'm joking.... don't worry...... anyway have a good night and sweet dreams.........'

'You too...'

'Heer..............'

'Prem...'

Their conversation over text ended there, and Prem went to sleep, thinking what life had in store for him with this girl and why he was always had her name on his mouth....

'Heer..' he whispered once again before finally shutting his eyes and going to sleep.

The next day arrived, and was Maya's mendhi. The girls had gone over to Mayas house early in the morning, to get ready and also keep her company.

'Maya, hum aagyee!' Meher screamed as she entered the house.

'Heer!!' Maya screamed running down the stairs and giving her best friend, cum sister a big hug.

'Oh god, I missed you so much.... I would have killed you if you missed my wedding.' Maya squealed.

'Maya I wouldn't have missed it for anything in the world.' Heer replied smiling.

'You know I feel really appreciated at this moment, hugging the air' Meher whined.

Both girls laughed and took Meher into their hug. The three girls laughed at meeting each other after such a long time.

'Chal, upar chalo, hume ready bhi hona.....' Maya said pulling both girls upstairs.

'Prem.. Prem' Mausi said sitting next to him on his bed trying to wake him up. 'Prem beta, utho na, doh baaj re hain.' Mausi insisted.

Seeing him in such a deep sleep she didn't have the heart to wake up anymore. 'Bechara taka hoygaa, flight itne lambe thee, thori aur der sohjayee.' Mausi said to herself, getting up gently kissing him on his forehead and left the room quietly.

'Mausii!! PB kaha hain, we have to go to the bachelors party soon.' Preet asked lying on the sofa.

'Preet woh soya, lagta baut thaaka tha.. chal mein kitchen mein jarre hoon, tum dono ki liya lunch bana doon.' Mausi said exiting the room.

'Achha PB is tired... ill refresh him right now.' He said jumping up off the sofa and running towards his brothers room. Opening the door he saw him peacefully sleeping on the bed. Steeping closer he walked up to the bed.

'On three Preet, one two three!' he said to himself.

Jumping into the air he landed on top of his brother, laughing to no extent.

'PREET!'

Rolling over on to the side of his bed Preet was lying down in hysterics.

'Preet je aapko baut hasse arre hain nah, if i was you i would run at this moment.' He warned.

Preet turned towards his brother and laughed.

'PB, oh god I missed you so much, doing all this stuff. When you're not here it shows how much you mean to me.' Preet said, finally quietening down.

'Preet, I'll always be around for you don't worry.' Prem said realising his little brother was serious.

'I know you will, but still i miss you not being here all the time.' Preet said.

'Woh toh hain, but just one more trip to London then i will be back, eh?' Prem said trying to reason.

'Hmm...' Preet said getting up and about to leave.

Prem got out the bed and walked towards his brother stopping him and taking him into a hug.

'Preet, ill be quick this time, p-promise just for you, but business is business yeh?' Prem said.

'I know sorry PB I'm just being childish. It's just you've always been my mum and dad after Mausi. PB I might not be serious all the time, but let me tell you, you men the world to me' Preet said.

'Preet.' Prem said huggin his brother tighter. He had never said anything like this. 'Preet you and Mausi are everything to me, and always will mean everything to me okay? Chal chup ho, mein tyaar hota hoon, we have to go the bachelors party?' Prem said changing the topic.

'Woh Bahia, Harmaan ka phone aya tha, he said to meet him at Mayas house. The party is in the backyard for reason.' Preet said letting go of the hug.

'Backyard? Chepo proberly didn't want to rent out a hall.' Prem said laughing. 'Chal go get ready.'

Hours had passed, and was the evening. The three girls where ready. Maya was wearing a lime green gharga choli, with matching jewellery. Heer has a very light yellow, with blue tints choli and Meher a shade of orange. All looked lovely.

Coming downstairs they all got set, and the rasam began, with Maya getting her mendhi done. The girls where dancing for Maya......

Mehndi hai rachnewaali, haathon mein gehri laali

Kahe sakhiyaan, ab kaliyaan

Haathon mein khilnewaali hain

Tere mann ko, jeevan ko

Nayi khushiyaan milnewaali hai

Mehndi hai rachnewaali, haathon mein gehri laali

Kahe sakhiyaan, ab kaliyaan

Haathon mein khilnewaali hain

Tere mann ko, jeevan ko

Nayi khushiyaan milnewaali hai

O hariyali banno

Le jaana tujhko guiyyaan aane waale hai saiyyaan

Thaamenge aake baiyyaan, goonjegi shehnaayi

Angnaayi, angnaayi

Mehndi hai rachnewaali, haathon mein gehri laali

Kahe sakhiyaan, ab kaliyaan

Haathon mein khilnewaali hain

Tere mann ko, jeevan ko

Nayi khushiyaan milnewaali hai

The boys entered the backyard.

'Harman why here in the backyard?' Prem asked.

'Because we are all goin inside instead. Got permission and all, chalo i need to see Maya.@ Harmaan said.

The boys laughed and went inside to join the rasam.

Gaaye maiya aur mausi, gaaye behna aur bhabhi

Ke mehndi khil jaaye, rang laaye hariyaali banni

Gaaye phoofi aur chaachi, gaaye naani aur daadi

Ke mehndi mann bhaaye, saj jaaye hariyaali banni

Mehndi roop sanwaare, o mehndi rang nikhaare, ho

Hariyaali banni ke aanchal mein utrenge taarein

Mehndi hai rachnewaali, haathon mein gehri laali

Kahe sakhiyaan, ab kaliyaan

Haathon mein khilnewaali hain

Tere mann ko, jeevan ko

Nayi khushiyaan milnewaali hai

Entering Prem was shocked at what he was seeing. There was Heer looking mesmerising infront of him dancing.

'Heer....' he whispered.

'PB, what? Heera, have you seen a diamond or something?' Preet asked.

Hearing no response he looked over to his brother who was in a trance looking at a girl dancing.

'Hmm PB, looking at a girl, daal mein kuch kaala hain.'

Gaaje, baaje, baraati, ghoda, gaadi aur haathi ko

Laayenge saajan tere aangan, hariyaali banni

Teri mehndi woh dekhenge

To apna dil rakhdenge woh

Pairon mein tere chupke se, hariyaali banni

Mehndi roop sanwaare, o mehndi rang nikhaare, ho

Hariyaali banni ke aanchal mein utrenge taarein

Mehndi hai rachnewaali, haathon mein gehri laali

Kahe sakhiyaan, ab kaliyaan

Haathon mein khilnewaali hain

Tere mann ko, jeevan ko

Nayi khushiyaan milnewaali hai

The danced ended and the whole crowd erupted in a applause. Heer looked around and saw the boys had entered also. Going towards the drinks table, she had something to drink. Putting it down she was about to go towards Maya when someone held her wrist. Turning around she saw a familiar face.

'Prem....'

Ok guys here is the next part hope you guys enjoy reading it do comment/crticize credit goes to my pathner aluu for writing this part one day she will defo comment 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

thanjs for da wonderful update it was too good but do updayte soon the next part asap

Edited by sweta2005 - 14 years ago
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Wow grear FF!

Just read it...n loved it...
Add me to ur PM list plzz...

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