FF - RISHTA II Part - 76(04/03) 147 UPDATED!! - Page 63

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Posted: 15 years ago
Prem has to come back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I thank you all of you for giving nice valuable comments.

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Originally posted by: harik

pls close this ff prem is died irts not good

u r cooking



thanks for your suggestion.


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Posted: 15 years ago
I believe so much that Prem didn't died
Plz don't close this ff
update soon
u already updated Kismat
plz update this ff soon

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Part - 65

Ten months later,

Heer touching her cheek remembered Prem's last kiss 'think about me.' tears rolled down her cheeks 'how can I forget you Prem. you told me 30 minutes. But still you didn't return.' she hugged his picture.

Heer came out of his room and saw Chahat. She is opening each room and calling out 'Papa where are you?' with tears she is searching her father in the rooms of mansion. It is her routine. She does this daily in the morning and after returning from school.

Heer and Preet tried to bring Chahat out of her shock but nothing helped. Finally Heer decided to change the place to bring Chahat out of her father's thought. Heer decided to move out of the city to concentrate on new venture.

Heer 'Dad, I want to move to Chennai.'

Lalit 'why do you want to go to an unknown place? You don't know anything about that city, language.'

Heer cut in 'that is why I want to go there. I don't want anyone to look at me with pity. If I move to Delhi or Mumbai most of the people know about me.'

Lalit and Gaya3 decided to accompany her as they don't want to send her alone to a new city. Heer, Chahat, Lalit and Gaya3 landed in Chennai airport. Lalit prayed 'Heer struggled a lot in her life. God, please help Heer to live peacefully in this city.'

In one of the busy road in Chennai, A man is yelling at his driver for not maintaining the car properly 'I have only 15 min now. I'm going to lose several crore business because of your careless.' A man wearing helmat came in a bike 'can I help you sir?'

Man 'I need to goto airport in another 15 minutes. In this heavy traffic It will take 30 minutes for me if I take a taxi from here.'

Bike man confidently 'I'll drop you in 15 minutes.'

Man surprised but got onto his bike to check his luck 'okay I'll give you any amount for that.'

Bike man 'just 50 rupees.' His bike fled towards airport. He reached the airport in 14 minutes.' Man is surprised 'you are really great.'

Heer, Lalit, Gaya3 and Chahat came out of the airport. Heer looked up 'God, atleast give Chahat a peaceful life.' The car arranged by Preet to take them to their house is waiting for them. Driver loaded the luggage. Lalit sat in the front. Gaya3 got into the back seat. Chahat followed her.

Heer is about to step into the back, she felt some unknown feeling in her heart. She sensed Prem's presence around. She is confused 'how it is possible? Why I'm feeling Prem presence after all these months. In a new city.'

A bike stopped in the next parking space. A man wearing helmat stopped the bike. A man got down from the back seat and handed him 50 Rupees. He handed over his visiting card to bike man and told him to meet him after a week. Man kicked the bike again and turned to leave.

Heer feeling Prem's presence whispered to herself 'Prem.'

The bike stopped behind the car. Heer looked at the bike. She cannot see his face as he is wearing helmat. Only thing which caught her eyes is the name written on the Helmet. It looked like a signature. 'R' in that made her thing.

He looked at his pocket and checked something. He thought 'why I'm feeling like some one calling me?' His thought was interrupted by horn from another car behind. He ignored his thought and again fled in the bike.

Heer's thought interrupted by Gaya3 'What happened Heer?'

Heer 'nothing Ma.' She got into the car. Heer thought 'I came here to give a new life to my Chahat but I'm feeling Prem's presence here. Will Chahat be happy here?'

Her eyes filled with tears 'I cannot forget you Prem but need to live for Chahat with your memories.' She came out of Prem's thought when the car stopped in front of a big mansion.

The mansion is like the one in Bangalore. Lalit and Gaya3 decided to take the room in the downstairs as Gaya3 has problem in her knees.

Heer and Chahat went upstairs room. Heer sat on the bed. Chahat 'Mamma, I want Papa's picture.' Heer opened the suitcase and took Prem picutre. she stared at the picture. her fingers touched his face. tears came out her eyes. She handed the picture frame to Chahat.

Prem is hugging Chahat and Heer on his either side. Chahat kept the picture on the bed side and stared for a while. she noticed tears in Heer's eyes. she wiped her tears 'Mamma, I'm with you.' Heer hugged her tightly.

Heer thought 'Prem promised me same thing but he left us now.' she cried hugging Chahat. 'you gave Chahat as a gift. Only for her i'm alive now.'

Lalit strictly ordered not to put any picture of Prem in any of the room. Only one picture is allowed in Heer Chahat room.

When Heer started working about opening new hotels and other business in Chennai, Lalit helped Heer. He now and then studied the details and helped her to prepare tenders and other documents in business. Chahat joined in a new school. She didn't check Prem in rooms but still cried in her sleep 'Papa.' Heer hoped that will also soon change.

Later Preet came to Chennai with Megher and Gungun to help Heer in business. Megher and Gaya3 managed household works while Lalit, Preet helped Heer to take care of hotel business. Preet still can't manage the business alone. He depended on Heer for each and everything as he was with Prem.

Two months later

Chahat opened her eyes and saw Heer staring at her. Heer 'Happy Birthday Beta.' She kissed her cheek. Chahat sat on the bed 'thanks mamma.' She kissed her mother back. Tears came down their cheeks. She looked at the picture frame in the bedside. She crawled on the bed to pick up the picture. she kissed his cheek. she kept it back. Heer and Chahat thought about last year birthday. 'Mamma, will Papa come today?' Heer hugged her tightly.

Heer wiped Chahat's tears 'Papa doesn't like to see tears from his cute princess.' Chahat nodded. 'Get ready fast. Dadu and Chachu are waiting for you. Chahat looked at Prem's picture. She kissed his cheek and went to washroom.

Heer picked up Prem picture. Kissed his cheek 'we miss you Prem.' and placed back, hearing Chahat coming out of the washroom. They went down. Chahat took everyones blessings.

Chahat don't want to celebrate with her friends as she missed her father. So as a family they decided to cut the cake. All gathered in the living room. Chahat came down wearing her birthday dress which is presented by her mother. She stood in front of the cake. Heer is standing on her right and Preet and Megher on her left. Lalit and Gaya3 are in the front. Gungun is anxiously waiting for her sister to cut the cake.

Chahat cut the cake as everyone sang 'Happy birthday'. She took a piece of cake and stared the cake. She remembered her last birthday with her father. She started crying silently. Tears rolled down her cheek. Heer knelt next to her. She hugged her. Both cried silently. Heer gently pulled her away 'Papa is looking at you from heaven. He is wishing you. Papa doesn't like to see his princess tears.' Heer wiped Chahat's tears. Chahat feeds cake to Heer then others. Hiding their tears all the family members fed her the cake. They had breakfast. Heer drove Chahat to school.

~~

Veera shouted 'Sagar, come down fast.' Sagar 'coming Bhabi.' he came running out of his room. Rohan, 4 year old boy laughed looking at Sagar. Sagar with a fake angry face 'why are you laughing at me dear boy?'

Sagar picked him up in his hand and kissed his cheek. boy in teasing smile 'you are trembling before Ma.'

Sagar 'who is fearing for your mother?' Veera standing with her hands on her hip 'are you coming to have breakfast or not?'

Sagar dropped Rohan down and both walked politely to dinning table. They sat as Veera served them breakfast. Nihal is silently eating.

Nihal is Sagar's elder brother. Veera is Nihal's wife. Rohan is their son. He is working in a small office and earns very little. That is not enough for Veera, who want to live lavishly. She likes to dress very grand and like to wear matching jewels around her neck. She wants a big house, car etc., but Nihal salary is hardly enough for their three times meal.

Sagar is Nihal's younger brother. He is not married. He works hard and earns lot. He works as a marketing executive from morning 9 to evening 5. From evening 6 to night 12 he works as delivery boy in pizza hut. He does any works comes on his way. He gives his entire earnings to Veera, who happily spends the money. He roams around the city to earn money in his bike wearing helmet. Rohan nick named him 'Helmet Chachu.' No body knows his face. Everyone identify him only with his helmet.

Nihal wants his brother to marry and settle. Sagar is not interested in marrying a girl. Totally he hates all girls even a baby girl. He never talks to girls except Veera that he cannot avoid.

Nihal laughed 'one year before you are flirting with all the girls who comes on your way. but you hates to see a girl now.'

Veera 'he is not interested in marriage then leave him. why are you bothering him?' but she wants him to marry her sister Visaka. So that Veera can keep them with her to enjoy his earning.

Sagar teased his babhi 'we are already tolerating one lady torture why do you want another?' Veera looked at him with a fake angry. 'next week Visaka is coming here.' Sagar playfully 'then I'm leaving this house.'

Rohan interrupted 'Chachu, I need your help.'

Sagar looked at him 'what help?'

Rohan 'today is my friend Chahat's birthday. I want to prepare a card for her but I don't have idea about the picture.' He looked at him with a defeated face. it showed him that he tried many time and failed in that.

Sagar shaking his left leg thought for a while. Rohan looked at Sagar face and his leg. 'Chachu, why are you shaking your leg like this.'

Sagar 'its my habbit I'll always shake my leg when I think about something.' Rohan thought for a while then he concentrated on his breakfast as he saw his mother coming towards the table.

After breakfast, Sagar went to Rohan room and he scribbled on a chat and gave it to him. Rohan is surprised to see the picture. 'It is very beautiful.' One teddy bear is hugging two teddy bears on either side, one big and one small. 'surely she will like it.' Sagar smiled. 'come I'll drop you in the school.' They moved out of the house holding hands.

~~

Heer dropped Chahat in the school. Chahat kissed her cheek. Heer kissed Chahat cheek 'Mamma has meeting in the evening so Chachi will come and pick you up.' Chahat nodded and waved bye and ran to her class.

Sagar came to drop Rohan. Heer car came out of the campus when Sagar bike entered the campus. Heer felt unknown feeling again in her heart. She whispered 'Prem.' and looked around. She couldn't see Prem around. Only thing caught her eyes again is the helmat and the name on it. She drove her car away.

On the other hand Sagar felt someone calling him in his heart. Rohan called 'chachu' which interrupted his thought. Sagar drove away after dropping Rohan.

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Whypadhu thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz frnd dont send this ff
plzzzzzzzzzzz iam waiting for this pdate everyday
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update the next part
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG!Prem became Sagar!! how? when? Oh! but how may times will Prem loose his memory! it is getting a bit irritating now!
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Posted: 15 years ago
excellent update
one suggestion
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz dont take any humshakal
premeer ko koi alag nahi karsaktha hai
sagar must be prem
iam sure he is our prem
thanks for update
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG Sagar is Prem. Update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
oh no!!!!
yeh 360 degree twist!!!!
arggh....!sagar...!Prem!!!
miss u prem...!

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