FF:Kashmokash ll, Epilogue,pg 83, (1 March)

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Parisa

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Posted: 15 years ago

#601

Originally posted by: nspn.92
awww..That was reallly cute.😊

Loved the premeer scenes.

Only two parts left.....😭

Update soon...

Thanks for the PM.

Thank you so much...Glad you liked it..........😳
Only the last part is left...

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#602

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aww...its beautiful.....love it...and luv da caring and love showering side of prem...and luv gay3 too..shes perfect mother and mother in law....

Thank you so much...Glad you liked it..........😳

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Originally posted by: 0711rokxoxo
Hey....

Haan, haan... majboori hai tumhe nahi mar sakti cuz ur too sweet and an amazing writer... aur mujhe tumhari ffs bohot pasand hai....

Great update... I was laughing my heart out when premeer were fighting... very cute scenes...by the way I love the name Aarav...

Thnks for the update...

Pls continue soon...

Thank you so much...Glad you liked it..........😳
Thank you for understanding my Majboori...😆
Will try to update soon😛

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#604

Originally posted by: sonia7
hey awesome part thanks for the pm
why are u endidng the ff?

update soon

Thank you so much...Glad you liked it..........😳

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#605

Originally posted by: Heerbeauty
don't end this ff plzzzzzzzz....................
update soon

Paddo

I have to end this....😭

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#606

Originally posted by: premeer928
hey neha
amazing update...👏 loved the premeer scenes...so cute...😳 cant believe its ending...but at least its having a happy ending. continue soon...and thanks for the PM...😊

love
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Thank you so much...Glad you liked it..........😳
Will try to update soon😉

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Posted: 15 years ago

#607

OH MY GOD i cant believe this, this will be the last part of my FF, Seriously
at first i didnt expected such Huge Good response
for this FF. but you guys always supported me and always remained
Patient with Late updates(woh alag baat hai ki mee INBOX pms se bhar jaata
tha 😆)...I am feeling very emotional to say that It will be the last part
Hopefully i met your Exceptions.😳
LOVE YOU ALL 🤗
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#608

Neha yar update late karna but khatam mat karo na plzzzzz

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Hey guys Here is the last part..Dont be sad about it.
I am sure this update will Bring a smile on your faces. 😃

PART 44
"EPILOGUE"

There was no bound to Juneja's happiness as the doctor confirmed the news that
heer is expecting Twins, Especially Prem and heer, who were always arguing on
whether junior prem is on its way or junior Heer, have come to a commitment
that One will be boy and one girl, 50/50.....

With every passing day Heer's size and weight were growing more and more,
The babies were giving her a tough time, "badmaash bilkl apne papa ki tarha"
thats what she always said whenever her babies kicked her to demanded
something Sweet in midnight.

If premeer fights were not enough, Lalit, gayetri,Meher and preet also argued
about the new arrivals room decoration, cloths and toys.

~~

Lalit:- Mai barra hoona, tu sab mere baat manege, kamre ka colour Yellow he hoga
(lalit said putting his hand on his waist)
Gayetri:- Dekhiye mere baat suniye, mer potta, potte hai, is liye akhri faisla mera
he hoga kamre ka rang light green hoga........
Preet:- cheeee(making a face) No way Mom, No green, babies ka kamra hai, koi
garden nahii....
Meher:- Mai tu kehti hoon, Pink final kar lo, mai janti hoon Betee he hoge..
( dreamy sigh)
Preet:- Ha tumhara bas kare tu tumm yeh poora ghar Pink mai rangdo, Mai tu
pareshaan hogaya hoon is rang se, had hoti hai kisse cheez ki, Humare room
ka colour pink, Bed sheet pink, curtains pink, yaha tak ki humare toothpaste
bhii pink colour ka he hai......

Meher glared at preet, while premeer were sitting peacefully on a chairs across
the room and enjoying the there cat fight while gigling at them.

Meher:- Preeeet ...maine kaha na ..pink hoga, mai massi aur chachi donno hoo, is
liye Pink...
Preet:- Aur mai phopa aur chacha donno hoo, is liye Blue.........
Lalit and gayetri both stared from Meet and then to each other.

Lalit:- Tum donno apnee bachcho ki kamre ka colour select karna.....yeh humare
liye chod do..ha.....
Meher and preet both stopped fighting, and blushed .
gayetri:- bilkul, filaal yeh hume select karne do.......

Meher made a sad pout crossing her arms on her chest....

Preet:- dekha kardiya na naraaz mere aik lauti Biwi ko.......
Lalit:- Nalayak...tu jaaki manna usse....
Preet:- Waah..shopping karo app aur bill bharo mai, Narazz app se huei hai tu
apphe manawo...mai kyon manawo.........
Lalit:- (giving a killer look to preet turned to Meher) Meher puttar...
Meher:- mujh se baat kariye bauji......
Lalit:- puttar mere baat tu sun.....
Meher;- nahii bauji mujhe nahii sunna.....
Lalit:- Theek hai......Kamre ka colour Pink he hoga, Khush......
Meher turned happily towards lalit and hugged him " thank you bauji"
Preet:- maine manane ko kaha tha, Faisla sunane ko nahii......kamre ka colour tu Blue
he hoga....
Gayetri:- abb yeh pati aur patini ki beech ki baat hai, tum aur Meher donno appas
mai decide karlo.....

Meher:- is mai decide karne wali koi baat nahii... Pink is final....
Preet:- Blue is final
Meher:- Pink
preet:- blue..
meher:- Pink..
preet:- Blue
meher: pink....
Preet:- pink
Meher :- Blue............(suddenly realizes what she said)
preet:- Awww thanks meher, I love soooooooo much...(smiling devilishly and placed
a kiss on her cheek, while Meher was stunned)
Meher:- mere kehne ka yeh matlab nahii tha....
Preet:- mai samaj gaya tumhara matlab.........Final colour blue..Done, lock kardiya
jaye....(he said moving towards premeer who were laughing at them).

Meher:- nahii Jiju yeh galat baat hai.....isne cheating kiya....
Preet:- maine cheating kiya.....(making a dramatic face) Maine......Hey bhagwaan
yeh sunne se pehle mai..i mean tum gungee kyon nahii hogaye.....
Meher:- Aaaa...(her mouth making a perfect "O" shape) Gungee hoge mere
dushman, jaise ke Tum.....

Before they continue there fight and say any thing else, Heer interrupt in mid....

Heer:- BAS........Kitna bolte hoo tum donnno.....
Prem:- Mere bachcho ki hii kaanmai dard horaha hoga......Now keep silence....
Meher:-likin jij.....
Heer:- Silence......Decide mai karongii...
Preet:- My bhabi is great.....mai janti hoon woh mera he side legee....
(Meher looked at prem pleadingly)
Prem:- mai meher si side mai hoon........(putting his hand around her shoulder)
heer:- Ha tu kamre ka colour Pink aur Blue Donno honge, aik taraf pink aur
aik taraf blue......ab khush.............Now no arguements......

~~
After that the final decision made by Heer, the room was decorated well with
Blue and Pink colours, Day after day the babies kicked heer hard and harder
that sometimes it made her cry But prem was always by her side, It was the first
time he was living with a preganant lady,

When kulraj was preganat prem was really busy with work and office, he never
knew about craving, kicking, and mood swings, and now he is experiencing it. when
first time the babies kicked, prem got very nervous and worried, he was running
from here to there and calling for Doctor, thats when Heer told her its Normal.

Everybody knew that Prem Juneja is also a Wonderful Football player, But it
seemed like his kids is all ready to give him a tough computation.
~~

It was in afternoon when Heer's labor pain started, they all took heer to
Hospital, Whole juneja family was present in Hospital, from lalit to Ketan.
They all were praying and waiting for the good News, when Prem and heer
were both inside the Delivelry room.

Ketan:- Mamma yeh cesarian kiya hota hai...???
Kulraj:- tu yeh sab kyon poch raha hai, chal jaa waha aur ja kar bait chup karke......
Ketan came and sat on the bench beside preet,
Ketan:- mamu aik sawal pochcho......
Preet;l- ha poch....
Ketan:- Yeh Cesarian delivery kiya hoti hai.....???
Preet wass shocked at his question....
Preet:- tumse kisne kaha yeh.......
Ketan:- woh waha par.......aik doctor us addmi(pointing towards a man) se kaha
ki Unki wife ki Cesarian delivery hogi, Normal wali nahii..........Tu yeh cesarian
kiya hoti hai..??
Preet:- W..woh... Woh..jab Stomach ko cut karke baby ko bahir nikalte hai, tu
usse ceserion kehte hai...(Preet explained with great difficulty)
Ketan:- achcha...tu phi Normal Delivery kaise hoti......
Preet's eyes shot open at him, this 13 years boy was making him speechless...
Preet:- mu...mujhe kiya patta.....mai kabhie ,,maine kabhie......maine kabhie
Delivery de nahii haina....
Ketan:- Uff mamu app tu bilkul bodhu hoo......boys thodhi na babies ko dunya mai
laate hai yeh tu sirf Woman power hai.......
Preet:- chup kar........height dekho aur baatien dekho..........

That was when the doctor came out of the Delivery room with a worried face,
they all got up nervously and went towards the doctor....

Gayetri:- doctor .kiy baat hai, sab theek tu haina....
Meher:- Heer DD aur unki bachche theek haina.......
Doctor:- Ji Heer aur unki bachche tu theek hai, likin aik choti se problem hogaye hai.......

~~~~~

He was opening his eyes slowly, everything was blur in front of her, as he tried
to hold his head up he fall back on his bed holding his head. Trying to gain his consciousness when he felt a hand on his shoulder. "Preet" he said as he view got
cleared.

Preet:- Ji Prrrrrrrreeeeeeem bhaiya................
That was it... he heard a roar of laughter, As PREm got up and sat on his bed he
saw his whole family Surrounding him and laughing catching there stomach.

Prem:- Is mai hasne wali koi baat nahii hai.........(he said making a face)..He.heer
kaha hai..woh theek tu hai
Preet:- bh....bhabhi bilkul theek hai......ba kuch he der mai hum unse mil sakti hai..
(he said trying to control his laughter) muje laga tu tha mera bhai bare he DAring hai......appne tu mere aak katwadi...App OT mai biho.....oosh hogaye.......
Prem:- jab tere baare ayegee tu pochoinga mai...........ab app loog please hasna
band karinge.....

Nurse:- App logg Ab patient se mil sakte hai......(the nurse entering the room)

Prem got up excitedly and went to Heer's room ,while they all decided to wait a
little then they will meet heer and the babies, Prem entered heer's room, She was
lying on bed, eyes closed, while two bassinet was placed near her bed.

He went towards Heer first, as he tucked her hair strands behind her ear, She
opened her eyes, Flashing a warm smile to him.She brought up her right hand to
his forehead, on the small plaster on his forehead, which was because he fall on
the floor, his forehead got a hurt.

"dard horaha hai" heer asked in a concerned tone, "Nahii" He said back kissing
her hand, she smiled as she remembered the incidence in Delivery room.
" tum bhii ..." he said making a face.Heer bit her lower lip to control her laugh
and looked at the Bassinet.

Prem got up from heer's bed and went to pick up His Babies in his arm, He
picked up the first baby in a soft blue blankit. He was very careful, as he
picked up the babay" Yeh mera beta hai" Heer said proudly as Prem kissed
the baby on forehead. He gave the baby Boy to Heer.

Prem picked up second baby in his arms inwrapped in a pink blankit. "Yeh
mere betee hai" He said kissing her on forehead as his heart filled with
love and affection for them. He fellt as he was the happiest man on earth,
His love gave him The most precious gifts of his life. The symbol of their
love.There love.

HE sat nest to heer on her bed, and placed a kiss on her forehead whispering
"Thank you" as he witnessed these whole Nine months, Heer accepting all the difficulties and more over than those nine months those Hours of delivery,
His heer has gone through so much to give him these little angels for which he
always longed. The respect and love for his Heer has grown up high and limitless.
Their eyes brimmed with tears of joy.

Soon the whole family entered the room, they all were happy , They held the
babies with one by one.Although it was too early to say that like whom the
babies look. but still they were arguing on it.

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6 YEARS LATER

They all were living a tension free live, Enjoying every bit of it, While prem
and Heer were busy with there kids, payal and shiv, The symbols of there love,
Preet and Mehher were also happy in there life with their 4 years old Boy Meet,
Naina was pregnant and living happily with her hubby Aditya, while Ash and
Armaan were just happy being together.

After the new angels arrival, Harman and prem's relation also got better, prem forgaved him whole heartedly. Harman also got married with a girl, chosen by his bhabhi, Sia and harman was also happy in there live, It was an arrange marriage
but soon they started loving each other, everything was going smooth Except one
thing.

"Heeeeeerrrrrrr" Prem screamed, "Mammmaaaaaaaaa" The two 6 years old
Angels also screamed for her mamma, "Arahai hoon baba..arahi hoon.....saara
ghar sar utha liya hai tum teeno ne" Heer came up, it was a routine for her
since Her children joined school.

"Mamma mere Chotiya kaun banyega?" Payal said holding his hairs.
"Aur mere jootho ki lace kaun bandiga" Shiv said struglling with his shoes.
"Mere tie kaun theek kariga" Prem said standing behind her.

"Hey Bhagwaan, Mai kiya kiya karo, Payal idhar awo..." Heer made her plaits
and then went towards shiv to tie his shoes lace, "achcha ab tummm donno
neechey jawo nashtaa karo, Meet ki saath, massi ne khana laga diya hai" said
heer as there her sweet angels run towards her placing a good bye kiss on her
ckeeks, grabbing there scholl bag rushes downstairs. Heer smile and got up.

Now it was her BIG baby's turn, Prem's turn" tum bhii na prem aik tie theek
se nahii pehin sakte" she said adjusting his tie, "Mai teen teen bachcho ko
nahii sambhal sakti" His tie was done now, "I am sorry mamma likin kiya karo,
tumhare bina mera koi kaam nahiii hota" He said in a babyish tone, "achcha ab
chalo, office ki liye late ho jawoge aur bachche bhii" Heer was about to walk
away when Prem grabbed her wait and made her turn to face him.

"Prem, chodhona, Tumhe deree horahi hai" Heer said trying to free herself
from his grip, "Mere Good bye Kiss mamma" He said with a naughty grin, Heer
knew he wasnt going to late her without getting his kiss.Heer brought his face
closer to him, And when prem was about to kiss her, "Premmm sab dekh rahi hai "
Said heer, "Wow..Koi dekhlega se, Sab dekh rahi hai , Nice change" Prem said saracasticlly. "By the way kaun dekh raha hai'
Prem asked as he looked around but didnt find anyone near him, " Deshians"
Heer whispered in his ears as she gigled

" Ahh...They wont mind, i am sure" Saying this he locked his lips with her, and
kissed her lovingly.

And they lived Happily Ever After 😆
THE END
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Since it was the last UPdate of this FF
i want Long Comments.And just wanted to tell you all That
I LOVE YOU
ALL..
Neha

Edited by Additi... - 15 years ago