|| Ashlesha's Assets ||* Eternal Journey * PG 61 - Page 7

Originally posted by: MoBiX

areee geet2 is that u who wrote it 😲 it was so short as compared to ur previous shots😆 but still loved it alot 😳 Yeahh madam i wrote it, I know even I too ws shocked

but i didnt undersrand that smexy part 😆

it made me go 🤣

coz at first i didnt undestand what u meant but when i read mani's comment then i understood what u meant u meant sexy 🤣chalo samjhi toh🤣🤣🤣

and about dis OS I liked heer's character 😉Ohkk yeahh as bored wth seedhi saadi Heer

and as always u wrote it baeutifully😳👏Thankss, Glad u lykd it

and Ashlesha was calling heer 100 times in a day telling her about preet 😆

is that Ashlesha is u in this os?😆no madam u better knew by nw tht its ashpreet nt me , stupo

😆

and ur exams finished too mine also finished so lets celebrate🥳yeahhh but myn wr disastrous

Originally posted by: nuptalie

Love u too darling 🤗awwww🤗
Il comment now it self coz i normally forget to comment , U know my temperary memory loss hehe
By the way yeah i promised you that il comment after u posted ur OS😆
Are tum toh meri peeche padgayi hai length ki baat lekar..hehe haan toh kyun naa padhoon, u always did ths to me😭
Yeah il tell u now that i like medium size OS s okk theeke hain fyn, ab mat padhna😡
coz easy to read and can remember what u read in the begining coz normally what happens when its lengthy is u forget what are u even reading also in the end..hehe * no offense to any one*
Every one has its own taste and this is me hehe no length don't matter fr me its content as if its good i would luv go on readng n raedng n phrooling😍
Okk coming back to ur os I have told yuh also this is my kind of story .. a bit cheezy, childish * the charactors* , romantic , interesting story ..
So i liked it.. ohkkkkk Chalo madam ko kuch toh accha laga😛
and ur smexy part make go 🤣 I didnt tell u before but it was a bit u know hahaha .Lol sexy is not a bad word , u can use when its needed.. Ok bachcha😆noo but i lyk smexy ovr sexy, bit sophisticated
And i liked how Heer talked to prem coz normally Prem is the one who talks like that but its great to see heer talking like that . fpr ur kind info aqsa madam this is about a comparison about serial prem and heer with ur OS prem and heer😆😆😆 and wanna add how heer talked about what could be the consequences occur if she didnt come on that day. and all ...I like that point of view coz its kinda real scenario😊 thankss, i knw tht why want to mae dffrnt n did it *dancng on chair*
and dude u can romantic stuff too even though u think u cant ..
So overall this is my fav among all of ur oss.. ohkkk i m overwhelmed, hope i won't gt heart attck aftr seeing such kind words frm u

Originally posted by: maha_k

hi finally i am here to edit lol Atlast🤣

hmm another awesommm os.👏👏 just loved the start dear Thankss, glad u lykd it

the way you explain the whole atmosphare was great.love and love birds every where😳😆yeahhh love is in the air

but i am confused again it was a day or night lol😆i wanna read it once again.so making bahans😆😆ohkkk i won't mind so read as many time as u want but it ws nght😆😆 as in mid nght

it was short hmm but really really nice.heer was quit different na and prem like always 😍 perfact.hmmm ws bored off same stuff😃

and rajeev😲😆😆 loved the line 'shadi karni hy ya nhi' was really cute na.

and and the end.was cute and romantic yar

overall it was an amazing OS 👏👏Thankss
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
you know i hate all kind of rajeev or rajveer type names😆😆well evn me too but kya karoon pickd Shahid of Ishq Vishq n thr it ws rajeev only, but i lyk rajveer sort of Prince names😆😆
our prem is better😳😆i know i am writing nonesense.khair leave
as i wrote before OS was aweommm dear(but i liked previous two more compare to this😃)but it was short simple and sweet.👏I knw u hv told ths n tyms but will gve u the next whch u wanted
👏heer was angry on prem the way she behaved was cute but prem easily calm her super prem in his own style😆 but i think you should add some rose or chocolate part there hmmmmmmm but you know better😃nahi re it would be so common thn its our prem style, a unique n innovative n ☺️
in last it was damn romantic hehe☺️ loved that part😳evn i luvd wrtng it n thnk God u lykd it n didn't demand fr more😳
overall it was really good dear so cute and so simple👏👏Thankss again
love
maha Aqsa

Originally posted by: v_nikhita18

wowwwwwwwwww

fabulous shot as usual.....loved the way you described everything..... Thankss, glad u lykd it

yeah it was short compared to your standards! I knw but tried sumthng dffrnt😆

but still......loved it.....👏

keep writing!

and thnx for the pm! i definitely don't find them infuriating! I knw but stll confrmng

Originally posted by: mireen19

aqsuuuuuuuuuu😲 😲 😲Ammiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii is tht u...tumne yh shot likha haan jee i wrote it OMG pehle mujhe parts mein read kerna padta kaamchor😛

tha but yaar this time ek baar mein hi read ker liya...😆 😆bravo bravo👏...awsummmmmmm n my fav too among all of urs shots arey thanku but itni jaldi fav chng😲...kiya baat hai tu

kab se mere or maha ki terha sochne lagi premeer ke bare mein..😉 😆nahi jii nt lyk maha, madam is damn senti about thm n u very naught n wild only i m the decent one..u express everything so beautifully👏 👏Thankss..n ya yh smexy kyun sedha sexy kyun nhi.bcoz i lyk smexy more😆 😆 luved heer mujhe abhi recent wale premeer ke scn wali heer yaad aa gayi.whch scene?😕..n prem was perfect no doubt😳well he is always..abhi mujhe or read kerna tha yh shot short kyun likha dear tried new thng kitna acha hai n aise shot ache lagte hai mujhe samjhi jee madam samajh gayi... abhi mere liye likh aisa hi😳 😳 will see depend on mood😛😛 lekin length teri wali honi chahiye this time...😆 ok...acha ha mujhe bhi puchna hai it was day or night..reason same hai bhai wala..😆 😆 😆 😉 😉.. it ws nght night night n night

again fab shot keep up the gud work👏 👏 n no more sad endings😆thankss dear

luv

amreen Aqsa

Originally posted by: Innocent02

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