FF: its never too late Ch-15 Pg-38 10/9/11

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Posted: 15 years ago
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😊Hi! everyone i just started a new ff that too for the first time pls do tell me how did you find it and do give me advices if u like this story is about three friends heer, meher and veera.

First Chapter

Early in the morning two men in front of a newspaper stall waiting for there bus were discussing the news that was the head line of every newspaper,

'dekhiye toh aaj kal kya ho rha hai.ghor kalyug aa gya hai.'

'haan sahi kaha aapne Sharmaji!'

' Ab yehi dekhiye yahaan kya likha hai, teen doctor jo ek saath rehti thi aur ek hi hospital mein kaam karti thi, unhone kya kya kiya hai. '

'wahi teen na jin mein se ek ne pura hospital bus band hi karva diya tha, ek ne apne hi ek patient ko maar dala, aur teesri jis ka murder hua tha.'

'haan haan wahi teen, aur media waalon ne in teenon ko celebrity bana diya hai. Har jagah inhi ke charche hain, in par news banai jaa rahi hain, bollywood wale in par film banane wale hain jaise bada acha kaam kiya hai inhone.'

'waise aaj us doctor ka trial hai na jisne apne hi patient ko maar diya hai.'

'haan, aur who bhi paison ke liye, ye paisa bhi insaan ko kya bana deta hai.'

the newsheadline read-

Dr Heer Maan- Angel of Mercy or the Devil's Disciple?

pls do tell how did u find it nd press like button if u like it.

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INDEX
Ch-1 Pg-1
Ch-2 Pg-2
Ch-3 Pg-4
Ch-4 Pg-7
Ch-5 Pg-9
Ch-6 Pg-12
Ch-7 Pg-14
Ch-8 Pg-16
Ch-9 Pg-20
Ch-10 Pg-22
Ch-11 Pg-26
Ch-12 Pg-28
Ch-13 Pg-31
Ch-14 Pg-33
NOTE Pg-36
Ch-15 Pg-38
Edited by heer193 - 13 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey heer finally u started i was waiting ohh its a thrillerrr my goslets see whats next
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hey dear
it seems really intresting...........do continue soon
add me in urs pm list
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pmmmm mee thanx seems interstin
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seems interesting.....
is it a thriller?
do continue soon!
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thriller! wow! we r hving diverse genres of writers in Desh Forum!
bravo!
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Originally posted by: aishwaryagayen

hey heer finally u started i was waiting ohh its a thrillerrr my goslets see whats next

hi
yaah i finally started it
pls do give advices if u lyk
Edited by heer193 - 15 years ago
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Hey heer
Very nice concept
Its gonna haunt me at nights
Loved the headlines
Pls add me to ur pm list
Thanks
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i don't think u should cheat........
it seems very very inspired from sidney sheldon's novel
" nothing lasts forever"
dr. paige taylor, dr.kat hunter and dr..honey taft😳
does it ring a bell dear?????😳
its unethical to just change the name of characters and proclaim the work of others as ur own.......😳
esp of a well known author like sidney sheldon!
Edited by -vandy- - 15 years ago
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hi guys! sorry couldn't update before this was a bit busy with exams. if anyone has doubt that this ff is a copy of sidney sheldon's novel ' nothing lasts forever' then i would say pls don't worry i know my limits and wont copy anything. i just took the first chapter coz i got a story from there, it just inspired me. hope you lyk the update and do comment.
Chap - 2

In the court-

At the end of the trial, after listening to all the witnesses and after determing every proof, the judge said-

'kya aap Dr. Mann apni safaai mein kuchh kehna chahti hain?'

' Dr. Mann main aapse kuch puchh rahi hun, kya aap kuchh kehna chahti hain ya nahi?

'

She said nothimg,coz she heard nothing, she couldn't understand what was happening''''.

To herself 'yeh sab kya ho gaya hai, koi mujhe samajh kyun nahi raha, maine koi galati nahin ki''''''' sab itna galat kaise ho gaya hai'''''' yeh sab uss aadmi ka saath kyun de rahe hain jisne'''''.jisne meri ek dost ko maar dala'''''''.. aur doosri''''''.doosri ko kahan laakar khada kar diya tha''''''''. Kyun ? '''..kyun? yeh aisa kyun kar rahe hain? Aur jispar mujhe khud se jyada bharosa tha jise maine itna pyaar kiya aaj usne bhi mera saath chod diya hai, use bhi main galat lagti hun, kyun ho raha hai mere saath aisa, aaj sabne mera saath chod diya hai, aaj main itni akeli ho gayi hun, main kya karoon, kaise inhe yakeen dilaoon ki main galat nahin hun,usne sach mein''''' usne sach mein mara hai, meri meher ko mara hai, usi ne meher ko maara hai, usne'.. par''''''par usne'''.. par usne aisa kyun kiya'''''. usne mere naam'''.mere naam''''.. par sab kuch kyun kar diya, aakhir usne aisa kyun'''.aur uska sab se achha dost, uska bhai wo'''.ye sab kya ho raha hai '''''..'she was all confused.

'Dr.Heer Mann aap apni safaai mein kuchh kehna chahati hai ya nahin, aap jaanti hain na aapki chupi aap ke liye kitni badi problem khadi kar sakti hai, aap ne ye baat accept kari hai ki aap ne apne patient ko mara hai, par is baat ki wajah aap ne abhi tak nahin bataai hai, aapke lawyer ne bhi ye case chod diya hai, kya aap ke paas koi safaai hai ya court apna faisla suna de.'

Heer in mind 'saara sach ab sirf preet jaanta hai par wo, wo kaise'''''''''..hey bhagwan, ye kya ho gya hai, aisa nai ho sakta, aisa kyun ho rha hai'''''..nahi sab galat ho rha hai'''''''.kaash ye koi bura sapna hota'''..(she closed her eyes and opened, thinking may be it vanished but it didn't)'.nahi aap mere saath aisa nahi kar sakte'''''''..nahi'''..nahi aisa nahi ho sakta (saying this in her mind she was shaking her head which judge took as her answer)

'to ab court apna faisla sunaegi, saare sabooton aur gwaho ko madde nazar rakhte hue court Dr. Heer Mann ko apne patient Mr. Rishab ke katal ke ilzaam mein''

At that very moment, came a voice 'ruk jaaiye your honour.'

And hearing this voice heer came back to reality

'aap kaun hain?'

'your honour, main Prem Juneja hun aur aajse Ms. Mann sorry Dr. Mann ka case main handle karunga.

pls do reply, give comments and advices and pls press lyk button if u lyk it
thanks
Edited by heer193 - 14 years ago

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