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hey i loved your one shot

Hey

It was Awesome...........as usaul..i was waiting for your One-Shots
since a very long time..............Quite late update..but It was worth
the wait.......................Loved it................


Luv
Neha

Awesomeeeeeeeeee Updateeeeee⭐️
loved it Ash
awesomeee

Beautiful os !

a very fantabulicious and romantic oneshot Ash.........⭐️

😆😆😆 aree ash 2😡😆 u know na im so lazy 😆😉

Hii baby😳
* plz guys dont think any thing else, these days im so used to talk to aqsa and fats baby which they dont actually and annoy them so much*
And so sorry for editing late. REaly am. But kya karoon lazy hai na😆

I have already told ya that this is very nice , and i loved it.😳
I do realy.

I think i have told yuh earlier too that im so in to dialogues than the scenes so thanks for writing more dialogues to explain the situations.😊 And i know u were realy confused yesterday when i was explaining the whole scene.

Good start. Than god u have come to the story directly other than roaming me around with the environment. hehe
And my most favorite scene is where heer is asking for the reasons or asking him to justify him self why he left her and all. The dialogues were used there was awesome. 😃
and like the place where prem is justifying him self coz i realy felt what u wanted to say in there.
And the last part was damn cute.😆 Where they had a bit romantic lines.
And i this is the most romantic OS of urs so far. I know its only coz of amreen * dont evn remind her to me*😡
And like to take the oppertunity to compliment u about the vocabulary lol. Well written and got to learn some new words. Thanks for that.
Last but not the least it was a very sweet and great OS which i highly enjoyed reading it. * actually twice*😊😊
Edit-
Haye ram main kya aur bolu tujhe?? By the way baby is my word and u are not permitted to use it even for me hmph😳😆😉
I forgot to add that when i was reading this i thought of the name Surprise or new year gift. But im happy that u came up with blind fold😆 * sorry i already told yah when i was chatting but couldnt mentioned it over here. I hope u will add more romantic scenes for me next time other than amreen's parts😉
And dont u dare say it again that u r not a romantic OS writer coz actually u r 😃😃
And at last wanna say this is a beautiful OS😳😳😳

Originally posted by: Additi...

Hey

It was Awesome...........as usaul..i was waiting for your One-Shots
since a very long time..............Quite late update..but It was worth
the wait.......................Loved it................


Luv
Neha

Thankss, glad u lykd it