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chap 11
.........................back to present
'aur tumne kya jawab diya tha heer' asked prem
'maine ye hi kaha tha ki aisa kuchh nahin hai'replied heer
'ok'said ash with a dull face
'acha ashlesha paani le aao heer ke liye kaafi der se bol rahi hai, gala sookh gaya hoga aur main aata hun abhi washroom ho ke'
ash went to kitchen and prem went to washroom coz he wanted her to say that she answered his name but all he got was disappointment and he had to stay alone to digest the truth
he came out of the study and then headed towards the balcony that was on the opposite side of lobby.he opened the door and cool breeze hitted his face, that breeze had the power to calm any temperature by just one touch but it couldnt calm the heat in his insides , heat of anger, helplessness, guikt and defeat which he felt as he remembered her words
'i have never felt that b4'
why? wht she never felt that before? can't she not feel his love for her?
his eyes became red so to cool himself he decided to relax there
he sat on the swing in the balcony bended back on the iron back board of the swing, he closed his eyes but suddenly opened them as he heard
''bhai, Ye lijiye paani.'
he sighed and then took the glass from her,
'thanks, tum....'
'haan haan ja rahi hun, unhe bhi de dungi, but i think you must rest for sometime and before you protest or give any explanation she to needs to rest, remembering thse times will always be painful for her and her answers effect on you to is visible, so take 20 min rest we will continue afterwards and i'll inform her .'
'baar baar bhi main use tang nahin karna chahta, isilye i want to finish it as soon as possible.'
'you know what we cant give her anything right now nothing, if we will console her then too she will get weak give her a few minutes she will regain her strength, unhe sab kuchh khud hi sambhalna hoga, halat ko bhi aur khud ko bhi, ab main chalti hun aur aap bhi aaram karo hum 15-20 min baad milte hain'
she went inside, upon reaching the door she turned back to see her PB , his eyes were closed, he was leaning back on the iron board , she wanted to go hug him and console him, but she knew all he needed now was TIME, in his own company, all he required was solitude now, there was nothing she could do so she left for the study.
when she reached there she saw heer looking outside the window lost in her own world staring into nothing, she decided to say nothing and give her time, she kept glass on the side coffee table and left for her room
Prem's every problem was known to her, but she had no solution for him ryt now and for heer she had a solution for her every problem but she wasnt aware of her problem right now
looking outside heer leaned on the side of the window frame.....and was again back in flashback....
.....................
(flashback)
'bata na heer, i m sure you love someone'said meher
'nahi yaar aisa kuch nahin hai'said heer
'sach sach bata'said veera
'are sach mein'
'dekh hum sab ne sach bataya hai ab teri baari hai'meher again forced her
'are par...sach mein koi nahi hai...(she looked at their faces and knew it was time to open the closed chapters)ok fine he was my neighbour'
'oooooooooooohhhh....'veera
'aur?'asked meher
'we played, lived, eat, all together'
'aur'asked meher
'he is my best friend'
'kya naam hai uska?'asked preet
'ummmm.....'
'ummmm.....nice name'said veera sarcastically
'nahi uska naam prem hai'
'preeeeeem.........wowwwww?such a cute name'said veera
'heer prem - ek amar katha'said meher
'nahin it was one sided love,ya shayad attraction ya shayad nahi, he never loved me'
'he denied your love?'
'nahin, i never told him , i thought he will realise it but he never understood'
'short mein nahin bada karke bata heer'asked preet
............................
he closed his eyes and again those beautiful almond shaped eyes were in front of him but this time they were of that time when he first met her
********************fb(premeer)(will have both's pov)
a girl of arund 5 years, in yellow coloured frock and in bellies went to a slide
she extended her hand towards a boy of 6 years
'hello! mela naam heel hai, mujhshe doshti
kaloge?'
'main kyun karun tumse dosti?'
'pleaz main yahan nai aai hun, i dont hav any flendzz...'
'no i will not' with that he pushed the her in mud and went to play with his friends
when she fell she had closed her eyes but as soon as she opened them she found herself fully drenched in mud, her hands, dress , hair all messed in mud, her elbow got hurt, and she heard all the kids of park laughing her beautiful eyes brimmed with tears, feeling pain and embarassment she started crying loudly , seeing her cry the boy ran from there with his friends fearing that may be her mother ot father scold him. while she was crying she felt a tap on her shoulder, she turned around and without looking hugged the person
'koi mujhse doshti nai kalta, main kisi ko achhi nai lagti isiliye sab mujhse dool bhagte hain'and started sobbing harder
the one hugging her was a 5 year old boy with chocolate brown eyes, cute sweet chubby face, he consoled her
'are dont worry, main hun na...i will be your friend'
as she felt an unfamiliar voice, she left him with a jerk and stood up
'kaun ho tum?' she questioned
'are ye hug karne se pehle to nahi puchha tha?'
'mujhe laga nihu bhai the'
'oohh!!!!'
'kya oohh, kaun ho tum?'
'main? main hun prem, prem juneja, mujhse doshti kalogi'he mimicked her
but heer instead of getting angry found his smile nice and adorable
so placed her hand in his
'ok'
'ab dosti ki hai to madad bhi karni padegi, chalo uss gadhe ko sabak sikhate hain'
'nahin wo maalega mujhe'
'maar ke to dikhae, haath to lagae, muh tod dunga uska'
she agreed but then she pointed her dress, he understood and asked her about her house she told him and they went there
they went in finding no one in house heer suddenly ran to her room washed herself wore another frock and changed in shoes
she came down and prem holding her hand took her again to the park
as they found that boy heer told him and he told her somthing in her ears
and then showing thumbs up they went their ways
'hi sarthak, may i join' prem said to a friend of his
'haan prem aa ja, hum pakan pakdai khel rahe hain'
'nahi yaar chal chupa chupi khelte hain maza aaega'
'haan ye bhi theek hai'
all the boys agreed and were about to play when prem told them to play in the other corner of the park
they reluctantly agreed and they went to the other side to play where that boy who pushed heer was playing
they started to play
first it was sarthak's den , he counted till 10 and started searching, he caught a boy after a few minutes serch and then this way it went for two more chances, after that prem knowingly got caught and now it was his turn
he went to the tree near which that boy was playing and started counting
'1, 2 , 3 , 5 , 8, 9, 4, ......are yaar ten to aa hi nahin raha'
the boy laughed and said
'you are counting it wrong'
'no, its right'
'you are wrong'
'no'
'yes'
and they started fighting, prem pushed him and then the boy did this to him again, they faught like this and after a few minutes all the boys started fighting with each other, taking it as a chance prem came out of the group and started running towards the slide, seeing him run the boy too came behind him, upon reaching slide the boy had lost prem coz he ran very fast, he was breathing heavily due to running so thought of standing there to take rest, and then he heard a laugh, he looked at the one laughing it was none other than heer,
'hooooooooooo!!!!!tum to use pahad bhi nai paaye........hooooooooooooooo!!!'
'chup raho tum....'
'hahaha....hyun kya kar loge, tum to apne se chote ladke ko bhi nai pakad sake'
he got angry and went towards heer when he was about to hit her he sensed someone coming from his right but before he could turn he was in mud with prem, when he got up prem too stood up and then
prem started crying loudly
hearing him cry a lady passing from near by and two three more people came to see what happened
'kya hua beta kyun ro rahe ho?'
'isne mujhe dhakka mara'said prem with teary eyes
'maine? maine nahi isne maara'said boy all confused and angry
'nahin isi ne mujhe mara, yahan bhi yahan bhi aur yahan, ouch mamma.....'cried out prem as he showed the lady the hurtings he had actually got while fighting with him earlier
'no aunty , he is lying'
and now heer started crying too
'no aunty he is lying he did the same with me too, and now with prem....he is a lier'
hearing this the lady got angry and took a good class of the boy
prem and heer took a chance and ran to their houses
when they stopped
'tum roi kyun does it still hurts'asked prem all concerened as he remembered her crying while explaining
'no, it doesn't, but becauze of me you got all dirlty and hurlt ' and again her eyes welled up with tears
'dirlty?hurlt? oh dirty and hurt' understanding prem tried to console her
'koi baat nahi dosti mein ye to hota rehta hai, achha ab main chalta hun, nahin to maa pareshan ho jaengi aur tum kal park akele mat jana main aaunga tumhe lene tab saath chalenge, i will come at 5pm, ok?'
'hmmm' she said all teary
'aur pls ro mat, you dont look gud when you cry'
'pal hamne jhoot bola na ushe phashane ke liye, aul jhoot bolna to paap hai, aisa baba kehte hain'
'humne kahan jhoot bola, he had actually pushed you aur main to bohut tez bhaag raha tha isiliye khud ko sambhal nahin paya so hum gir gaye, kyun? haina?'
'haan' she said all convinced and happy
'tumhali mamma tumhe daantegi naa'
'no she wont, i will tell her whatever happened and m sure she will understand'
'kya main tumhali mada kalun ghal tak, ?'
'no its fine i live in the house that is next to yours, i will manage'
'ok bye, take cale aul dawai kha lena aul doodh bhi pee lena tum jaldi she theek ho jaoege, aisha baba kehte hain'
'ok i will, see u tommorow'
this was their first meeting
and next day at school
as he entered the class he saw a group of his friends around his seat, when he got closer ho heard a sob and then saw girl sitting on his place with head down on desk and arms folded and everyone hitting her and telling her to get up from his seat as everyone was friend with him coz he helped everyone
seeing him everyone got aside, he went near to his seat and when he saw her elbow,he understoo it was her
'heer?'
hearing her name, she raised her head up and on seeing prem she hugged him seeing this everyone face went😲😲
and they said'hooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!'
'plem, ye shab mujhe maal lahe hain, koi mujhe yahan baithne nahi de laha'
on realisng that everyone was hitting her, he got angry and roared
'agar agli baar kisi ne , kisi ne bhi meri heer ko haath lagaya ya uska mazak udaya to main uska muh todh dunga samjhe?'
everyone got scared and when they heard their teacher coming in class they went to their seats
prem consoled her and and made her sit in his seat
he himself sat in the adjacent seat
teacher entered the class and when she saw heer, she smiled, she called her near her
heer first feared and was reluctant to stand but thenprem whispered
'main hun na!!! jaao miss bula rahin hain, dont worry, she will help, she is very good'
heer got up and went to her
on seeing her eyes red teacher asked what had happened/ why she was crying, everyone got scared that now heer will tell the truth and they will get scolded
'woh mis, wo..... i was shcarled to come to shchool, thats y?but plem helped me now i m ok.'all sighed
miss smiled
she called prem near her
'everyone you all should be like prem, look he helped a new girl, now on you all will be friends with heer too, ok?'
'yes miss!'all said in unison
'now clap for him'
everyone clapped and so did heer, this made prem proud of himself
ok students now, this is our new student, her name is heer maan, everyone behave properly with her,ok?'
'yes miss'
'heer beta do you want to sit somwhere else in class'
heer looked at prem then whole class
then to miss
'no miss i m fine, only want to swap places with prem '
'ok'
and she instructed premheer to go, they exchanged seats , when he sat on his seat then only he realised her reason for swaping seats, on his rght side was sarthak his friend and on his left she was sitting
such jestures made them friends, everytime hear was in trouble unlike other kids she would call prem, and whenever prem was feeling sad, or whenever he was scolded by his dad, he would go to heer, she would console him, share her chocolates with him.
during nights they would sit on the terrace wall which joined it and count stars, make wishes whenever they saw shooting stars and everyday they would sit together at night, sometimes complete their homeworks, joke around, make fun, tell each others what they did when they weren't together, which was a very minor case, their friendship was someething which was known to everyone but most shocking thing was their parents never realised it, only prem's mother knew about is and ashlesha and in heer's house only her baba. while they were 7yrs ashlesha was born and when prem told her this they went to hospital together to see her, on her b'day they both would plan something together and gift her, when they were 12ys , once prem got very sick and didnt come to to school and also not for meeting heer in evening, this made heer very angry and in anger she didnt go to see him on terrace, prem waited for her whole night, at 3:30 am morning as heer couldnt sleep she went to terrace and found him leaning on the pole that was on the wall where they sat, she touched his hand and found it boiling hot, she shook him and told him to go and sleep in his room and instructed him to keep his door opened
he did as instructed
heer went in her baba's room, woke him up
'kya hua putter? kyun jagaya mujhe? are you all right?'
'hanji baba main theek hun aap please mere saath chalo nahin to ma jaag jaengi'
'achha chal'
he got up wore his slippers and went to her room with her, there she told him that prem was very sick so she has decided to go and give him this medicine and showed him the medicine, balraj was amazed coz she held the correct medicine
'haan puttar ye theek hai, achha ek kaam kar main tujhe besan ke sheera bana ke deta hun tu use woh khila diyo wo jaldi theek ho jaega, when he was about to go she showed him a steel box, opened it and asked , baba i made it for the first time please try and tell ye theek hai na, i learnt it when you once gave it to rishi bhai, balraj was so happy to see his girl behaving so maturely, his eyes filled up with tears as he put a spoon ful of sheera, it was worlds best sheera, seeing tears heer got scared that it was not good and she was about to cry but then she heard him sya
'puttar ye to bohut swaad hai, meri beti to bohut badi ho gai hai haina? ja beta de de use aur use kehna ki woh aaram kare'
'achha baba'
she took everything in a packet with her blanket too, she went to terrace, she somehow jumped fom th wall, and went in prem's house, she went in and upon reaching his room opened it and went in she saw him on bed his eyes closed, but they flickered as if sensing her, and opened
'hi heer, soory yaar i couldn't inform you, ma ne bhi mujhe bistar se uthne nahin diya, i hope u are not angry'
with angry look on her face she went towards himtook out the blanket covered him with it, them put his blanket on him
'heer mujhe already garmi lag rahi hai aur tum aur cover kar rahi ho kujhe'
she gave him a glare and he shutted his mouth
she went and close the window from where cold winds were coming
'heer ab ise kyun band kar rahi ho?'
she again said nothing only gave him a glare
them she closed door of his room and sat beside him she opened the steel box, and then hitted her head she forgot to bring spoon
'kya hua?'
she again said nothing and went towards the kitchen of the house, she entered it, it had no light and she was scared of darkness with fear she entered it , she remembered where his ma kept the spoons and went there she took out the spoon but by mistake made a few utensiles fell down hearing noise prem's dad came to see who was it with a stick, if it was a thief
he reached kitchen, hearing his steps heer got scared, she bent her head down reday to get scolded, he switched on the lights,and his eyes became red in anger
'tum ? tum kya kar rahe ho yahan par?'
'dad! aap yahan? main to paani peene aaya tha. sorry dad i woke you up'
'sorry? tum jao aur jaake aaram karo, yahan ghumna phirna band karo, tum mein zara si bhi akal hai itni raat gair yahan tamasha kar rahe ho'
'sorry dad' saying this he went to his room
his dad switched of the lights and went to his room, prem came back and keeping his hands on his hips looked at heer who was hiding behind the table in kitchen where prem had pushed her to save her from his dad
'dekha mere bina tum kuchh theek se nahin kar sakti'
she stood up, and then they both went to his room
he sat inside his blankets and heer opened the steel box, when she opened it , it was empty, she had tears again, she thought she took the wrong box
'kya dhoond rahi ho?'
she understood, keeping her hands on her waist
'tum mujhe bevkuf bana rahe ho, haina?'
'kuch cheezein karni nahi padti'
'achha, fir kahan hai wo'
'kya? maine nahin khaya sheera'
'maine to kaha hi nahi ki sheera kahan hai, ab tum ho hi itne budhu to main kya karun'
'achha achha theek hai, uncle se kehna it was yumm, bohut tasty tha'
'sachi?'
'haan , par tum kyun itna excited ho? as if u made it'
she said nothing but only gave him a wide grin
'tum daant kyun phad rahi ho?oh no....'he said with a worried face
'kya hua prem?'
she said all worried
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Edited by heer193 - 14 years ago
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