FF:Kashmokash ll, Epilogue,pg 83, (1 March)

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aishwarya gayen

@aishwaryagayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#621

hey nehaaa m soo saddd i have a very good bond with this ff of urs
my first ff on desh forum
my god i feel like crying this is finally ending

but on a happy note
yaar awesummmm and grand epilogue

wooh hooo heer will ave tiw twi twinsss
aaww and the way these 4 laluu g3 and meet were fghting and premeer were relaxed was hillarious hahaha

and this preet cant make his wife agree haha asking help of lallu gadha kahin ka
lolz ketan made preet lost his mind hahahaah

lolzzz prem ot mein behosh nahiiiiii ye mera patii nahi ban sakta kyunkii ye daring nahii hai heer tu hi lele isskoo
u know maine ye baat dil pe patthar rakhke kaha
lolzl prem ki tie beti ke baal bete ki lace noo i wont have twinss nooo

oohhh deshinas ne dekh liya but i mind nha mere prem ko heer ka hone diyaaaaaaaaaa
nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

hahaha
awesum

tc
love
aishwarya gayen

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nspn.92

@nspn.92

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Posted: 15 years ago

#622

"Premmm sab dekh rahi hai "
Said heer, "Wow..Koi dekhlega se, Sab dekh rahi hai , Nice change" Prem said saracasticlly. "By the way kaun dekh raha hai'
Prem asked as he looked around but didnt find anyone near him, " Deshians" Heer whispered in his ears as she gigled
" Ahh...They wont mind, i am sure" Saying this he locked his lips with her, and kissed her lovingly. Loved these lines...😛

Awsome.

Edited by nspn.92 - 15 years ago

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greeshma

@Greeshma....

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+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#623

will edit after 2 or three days

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Whypadhu

@Whypadhu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#624

first of all thanks alot for beautiful update
and a extraordinary ff
i love it
really felt bad of this ff end
i cant feel good for my favourite ff end
but iam so happy for such a beautiful ending
prem ur the best son,brother,husband,brother-in-law,frnd and father
love u ummmmmmmmmmmmaaaaaaaaaaaa
ur a wonderful writer
plzzz start another fabulous ff for ur fans
thanks alot
thanks atonn
waiting for another awesome ff
thanks bye

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Neha

@Pumpkinn

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Posted: 15 years ago

#625

It was such a wonderful update ! 👏

I really loved it a lot !

The way whole family was fighting was soo cute !

Prem actually fainted in delivery room !

It was soo very funny !😆

I enjoyed every bit of it !

The last bit was just perfect !😉

I will really miss this ff !

But it ended in a happy note which is great !👏

It was fun reading this FF !

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mithalio

@mithalio

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Posted: 15 years ago

#626

beautiful neha, I loved this last line "desians" too funny

mithiya

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Paddo

@Heerbeauty

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+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#627

baapre baap..................tum ne kammmmmmmmmmmmal kar diya NEHA
ek kaam karo ek ff likhneki school khol do
I am sure bo school will be the best school.............
ha ha ha ha....................................
sachmooch My favourite ff and the ff that i first read Kashmokash is the best ff ,i always tell it...................
WHAT A HAPPY ENDING..............
I really liked it...............
SO nice,amazing,awesome,wonderful,mindblowing andwhat i can say...................................

This is the most beautiful ff i read................
Main to tumko update soon nehi kehsakti hoon leken yeh to jarror kahoongi keh make more ffs and make them like your this ff kashmokash i mean such nice ffs
Yeh ff sare jiban mujhe yaad rehega
Aur itni acche ff likhne keliyte Neha tumko mera "SALAAM"

So bye Kashmokash
Again thank you...........

From
your dearest friend
Paddo

Edited by Heerbeauty - 15 years ago

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saranya

@nehara

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+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#628

hey....
wow.... it was an awesome update...
i loved it.....
it was so cute the way the whole family was fighting over the colors.... he he...
and it was so funny... when prem fainted.... he he...
he actually did... i guess he couldn't handle it at all.... :D
and i love the happy ending... :D
i'm really gonna miss this ff....
pls do write more ff's....
cz i love ur work..... :D

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Maheen

@sweet_gurl93

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#629

hey
really nice ending, totally mind blowing

xx

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Dolly

@kptl

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Posted: 15 years ago

#630

its mind blowing...i couldnt stop laughing....luv ketan and preet convo... and da good prt was prem fainting..tat was hilarious.. its really a happy ending...luv it...wish this wasnt end...bt every good thing had to end one day...

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