FF-Aa Bhi Jaa Ch:5, Pg-44, Dec-6

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Parisa

@XSilentPrayersX

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#261

Helloo Hi "Waves" 😆
So as Promised i am here 😉, YOu should seriously start Trusting me and taking my ADVICE 😳😉

As i got ur PM i was Surprised and seriously pinched myself to assure if its reality or a dream..cause an update from you is not less than the Eighth wonder of world...😆
Coming to the updtae...as told you already..i LOVED IT..Filled with Hotness and Surprises 😳
As Heer wore shreya's saree i was like Prem will blast her off for wearing shreya's saree 😆
yaha tu kuch aur hge hogaya 😲...

Kitchen scene was really HOT...i thougt heer was imaging Shreya...lol how stupid of mee with a twisted brain like you i should have understand it 😆...Poor Heer

It was Verry HOT and sexy 😉☺️😍😆 Loved it!!
I was surprised at the revelation...Mrs.Heer Prem Juneja..😲... and then i was to fell off chair with premm's FUN wala dialogue i was like seriously...Is this prem or am i seeing things 😆
I loved this side of prem..you know actaully there is always something Very Sexy about Angry Men...😆 it just turns you On...🤣...

With a cliff hanger like this you better Update soon...
and what about your Other FF... arent you suppose to update that as well??.

Take Crea
Love
Pari 😃😉😆

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NOOR

@Noor_PremHeer

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#262

Hey Di and Kavya 🤗

first of all THankyouuu sooo Much for dedicating it to me!! 🤗

ufff..it was sooo ☺️☺️☺️☺️

ap chahat ko yeh parha rahi hain..😲 haha..kidding..loved it..

woohhoo what a turn.. Heer Prem's wife.. Great..ab aye ga maza.. "Hell" mei😳 😉

wese when u Heer selected Red saree...i was kuch tou hoga agay... u know.. Ahem haem..hotty 😆

*bachi kharab ho gai*

why she left him🤔..

jaldi Di and Kavya update karein...

overall it was awesome!!

again thanx alot..

LOve ya Guys!!

ap ki Chahat😳

noorie!

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AASUS

@AASUS

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#263

wow an update

Index on page 1 is helpful, thank you.

Just wanted to mention page 24 and 36 both say ch.4. I kind of thought I missed one in between but it's just typo I guess. Edit if you like.

I really don't see the difference in writing style despite the gap in writing, it seemed like story has a nice flow.

From last ch. it seems like Prem knew Heer or about her from before.

Curious to know what actually made Heer leave her home & family 🤔

Chahat is very adorable & sweet. She is the star of the show.

If you are interested to write, then keep it up.

Thank you for the story.

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Vrushika

@Ms.Raizada

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#264

opps!!! late one.. hey sia di.. and kavya di.. sorry late reply..
i was not knowing this is updated.. and when this was updated i was having ma exams..
so chorry!!!!! and well.. this was a complete surprise.. i loved the update..
it was totally fabulous.. and hot!!! i have many confusions..
biggest one how is heer Mrs Heer Prem Juneja?
but i love this twist!!this is awesome.. first even i thoght prem considered her as shreya!!
but there it goes Mr prem juneja.. said.. it everything... too too too good..
that means chahat is heer's and prem's daughter??
and i love this prem juneja.. angry man.. and taking revenge.,.. aww.. total awesome
i m loving the twist.,. and that premheer romatic part was hot hot hot!!!!
prem is the best.. i love the way he forces himself..
now should i say please update soon..
coz kavya di to very busy.. and if u r also busy then who will update???
please please please update soon!!!!
pretty please.. cant wait for long...atleast not after reading this update!!!!
please please please update soon sia di.. and kavya di..
and i can bet there is going to be more premeer hot romance!!!!

loads of love.. take care..
keep smiling.. update soon.. thank u for a fabulous update.. love it..
and please add me to the pm list please!!!!!!!

loads of love
vrushika

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#265

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harshitideewani

@harshitideewani

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#266

awesomee👏 updatee sia and kavya di

pleasee update soon interstesting

just cant wait

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lub.harshiti

@lub.harshiti

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#267

this is getting super dramatic...update jaldi yar...it was totally thrilling

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sia

@luv_kdmhmd

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#268

Everyone, thank you for liking our stories so much.

Give us some more time and we will update it. 😃

Kavya and Sia

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Vrushika

@Ms.Raizada

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#269

we are waiting sia di and kavya di! do update soon!

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sia

@luv_kdmhmd

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#270

Guys, I wanted your opinion about an idea I have.

I wanted to post it on my creation page but as that is closed, so, I decided to post it here.

This idea is different from what I have written in the past. It may not be a typical lovestory. Prem and Heer will not end being together. But this idea was something I want to write about but I dont know if you would like to read something on these lines. So let me know if you are interested, bcos this idea is fresh in my mind and I want to share it with you all.

Thanks😃

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