[FF] Thoda Thoda Pyaar [Part 6 Pg 12][14th April] - Page 8

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hello beautiful people! 😃 I hope you've been doing good!

Anyway, this is just a little note to say that I'm on hiatus, which you must have probably figured out by now, and the next part will hopefully (*crosses fingers*) be up by May, because the essays and assignments are like, due two weeks after one another, and we have such heavy readings for Classical Lit (Oedipus, Odyssey, Aeneid, Plato's Republic, shizz like that...*sighs*) and I have no idea why I'm even on when I'm supposed to have read The Aeneid by tomorrow and what was I saying? Oh yeah. Hiatus. Next part up in May. Hopefully I'll have a oneshot out soon, I don't know why I'm saying that when I don't even have any ideas, but if Ravjot approves then there shall be one up...in a while! :D

Anyway that was a total waste of space, so...have a wonderful next two months!

Love,
Bhav (:
Posted: 15 years ago
#72
Sure. Update the month I'm getting ready for finals vs. the week I have off. 😛

Joking di, don't worryyyyyy your pretty lil head off. We'll survive. :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#73
WILL EAGERLY WAIT FOR ALL UR UPCOMING MEET STORIES😆
THANKS FOR THE NOTE😊
BY THE WAY PLZ TELL ME WHAT IS HIATUS❓ THE CLASSICAL LIT WHICH U MENTINED IN UR NOTE,R THEY ALL FORMS OF DANCE 😕


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Posted: 15 years ago
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^^ A hiatus is basically a break. 😆 Ohh and really? 😲 That is pretty cool! They're also ancient texts that we have to study. :D
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Posted: 15 years ago
#75
Thanx for the note
Good luck with your work load
Uni really sucks sometimes
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Posted: 15 years ago
#76
I barely get on now too...my laptop broke. P.S. did you deactivate your facebook?
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Posted: 15 years ago
#77
@ Shabz: I've got no doubt about that...😆
@ Aaliyah01: OMG tell me about it! *sighs*
@ Tasha: Oh gosh! That sucks! =( Yep I did...It was getting WAY too distracting...*sighs* I turned on my laptop to do my work and wound up on FB...*shakes head*
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Posted: 15 years ago
#78
@ Meera: You didn't unreserve. *pouts*

Originally posted by: tadashi

I loved it! it was a long part! yay! So Preet remember's meher's apartment? She must have really left an impression!😉

Of course she did! 😉😆

My favorite part has to have been the comment on gayathri! haha tyrannical saas! and then meher 's side note on only watching one, two, or a few shows 😆😆😆
That was my fave part too! 😆
Why was heer late? was she doing something naughty?Does she already have a boyfriend? but that part was priceless- heer climbing up a pipe!
Oh it's nothing that scandalous...she was just held up at work. 😆
I am going to finish apkgk so I can pick out the part but I suspect it is the pipe part?😳
Yep definitely! *gives Tasha a cookie* :D
So you can't update for a while? that is totally understandable! i am always on this site now and i should be studying! Anyways, do you think you can update rab ne banadi jodi once before you go on hiatus? pretty please???😳
Eeks. Rab Ne is...probably...not...gonna be updated...*hides*
Oh and good luck with your driving test! Do you have to memorize like all the laws and give a written portion and then the driving portion or just driving? Are you in the U.S?
I remember my driving test...I have no idea how I passed. 😆
I failed! :D I've got another one on the 6th of May...Nope I'm not in the US!
please tell me what you think!😳
I loved it! :D
cheers,
tasha



@ Radz: You didn't unreserve either. *more pouting*

Originally posted by: monaghosh

FANTASTIC UPDATE,UPDATE MORE MEET MEHER AND PREET SCENES AS SOON AS POSSIBLE,THANKS A LOT.
Thanks!


Originally posted by: Aaliyah01

Absolutely great part

Aww thanks! :D

Ah so Preet remembered Meher's apartment
Of course he did! 😉😆
It will be interesting to see how the dynamic of Meet's relationship will change
OMG it is SUCH a truckload of fun writing them! :D I'm pretty psyched about the progression of their relationship! 😳
Thanx for the PM
Mention not ji! :D
Cant wait for the next part, however long you may be away for
Guess what! 😲 The next part will be up in a bit! :D
Good Luck with your driving test!
Thanks! I failed though. 😆 I've got another one on the 6th of May!


Originally posted by: blueocean_787

loved your FF...
Thanks! 😳


Originally posted by: urworstnitemare

Boo!...I don't read this fic...I haven't read it I mean. LOL.
Aww... =(


Originally posted by: shabo24

Di, the one thing I LOVE about your stories is just setting you set up, it seems so real. Amazing. I loved this part, I can't wait to see the budding PH romance and the fighting of Meet to come. Ahh take your time, school starts when TOMORROW RIGHT?
Aww gee thanks! I love your comments! *hugs* School is now ending in two weeks. 😕
--shabz


Originally posted by: urworstnitemare

i can't get myself addicted to another one..*wails...I just...CAN"T! *runs away 1!!!
Not even mine? =(


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Posted: 15 years ago
#79
Hello hello! Surprised to see me? Yep, so am I! 😆 Anyway, I decided to write part six out bit by bit whenever I was bored, so that's why I'm here now! It's another short part, but I hope you guys like it! Enjoy!

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Thoda Thoda Pyaar

Chapter Six

Preet reached out and took his third laddoo from the plate on the coffee table, stuffing the whole thing into his mouth and closing his eyes at the delightful explosion of flavour within the mithai.

"Thoda humarey liye bhi toh chodo," Prem deadpanned.

Preet opened his eyes, surprised to find that his parents, his brother and Balraaj Uncle were all looking at him, amused. He swallowed and grinned sheepishly, running his hand through his hair. He was thankfully saved from explaining himself, though, as Teji Aunty led Meher and Heer honewali-Bhabhi out. (He would make sure that Heer was his Bhabhi, even if it meant threatening Prem. After all, having Meher as his sister-in-law's sister would simply be too much fun to pass up.)

The company rose to greet Heer. Preet reached out for another laddoo, but Lalit smacked the back of his head, and, making a face, Preet set the laddoo back down and stood up.

Having witnessed what transpired between father and son, Meher snickered.

Preet noticed, and he scowled, turning red.

Meher smirked back at him as Teji introduced Heer to the Junejas.

Preet made a face at her.

Meher responded by rolling her eyes and perching on the arm of the couch that Teji and Heer had settled into. Pointedly ignoring Preet, she instead turned her attention to her honewala-jijaji, taking the time to study him further.

She was rather surprised by what she saw. Pavan - no, wait...Arjun? Karan? She frowned. What was his name again? Dev?

"...Prem beta,..."

Prem! Right. Prem was rather red, looking down at his hands. He eyes kept flickering to Heer Didi, though, reminding Meher of a sharmaaye-ing ladkiwali. Amused, she turned her head to look at Heer, who was doing the same. She bit her lip hard, trying not to laugh. They were so cute! She had to do something!

"Maa," Meher said, interrupting some conversation that she hadn't even been listening to, "um, hum inn dono ko akele mein baatein karne dein?"

Both Prem and Heer instantly turned a similar shade of tomato-red, neither of them looking up. (Although from the look on Prem's face, he seemed awfully glad that Meher had suggested that.)

"Arre...lekin..." Teji stuttered, looking from Heer to Prem to Heer to Prem to Heer to Meher, who looked back at her mother innocently.

"Arre, Teji, tum bhool gayi, kya, ki humne bhi akele mein baatein kar lit hi?" Balraaj commented, causing Teji to blush furiously and mutter a barely-audible "Aap bhi na".

Lalit laughed, and Gayatri smiled.

"Bhabhi," Gayatri said, "agar dono akele mein baatein nahin karenge, toh ek doosre ko pasand kaise kar lenge?"

Teji still seemed rather reluctant to let her daughter alone with her husband's best friend's son.

"Maa, agar aap chaho toh main bhi unke saath jaa sakti bhoon," Meher suggested, deliberately ignoring the glare that Heer shot her way.

"Theek hai," Teji finally conceded, glancing apprehensively at Prem.

"In that case main bhi jaaoon?"

Everyone turned to look at Preet, who smiled brightly. Meher frowned, pursing her lips.

"Tum kyun jaaoge?" Lalit asked, voicing the question that was on all their minds.

"Arre, jab PB aur Heer Bhabhi - " (Heer blushed at being called that) " - akele mein baatein karenge, toh Meher ko bhi occupy karna hoga, na?" Preet asked, hiding a cheeky grin.

"Maine apna naam kahaan bataya?" Meher muttered darkly.

"Theek hai, theek hai, jisko bhi jaana hai, jaao," Balraaj announced.

Meher grabbed Heer's hand and pulled her up, leading her to the study, letting Prem and Preet follow behind.

Teji looked after them, trying her hardest to not get up and follow them.

-|end of chapter six|-


Comments and criticisms are very much welcome! =D


Love,

Bhav (:

Edit: Radz, I wish you hadn't asked me to edit it, but thanks. 😛

Edited by sourpuss - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#80
erm, B, you might want to reread and edit it. lol.

other than that - Preet is awesome.

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