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chap 10
'kahan tak bhagogi, tum bhag sakti ho chup nahi sakti, dr. meher.
hmmm.....dr meher mehra, sound rythmic, and so do preet meher, oh god i love her'
after that next day
5th feb evening
'there's something about u that keeps me attracting like magnet....'
all the tym while coming back this line of preet roamed in her head, she was getting more and more confused
..................
back to present
'uss din aur uske agle do din tak meher ne na hume call ki na hamara phone uthaya, aur hum wahan huss ke pagal ho rahe the...'said heer
'kya? i thought u wuld have been very upset, but u seemed to have fun....how is it possible?'
'kyunki we got preets call everyday actually every hour, he told us everything he did....obviously meri dost ke kareeb aane ke liye preet ko apni do saaliyon ka saath to chahiye tha na...(she said smiling, but suddenly she realised that this wish of her'stheir's would never come true)
'lo paani pi lo' offered prem
'no , im fy9, ....wo bus.... meher, she was a sweetheart , hamari dosti itni jyada ho gai thi ki shayad mujhe haq sa mil gaya tha uske upar, tabhi to dekho na main khud preet ko uske paas le ja rahi thi, jaante ho jis din hum camp pe jaane wale the use pichli raat hi mujhe preet ka call aaya tha----
........
'dr. maan, i wanted to meet you..'
'is everything ok , ur mother is fy9 i hope'
'oh no no, its actually i wanted to....(he fumbled with words)...woh...'
'to phir....'
'can you please meet me i want to talk to you personaly, please'
'hmm....(she pretended to be thinking took 10 long seconds and then said)i dont think i have tym to meet,.....(she could sense his dissapointment when he sighed)...but ok , fine, we will meet tomor...'
'nahin nahin abhi hi, actually i m near your house only actually outside, and before you ask i got ur address from hospital'
'WHAT???aap bahar khade hain?'
'ji haan!!!'
'great, i knew love is blind but now i think its crazy' she mumbled inside her head
'kuchh kaha aapne?'
'nahi, main aapse abhi kaise? ok fine i will meet you in 2 minutes just be careful dont let anyone see you, especially my frined meher'
'yaah , i know ussi se to milne hai'
'kya kaha aapne?'
'nothing...pls come soon'
heer said ok and then directly went to veera room , she without knocking went in , which when veera realised was about to yell but heer covered her mouth and said '
preetbaharhaineedtogoandseehim'
'kya bakwas kar rai hai?'
'ok i said preet is outside waiting to meet me, and am sure he is here to ask about meher'
'ohhhoooo... so lover boy iss here'
they got up went out of the house without making any noise
'kahan hai yaar wo?'
'am here'
'mr.mehra, aap iss time kyun aaye hain yahan'said heer making a bit annoyed face
'woh woh...ummm'preet felt confused and guilty for making her meet him at this tym it was 1:30 am
'grt hum yahan ye sunne aaye hainwoh woh ummm' said veera with a annoyed face to heer
'ok fy9, i like your friend and just wanted to know about her'preet said without thinking, coz he knew if he tried to think he will just shut his mouth
'great ab hum mr.mehra ko khabre pahunchaenge bbc press reporters bana diya hume'said veera and this made preet annoyed too
'hello madam i never called you came with her'
'mr.preet itni raat ko aap humein disturb kar rahe hain aur phir attitude dikha rahe hai'this tym said heermaking a annoyed face but inside she was smiling(thinking- veera se to dono ki hi nahin banti , it took two months for meher to adjust with veera,aur ab ye, kya jodi hai, ram milai jodi)
'are but...'preet trid to explain
'nahin , i dont want your explanation, we are not interested intelling you anything'said heer
and veera added to it
' hum aapki stupid si attraction, infatuation ke liye kuchh nahi kar sakte'
hearing this preet got angry, pointing finger towards veera he said-
'look miss na to mujhe aapse madad chahiye na hi apka koi ehsaan, its just ki i m in love with ur dear friend, dont you ever, ever call my love, infatuation, i m sure i m in love with her, its love, do you get that?'preet almost yelled at veera
veera suddenly hugged him and this made both heer and preet look at each other
'are ye aap kya kar rahin hai? pls leave me...'
'oh sorry(she released him)actually i m very happy that you came to her life, and all i wanted to hear was you love her, look if you had confusion then i couldnt make meher's life hell, confusion always create problems, and if u werent sure then i wuldnt have let you go to her, and waise bhi jijaji jab tak aaphume nahi pataoge tab tak aapki koi madad hum hone nahin denge'
'jijaji?' said a surprised preet
heer entered' haan to aur kya ho tum hamare liye,'
'thanks, it feels great , after getting your support and sorry i yelled'
'oh dont be, we made you'both said together and giggled
'ok, to ab aap muhe bataengi...pls'
'sure, par usse pehle i want to clear aaj se hum aaj se dost hue to u call us by our names'
'what is your name i dont remember'
'great i hugged someone jise mera naam bhi nahin pata'
'veera' told heer smiling
'ok'..............and then they discussed everything to be done
...............
back to present
'wow di, kitna cute hoga na wo'
'kaun preet haan he is very cute, we shared a strong bond uss raat hum sab subah tak baat karte rahe, jab meher ke uthne ka time hua tab we went back'
'aur phir...'exclaimed a excited ash
'phir....hum jab wapis aaye to meher ne hume sab bataya, actually i shuld say phir se bataya... tab hum apni hassi issiliye rok paaye kyunki hum already sab jaante the...he actually went to hospital everyday and irritated her...and then came 14th feb , but usse pehle preet invited us for dinner and we without telling meher took her to his home, we met his mom, had a great dinner, from that day to 14 we had one meal of a day together, it felt like magicpret got bound to us just in a couple of weeks, we all trusted him like anything, but meher due to her confusion tried ignoring him but she culdnt it was visible in her eyes,her eyes reflected her emotions as yours ash'she said smiling
'phir 14th ko preet hospital aaya, he asked meher for dinner, he even gave her roses but as usual she denied it , then we thought a bit and asked him to come to our house, hearing this meher was furious but still she kept quite, she enjoyed hi company but then too tried ignoring him, aur uss din dinner ke baad we played truth and dare... that was great fun uss di humne ek dusre ko aur bhi achhe se jana tha
..................flashback
'great chalo lets start' said veera all excited
meher got a bit tensed and said she has headache and is not willing to play
'meher, hum doctors hain hume hi ullu bana rahi hai, come on yaar lts play na, aur aaj to main kisi ki baat nahi sunungi, all have to play'
meher first hesitated but later gave in
so now all four sat on ground
veera went inside kitchen and returned with a tray
then filled all the glasses, gave it to everyone
meher as usual first said no
'rehne do veera, ise peene ke liye you need guts, himmat chahiye,...'
'preet but its just wine and meher pls you to never denied in trying something new to aaj kya hua, chupchap pee le'
meher at the end agreed but nothing on this world could make heer have it'comeon heer ab tu to bhav nakha, i mnow u r a gutsy girl,chal lele'
'gutsy hun ya na hun,i dont care, i wont pls dont force me or i m leaving'she threatened
preet finally agreed 'ok tujhe chod diya, but that is not fare you will have to something for us instead of this'
'ok fine, bolo kya karna hai'
'main to baad mein bataunga, inse puchh le'
veera took a long sip and then said'dr. shashank ke kaan ke niche ek baja ke dikhana..
'chad gayi ise , ek hi sip mein'said meher
'heer humm bhi baad mein bataenge'
'par meher, achha mauka hai, is bahane heer ke violent skills bhi dikh jaenge'
'shut up veera, tujhe chad gayi hai'
'nai yaar this is wine ye nai chad ti, mujhe to bilkul nahi chadegi'
'kyun?'
they started argueing, heer made them stop
'ok now, lets start'
veera in excitment took the bottle and spun it
it rested with its open end on veera
'leh, apne jaal mein khud hi phas gayi, ise kehte hai paer(foot) pe kulhadi(ax) marna'
meher said'nahi veera ise kulhadi pe paer marna kehte hain' and all started laughing
'acha bolo veera 'truth or dare''
'dare, obviously'
'fine do what u asked heer to do'
'kya? are main mazak kar rahi thi, i wont do it'
'relax veera, ye bhi mazak kar rahi hai'
'ok then also i am taking truth, iska koi bharosa nahi'
'but how xan she chan...'
'koi baat nahi pehle bande ko maaf, ab rules clear hai so now, veera tell us about...'heer started thinking
'first crush..,'said heer
'first boyfriend...'said meher and preet
all together, now veera got confused she looked at heer and heer signaled her to answer their ques
'ok ab majority wins, his name was rohit'
'wow, veera aur phir....'exclaimed meher all excited
'phir kya? jitna puchha tha utna bata diya'
'but....ok fyn , spin it'
'seems like sombodies enjoying this game and cant wait'said preet
'we can hear all this bakwas of urs afterwards, spin it'
he spun it this time it was his chance only
'bottle mein gadbad hai, usi ke paas rukti hai jo ghumata hai'
'nahi nahi ab tumhe batana hoga truth ya dare'
'no , i wont tell spin again'
they again argued for 5 min
then the matter settled on meher's side and he had to answer coz he asked truth
'tum ....'heer
'tum ye batao ki....'veera
'ki?...'preet
'your first crush, gf, attraction and tell about it in atleat 5 lines, you have to answer all these' said meher
all were amazed by her wits
'first crush in 3rd standard was my english teacher, she was very preety but was 25 yrs older to me,my first love i met her a couple of days back, she is a doctor, looks very beautiful, a briliant doctor, and has beautiful eyes(both veera and heer gave hi 5 behind mehers back as they saw a blush krept on her cheeks)my first attraction was towards heer (all shocked)
'kya??'exxclaimed meher with a bit of dispair
'haan'
'ye kya bol rahe ho preet?'asked heer all confused
'yes i am attracted to you , i like you very much, the day we met, from that very day i felt we have a bond, and it is a sister brother bond'
hearing this veera gave a sigh and thankedgod under her breath, and heer had tears in her eyes, she shifted to him and hugged him tightly, and his words had the most effect on meher, who got her eyes teary and said thank you through them which only preet culd read
they again settled before they could spin the bottle meher inturrupted
'i want truth'
'it isnt your chance yet'
'i want to confess'
hearing this all became silent, thinking that may be she tell today that she love preet
'i want you all to know about me something jo koi nai janta hai yahan, jo aaj tak maine tumhe nahi bataya,(all got confused but kept quite) mera naam meher sharma hai, main ek anath hun, jise kisi ne adopt kiya hai but usse pehle main ek anjaan ladki thi jise jindagi mein apni jagah ka kuchh nahi pata tha, i used to live in slums of mumbai, mera asli naam meher nahi vaishali hai,(all shocked) aur meher ki maut ho chuki hai,(bigger shock) i know you all must be shocked but its the truth, while i was living in slums, i culdnt attend schools but had an unending urge ki main bus wahan jaun padu likhun aur doctor banu,(she said with a sad face) all because ek baar slums mein ek handsome sa doctor aaya tha jise dekh ke mujhe laga tha ki main ek din isi se shaadi karungi,(a smile came on her face, all this while heer and veera were trying to digest but preet was drinking her every word with every change in expression and was glad that she is telling the truth in front of him) aur uss din se main doctor banna chahti thi, bade hote hote wo attraction to kam ho gai but doctor banne ka determination bad gaya , mere baba books bind kate the, jo books ghar aati thi i used to study from them, when i got 13 yrs old uss di ek school ke peeche wali deewar ke paas khadi thi ke tabhi ek ladki mujhse takra gai, when she turned, we were shocked, we had similar faces, while i was trying to figure out kya chal raha hai, she got an idea, she took me with her, she then told me ki uska naam meher hai, usse school jana achha nahi lagta, she asked me agar main uski jagah school jaun aur wo meri jagah ghar par khele, uss waqt bina soche samjhe main maan gai, iss sab ko karne ke liye maine apne aur usne apne friend ki madad li, and from then her position in class began to increase , her teachers parents all were very happy, as i used to go to school then come back home we changed clothes and then she went back home this continued till i was in 4th year of my mbbs, but one day while i was returning from college somebody pulled me, it was my friend ketan
he told me that meher met with an accident and died and everybody thinks that i was dead, and thinking this my baba to died, i was all in tears, but at that time had to go to her house coz they didnt have to suffer.
this made me go to her house i lived their as their daughter, but one day his dad caught me and askd me , i told him everything, he got angry and didnt talk to me for 1 month, during the tym i lived wid them i loved them as my own parents, when he got angry i was broken hearted, i felt as if my baba isnt talking to me but both of us didnt once dared to tell this to ma, after a month one day he called me in study and asked if i loved them, and i told him that yes i loved him and ma more than anything in this world, he asked me to be his daughter for ever, i agreed, he brought few papers and made me his official daughter by adopting me, one day i was sitting in store room and there i saw pics of my baba and asked dad who was he to him , he then told me that he adopted meher from him and this made it clear why our faces resembled, we were twin sisters, after giving us birth my ma died and baba didnt have that much money to keep us, and as mr.sharma's son died after getting birth he adopted meher and i was left in slums, after that dad and i got in a special bond but he took a promise that i would never ever let anyone know this so that ma would be safe coz she has a weak heart and can die of this shock that she has lost her daughter who actually wasnt hers, and today i am here with u all, but today i couldnt stop myself from telling you the truth its high time and you all deserve to know, i hope you will forgive me' she started sobbing
heer got up consoled her, preet too did the same, to change the topic for now they again resumed playing asking funny ques like first pimple, first slap from a girl, etc.
then at the end after several tries heer got into the web and she asked for truth
veera , meher and preet together asked her,
''your first feeling of love'
'i have never felt that b4'
'really?'asked preet
.........................back to present
'aur tumne kya jawab diya tha heer' asked prem
'maine ye hi kaha tha ki aisa kuchh nahin hai'replied heer
'ok'said ash with a dull face
'acha ashlesha paani le aao heer ke liye kaafi der se bol rahi hai, gala sookh gaya hoga aur main aata hun abhi washroom ho ke'
ash went to kitchen and prem went to washroom coz he wanted her to say that she answered his name but all he got was disappointment and he had to stay alone to digest the truth
when they were gone heer went to the window and
looked outside.....and was again back in flashback....
.....................
(flashback)
'bata na heer, i m sure you love someone'said meher
'nahi yaar aisa kuch nahin hai'said heer
'sach sach bata'said veera
'are sach mein'
'dekh hum sab ne sach bataya hai ab teri baari hai'meher again forced her
'are par...sach mein koi nahi hai...(she looked at their faces and knew it was time to open the closed chapters)ok fine he was my neighbour'
'oooooooooooohhhh....'veera
'aur?'asked meher
'we played, lived, eat, all together'
'aur'asked meher
'he is my best friend'
'kya naam hai uska?'asked preet
'ummmm.....'
'ummmm.....nice name'said veera sarcastically
'nahi uska naam prem hai'
'preeeeeem.........wowwwww?such a cute name'said veera
'heer prem - ek amar katha'said meher
'nahin it was one sided love,ya shayad attraction ya shayad nahi, he never loved me'
'he denied your love?'
'nahin, i never told him , i thought he will realise it but he never understood'
'short mein nahin bada karke bata heer'asked preet
********************fb(premeer)
'hello! mela naam heel hai, mujhshe doshti
kaloge?'asked a girl of 5 years to a boy of 6 years
'main kyun karun tumse dosti?'
'pleaz main yahan nai aai hun, i dont hav any flendzz...'
'no i will not'he pushed the heer in mud and went to play
she started crying , she stopped when felt a tap on her shoulder, she turned around and without looking hugged the person
'koi mujhse doshti nai kalta, main kisi ko achhi nai lagti isiliye sab mujhse dool bhagte hain'and started sobbing harder
the one hugging her was a 5 year old boy with chocolate brown eyes, cute sweet chubby face, he consoled her
'are dont worry, main hun na...i will be your friend'
she left him with a jerk and stood up
'kaun ho tum?'
'are ye hug karne se pehle to nahi puchha tha?'
'mujhe laga nihu bhai the'
'oohh'
'kya oohh, kaun ho tum?'
'main? main hun prem, prem juneja, mujhse doshti kalogi'he mimicked her
but heer instead of getting angry found his smile nice and adorable
so placed her hand in his
'ok'
'ab dosti ki hai to madad bhi karni padegi, chalo uss gadhe ko sabak sikhate hain'
'nahin wo maarega mujhe'
'maar ke to dikhae, haath to lagae, muh tod dunga uska'
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