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Sunshine

@SunShine_A

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: nuptalie
Hi mobzzzzzzz
Missed u so much
Mwaah
🤗

Aqsa this feels like our chatties now😆😆😆

Meri taraf se bhi🤗 more hugs than mani tht mns i missed you more😛😛

well darling seriously missed you lyk anythng n our rocket gang

well mani madam I have no probzz its my place for my frnds so you guys can transform it into CC too😆😆, I will not mind you know naa hw sweet and pyaari bacchi I am !!😃😃

Edited by Ashlesha09 - 15 years ago

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amreen

@Cutydevil

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: Ashlesha09
I will kill you surely I will murder you iof u soon don't unreserve😉😉

😲 😲haila...pehle edit kiya baad mein dekha..*bachaooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo*😆 😆 😆

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amreen

@Cutydevil

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: Ashlesha09
Meri taraf se bhi🤗 more hugs than mani tht mns i missed you more😛😛

well darling seriously missed you lyk anythng n our rocket gang

well mani madam I have no probzz its my place for my frnds so you guys can transform it into CC too😆😆, I will not mind you know naa hw sweet and pyaari bacchi I am !!😃😃

wah itne hugs distribute ho rahe kuch mujhe bhi dedo.😆

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Sunshine

@SunShine_A

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: mireen19

wah itne hugs distribute ho rahe kuch mujhe bhi dedo.😆

Hamesha kuch na kuch maagnti he rehti hain😛😛

anyways fr u though I m still gussa on you but its fr a reader whom i dedicated my fav shot, don't knw why i hd😲😲😆😛

🤗

Edited by Ashlesha09 - 15 years ago

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saranya

@nehara

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#105

hey ashlesha.....
thanks 4 the pm....
i really liked it....
pls write more ..... :D

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SongsOf_Silence

@SongsOf_Silence

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#106

hey ash! 🤗 okay so i really liked ur one shot!! 😃😃😃 i especially loved the romantic part ☺️ *fans herself frantically* tht was way too hot! n i mean it! ☺️ it was really nice reading tht first she was overwelmed with different emotions tht coarsed through her upon feeling him... the desperation in her to feel him all at once and then belatedly realising the reality of the situation tht he was back after two long years was quite endearing n then the way she cried out her misgivings to him of how much she had missed him and questioned him tht y did he leave her was really good⭐️and then his explanation of everything.. i had a lovely time reading it and u did a great job.... i wld like to point out one thing though if u dunt mind 😳 wenever u write dialogues na so do put punctuation marks coz it makes it easier to differentiate between the dialogue n the sentence... like it shows where the dialogue has finished😊 pls dunt mind em just sayin this coz it will enhance ur writing more😊😊 otherwise it was really good! keep it up n do pm me wenever u write another one 😃😃

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hiba

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Sunshine

@SunShine_A

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: premeerrock
hey ash! 🤗 hey Hiba okay so i really liked ur one shot!! 😃😃😃Thanks i especially loved the romantic part well expected☺️ *fans herself frantically* tht was way too hot! n i mean it! ☺️well thankss dear it was really nice reading tht first she was overwelmed with different emotions tht coarsed through her upon feeling him... the desperation in her to feel him all at once and then belatedly realising the reality of the situation tht he was back after two long years was quite endearing n then the way she cried out her misgivings to him of how much she had missed him and questioned him tht y did he leave her was really good⭐️and then his explanation of everything.. i had a lovely time reading it and u did a great job....well thankss again even fr the frst tym I lykd my wrtng n its my fav shot so far i hv wrtn, well wanted Heer to live few priavate moments before she comes in reality and wanted to make it a perfect blend of emotions n romance n i guess i did nyc job😛 i wld like to point out one thing though if u dunt mind 😳 wenever u write dialogues na so do put punctuation marks coz it makes it easier to differentiate between the dialogue n the sentence... like it shows where the dialogue has finished locked it, will do it next tym😊 pls dunt mind em just sayin this coz it will enhance ur writing more😊gosh hiba whts thr to mind even i myself sumtyms confused b/w them so thankss fr telling😊😊 otherwise it was really good! keep it up n do pm me wenever u write another one 😃😃 well glad u lyk n will surely

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hiba Ashlesha