FF-Aa Bhi Jaa Ch:5, Pg-44, Dec-6 - Page 29

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Posted: 12 years ago
Yesss ... Finally going 2 get an update for this one 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
All the best for it Sia.
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks dear ...eagerly waiting for the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
pls pls update soon
can't wait anymore now
pls
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Posted: 12 years ago
u said that u will update dis ff
now where is d update??????
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Posted: 12 years ago
wen will u update dis ff? 😒
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: luv_kdmhmd

Give me some time. I want to update this ff. I am very excited and motivated to continue it. 😃

now where the update 😔
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hello, everybody. We are back ;) Sorry for the delay in update but thank you for your lovely comments and support. So, here is the new chapter of Aa Bhi Jaa. I hope you all like it. Enjoy!

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Chapter-5

Prem rushes towards terrace. He was angry. Reaching there, he took a big breath to calm himself. But it didn't help. He was angry at himself. How could he let himself do it, and now, let the same effect him in this manner. He couldn't stop thinking about what just happened in his bedroom. And, the more he thought about it, angrier he became. He thought about Heer's smooth and soft body underneath him. Her familiar touch was still creating havoc inside him. Her full and pink lips ignited an inextinguishable fire within him. Her eyes still held power to hypnotize him. It was taking everything in him to control himself to not finish what he started, ravishing her till he is satisfied and had his fill. He yearned for her, his body wanted hers. Their lovemaking was always passionate, always satisfying them both in end. What he would not give to feel that pleasure again, to make her cry for him, moan for him.

Prem closed his eyes and took another deep breath. He decided not to feel this way. He won't fall for her again, for her tactics. At one point, he attributed everything related to Heer to innocence. Her body, touch, eyes, thoughts...everything was innocent, just like her. But how wrong he was! Now, he knows how scheming she is, and definitely he won't fall again into her trap.

She has a reason to come back. Heer does nothing without an ulterior motive. He has to know about it, and beat her in her own game. Heer, you wouldn't realize what hit you when I am done with you. Your interrogating time will start today, thought Prem.

He dials his mother's number and says when she answers his call, "Haan, Maa. How are you? And, how is Papa?" Receiving a positive reply from her, he replies, "Maa, I have decided to fulfill your wish. I am ready to marry again, and before you say anything, I want to tell you I have the right girl in mind as well. Chahat likes her too. Now, you two come back to India as soon as possible, and arrange a date for my marriage. I don't want to take any chances and lose her. I want my wedding date to be fixed as soon as possible."

His mother was happy that he finally decided to marry again, and asked him about the girl. "Maa, you will meet her when you come back. I can't wait to introduce you to her. So, another reason for you to catch the next flight available," said Prem. His mother told him that they will be in India soon, and asked is he happy? Prem smirked and replied, "You don't Ma how happy I am. I can't wait anymore to be with her. We are meant to be together. Rest when you come back. Give my love to Papa, and you too take care. Love you, Maa. Bye."

He came downstairs, and saw his bedroom door was still closed. Feeling her presence there, he thought, you will regret coming back. Heer, be ready to face new Prem. Chuckling, he went to the room of Chahat to relax a bit.

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Hope you all liked it. It's a bit short 😳 but something is better than nothing, right😉

Waiting eagerly for your comments.

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Take Care

Kavya and Sia

Edited by luv_kdmhmd - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
breaking news!!!!! you updated!!!! hahaha
but wat is dis yaar itna chota update...not fare :-(
nywz cuming to the update
its was short but interesting
hmm so now prem is planning to get married to heer...interesting!!!!
but pls ab zyada wait mat karwana...
want another update nd dat too a long one as soon as possible...plsss
it is more request than order plsss
thank u so much for dis short but rocking update
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved this ff..very interesting story..cant wait to know wt actually happened between premeer..y does prem hate her now???
n plz update soon...😊

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