FF:PLAYBOY Shadi Ke Badh2 July 15 pg.98 - Page 7

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kamal_23

great




thnx 4 the pm



update soon


Kamal

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hay guys sorry for keeping u guys waiting.I just want to say that now that Spring break will start after tomarow i will be updating more often!!Heres the next chapter hope u enjoy!

Chapter 28

Prem was shocked to see Heer crying her heart out she did remember everything but she didn't want to admit it. Than Prem went up to her nad hugged Heer and Heer hugged Prem back. Heer's head was on Prem's chest and Prem's hands were one around her waist and the other around her shoulders. Heer's hands were on Prem's chest and she was crying so much that Prem's shirt was getting wet but Prem couldn't care less.

"Heer plzzz plzz don't cry we will go to England and teach that bloddy Rishab Rampal a good lesson and i promise you that he will be behind bars i promise." said Prem and that made Heer cry more. Seeing Heer cry this much made Prem start to cry. Than finally after a good 15mins. of crying Heer stopped and so did Prem.

Heer looked at Prem and said "thank you Prem" said Heer "why?" asked Prem "for beliveing in me not leaving me when i needed you the most" said Heer "Heer whatever happened wasn't your fault at all you didn't know anything about what or who RR really was so how can leave u" said Prem "but still th-" but Heer got cut of by Prem's hand that was on her mouth and Prem nodded in negative.

"Heer i have to tell u something very important" said Prem and Heer was listening "heer I l-" but Prem got cut off by the phone and he picked it up (Premeer were still hugging) "Hello" said Prem "Hello sir mai Shiv bol raha hoon" said Shiv Prem's assistant "hann Shiv bolo" said Prem "sir i have booked your tickets to got to England and they are for today at 6:00pm and for ma'm too so you guys will have to leave around 4:00pm i hope that's fine" said Shiv "that's perfect Shiv thank u soo much" said Prem "sir this is my job anyways bye" said Shiv "bye" said Prem and hung up.

"Heer my assistant booked our tickets to go to England today at 6:00pm" said Prem and Heer was feeling very scared at this moment that was clearly written on her face and Prem knew and said "Heer don't worry im always going to be with u he can't hurt u anymore" said Prem and that made Heer's fear run away becuase there was soo much honesty and determanation in Prem's voice thought Heer.

"Okay now hurry up and get ready" said Prem and Heer nodded and got up with Prem. Heer was done all of the packing by the time Prem came out of the bathroom and than Heer went in. When Heer came out she was wearing a beautiful pink sari with sliver shinning designs on it the blouse was short the back was a bit releviling but not that much and she went staright to the dresser and didn't even notice Prem sitting on the couch staring at her.

Than Heer was trying to put her mangalsuter on put couldn't she kept on tyring and trying but the hook wouldn't go into it's place. After w while Heer noticed Prem staring at her smiling "U know u can help me" said Heer looking at Prem through the mirror "ya i know i could but......i wont" said Prem smiling a bit more.

Heer just rollled her eyes and tryed putting it on and when she got sick and tired of trying she yelled "PRem HELP ME" yelled Heer came near her tied her mangalsutar. He also noticed that her dori wasn't tied either so he thought of tieing it for her and he did than he kissed her on the middle of her back that sent shivers down her spine.

"you look beautiful" whispered Prem into Heer's ear and that comment had caused Heer to close her eyes and blush a little. For some reason Prem had an urge to touch Heer to feel her to feel his body againist his.

NOTE FOR ALL: Hi guys i've been noticing that some ff's have copied my ideas from this ff plzzz dont do that i have seen this so many times that's why im saying this plzz dont copy off my work or anyone elses some of the ideas are mine but the place is different. If u guys want to use some of my ideas than plzzz ask me first and if u guys dont than i will stop writing this ff because i don't want people copying my work!!!I hope u understand!!!!

Plzz leave comments and i will update on Saturday!


Edited by -BabyCupid- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#63
me

wow i am the first one after a long time.............

it was very nice dear................... so happy to see that finally everything getting normal between now............... sorry ................ not normal...................... but abnormal romance😆 😆 😆

love greeshu
Edited by Greeshma.... - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#64
gr8 update!
so prem is starting to fall for her?
plz cont. soon...
thnx for the pm!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#65
super update dear.....
simply loved it.......what was prem abt to say???...
update soon buddy.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#66
Hi Harpreet,
Great job on your update. 👏
Thank you for PMing. 😃
I can't wait to find out how Prem will take care of Rishab. I hope he pays for what he has done to Heer.
I'm sorry to hear some people are copying your work. I hope that ends soon. I really don't want you to stop your FF just because some people loves to copy other people's work.
I look forward to your update on Saturday.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#67
gr8 update!
so prem is starting to fall for her?
plz cont. soon...
plzz pm the update
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Posted: 15 years ago
#68
Great part
Thanx for the PM
Cant wait for the next part
Hope whoever it is that's copying your FF gets the message now and stops
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Posted: 15 years ago
#69
Thanks for the update..
I luv the update...soo nice..
very cute scenes...
so does it mean Prem likes Heer??
Heer loves Prem??
Oh la la ...
Thnks for the pm..
please dont do anythin to the ff hope pple change their
ff and make new ideas...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#70
awesome


thnx 4 the pm


update soon


Kamal

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