FF - Marriage Contract Part 33(18/04)148 UPDATED!! - Page 16

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Posted: 15 years ago
moving on interestingly.. waiting for the next update...
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey...
awesome update....
yey... they got married....
prem is going to fall in love very soon.. :D he he... cool...
cnt wait 4 the next update...
pls update soon... :D
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Posted: 15 years ago
Another brilliant ff....
oh prem ofcourse ur gna fall for this magnet....
so there's no point resisting...lol.........

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Posted: 15 years ago
'girls have magnet to attract men. But I'm not the one to fall for this magnet.' but looks like the magnet is working He is staring at her movement without his own knowledge. He felt his body loosening and aching to touch her.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part - 6

When he came out of the washroom, he is happy that Heer is not in the room. 'I'm safe out of the magnet range.' He opened his closet and took his suit. He is happily humming his favourite song. He combed his hair and looked himself in the mirror. 'you are looking smart Mr. Prem Juneja the Prince of Juneja empire.'

Heer is serving breakfast for Lalit and Gaya3. Prem came down the stairs humming a song. He touched Lalit and Gaya3 feet. Both surprised by his attitude. He never had that habit before. Lalit thought 'is he really changed?' he shook his head 'that is not possible.'

Prem sat to have breakfast. Heer served him and sat next to him. He didn't give any attention to Heer. He is concentrating on his food. Heer too didn't give any botheration to Prem except she act as a good DIL infornt of Lalit and Gaya3.

Gaya3 broke their silence 'Prem, today you both have to go to Heer's house.' Prem as an obedient son 'yes Ma. But before that I want to take aunty to the hospital.' Heer is happy.

Gaya3 'you should call her as Ma not as Aunti.' Prem nodded without any protest. Lalit 'why to the hospital?'

Prem struggled one second 'woh Heer said her ma has heart problem. So I thought of taking her to our family doctor.' Lalit happy that he is taking care of Heer mother. Gaya3 'so my son changed in an over night by Heer.' She gave a victory smile to Heer.

Heer gave a fake happy smile to Gaya3 thinking 'he is going according to his contract.'

Prem thought 'who changed? I have to do this otherwise she won't agree for child. Then I can't be prince.'

Prem got up 'ma. Getting late for us. I already fixed the appointment with Dr. Siraj.' Lalit and Gaya3 shook their head. Heer and Prem went out. Lalit and Gaya3 are happy that Prem is taking care of Heer's mother.

In the car, Heer thanked Prem 'thanks for remembering.' Prem 'I'm doing my duty. Hope you will do the same.' Heer agreed. Rest of the journey was quiet.

Teji was eagerly waiting for Prem and Heer. When she saw them she is happy. Prem and Heer entered the house. Prem and Heer touched Teji feet. Teji is happy to see Prem giving respect to him. Teji served them juice. They all sat to chat. Teji looked Heer who is silent. Prem breaking their silence 'Ma. Get ready. I have fixed the appointment for your check up with our family doctor.'

Teji 'you both have come here for the first time. So first you have both.' Prem interrupted 'your health is important more than anything.' Teji argued but Prem stubborn 'if you think me as your son come with us to the hospital.' Teji couldn't protest after that. Heer wondered the meaning of the statement told by Prem. But she is happy that her mother accepted for the checkup.

They went to the hospital. After doing few tests, doctor declared that surgery needs to be done immediately. Teji didn't accept. When the doctor said that the surgery is emergency and the delay may end her life. Heer become very sad. Prem made Teji to agree for the surgery again.

Prem face to filled with sadness not because of his MIL' emergency surgery but for the delay it brought taking Heer to the hospital. Actually, he planned to take Heer to the hospital after the checkup of her mother.

Now he has to wait till the surgery gets over. Doctors immediately admitted Teji. Prem felt he has done the mistake of taking Teji to the hospital. Prem thought 'I should have taken Heer first to the hospital, after finishing my work I should have done this.' He scolded himself 'stupid Prem, you failed in your first step.'

Heer more tensed needed a person to comfort but Prem lost in his own thoughts didn't give any attention to Heer. He is not even to bother to look at her.

Heer quickly dialled Gaya3. 'Ma' she cried. Gaya3 got tensed 'Heer, why are you crying?'

Heer with tears 'doctors admitted Ma. They are planning to do the surgery immediately. They says its emergency.'

Gaya3 'where is Prem?'

Heer lied 'he is talking to doctors.' Gaya3 'Heer, don't worry. We'll be there.'

Heer went to her mother. She sat sadly next to her. Nurses taking some final tests to Teji before the surgery. Teji touched her hand 'Heer, you got a very nice husband. So I'm happy even if I die now.'

Heer cried 'ma'. Teji touched her head 'God bless you my child. You will be happy forever.' Heer cried thinking her mothers word. She thought 'sorry ma for hiding the truth.' she asked to call Prem. Heer 'Ma, why you?' Teji stopped her 'I want to see Prem.'

Heer went outside to call Prem thinking 'he will not come to meet you.'
She saw he is restlessly standing in the corridor. 'Prem, Ma wants to see you.' Prem nooded and followed Heer into the room.
When Prem entered the room, Heer mother is ready to go to the operation theatre. Heer and Prem stood on her either side. Teji placed Heer hand on Prems. 'Prem, I believe you that you will keep my daughter happy.' Prem nodded and thought 'sorry I can't give happiness to her after one year. But I'll try to keep her happy for one year as per your words.' Teji gave her blessing to them.

She is taken to operation theatre. Heer in tears needed a shoulder to comfort. She sat in a chair in the waiting room. Prem sat next to her. He unknowingly put his hand around her to comfort her. She leaned on to his chest. Soon Lalit, and Gay3 joined them.

They all waited in the waiting room restlessly. Prem is still holding Heer closer. After 6 hours nurses started running in and out of the theatre. Prem and Heer got nervous. Prem got up to ask a nurse. Nurse answered with a worried face 'complicated more than expected.' Heer broke in Gaya3 hands.

Prem is pacing up and down thinking 'if something happens to her mother will Heer agree to continue the contract?'

After two hours, a doctor came out of the theatre and gave a sad look to everyone. Prem rushed to the doctor. Doctor pat his shoulder 'sorry Mr. Juneja. We tried to save her but. She is no more.' With that he walked away.

Prem stood in shock and confusion. Heer collapsed. Prem hurried to her and picked her up in his arms. He made her sit on the chair. Gaya3 splashed water on her face. Heer opened her eyes and noticed her mother body coming out of the theatre.

She rushed to the stretcher and cried. Prem held her by his shoulder and tried to console her. For the first time he felt her pain in his heart when he saw her tears rolling down Heer cheeks. His eyes become wet.

Prem handed Heer to Gaya3 'Ma, you take her to home.' Lalit and Gaya3 took Heer home. Prem finished the formalities. He informed Preet to bring Megher to help Heer. When Prem and Preet entered the mansion with Teji's body, Heer cried aloud. Prem's heart broke into pieces. Megher and Gaya3 try to hold Heer, but she is in uncontrollable state. She keep on shaking her mother's lifeless body and crying 'Ma, get up.'

Prem slowly moved to Heer. He sat next to her. He put his hand around her shoulder and pulled her into his arms. She leaned on to his chest 'Prem, why Ma did like this? Why he left me alone? I don't have anyone else in this world now. I'm alone.'

Hugging her tightly, Prem cried and whispered into her ears 'you are not alone Heer. I'm with you.'

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Edited by newt2007 - 15 years ago
Sukrutha thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
awwww.... poor heer
i think prem wil go close to her now
lovely update
SwathyS thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
now for what heer sacrificed her life it has no meaning
looking forward to see what happens in heer's life next
Edited by swa291 - 15 years ago
nehara thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey....
it was sad... y did she have to die???
nw heer is all alone... poor heer...
even though prem said he'll be there for her... will he??
i mean he has too... i hope he changes soon.... :D
cnt wait 4 the next update...
pls update soon.. :D
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Posted: 15 years ago
so sad :( it was gud part with emotions n thanxs for PM!!!!! cont soon plz!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey that was emotional update
felt sorry for heer
and i like the supportive prem
thanks for the pm
update soon

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