|| Ashlesha's Assets ||* Eternal Journey * PG 61 - Page 4

Originally posted by: MoBiX

wow just finished reading u r an awesome writer waiting for more one shot👏 no words to describe how beautiful u wrote da emotion of both of them 😳

will be waiting for more one shot geeti2😆

Originally posted by: Additi...

Great.......................I loved it specially the END......

You are a Fab writer,,,,,do write more OS

Originally posted by: maha_k

awesommmm OS.Thankss aqsa you dont know yara you are an amazing writer seriously not joking or not saying bcz u r my friend😊Thankyou so much maha, thts great thing darling

🤗sweety for adding my character in ur OS.Thankss😡 mam u only say sumthng naa😡i was great same to same like me😆I knw but i just felt lyk adding ur name fr tht kinda character😆😆 n i m glad tht u lykd it, i ws gtng bit scared so as hw u'll react.but tujhy main itny gusy wali lagti hon kya😕gussa kis baat ka yeh bhi toh dekh, it shwd ur luv , care n possessiveness fr ur frnd n hw amazing frnd Ayesha ws fr Heer n u fr us thts why added ur character

and now about OS

tujhy apni complain to bta di main ny☺️ be carefull next time.Yeahh madam next one will be fr u n in ur way but u too knw tht i cannot go much far😳😃i want a complete explainantion😆.yeahhh but no details please😆😆, i m nt good in tht n i don't think will be gng to🤣

beautiful combination of past and present yara👏👏.Thankss, ws wondering tht it might nt confuse readers but it do not, i guess we readers r damn smart😃😃even i think i read this kind of OS first time.😃thankss again

about past first i thought like prem' raj and heer are serious i am also stupid like prem😆😆well tht u are😛😛.and i think prem was also not at fault bcz 1st he was not sure about his feeling then his guilt and after that raj heer drama.koi bhi confuse ho jaiy ga yara😆tu chup kar, tujhe hamesha Prem he sahi lagta hain

but amazing OS yara raj and ayesha were too good😃yeahhh🤣

ending was perfact👏👏👏i knw, concept ws damn common but nt ending i guess so thought of new endng, hope it is

keeo writing

waiting for more.....................................frst u grant my wish thn i'll think😛😛

Originally posted by: Kamal_23

Great Os


write more


Kamal

Originally posted by: v_nikhita18

you're a fab writer......Thanks😊glad you opened a thread of your own......as for this shot......it was very looooooooooong and very beautiful........I knw it ws, glad u lykd it very few oneshots are this long......loved this......was really emotional and romantic......

keep writing more!

and thnx for the pm

Originally posted by: p.ggreeshma

wowwwwwwwww
that was tooooooooooooooo nice
i enjoyed it a lot...........................
thanks 4 this wonderful OS.

Originally posted by: -fsn-

aqsaa
firstly i really want to kill u for that sigg hawwww kyun???😭😭
but i really love this os so i forgive u Thanku , main bacch gayi😃😃
its really amazing
prem was jerk but cute one. cute???????? in ths shot????😲😲
it was great combination of past & present
but they met after approx 7 yrs dont do this next time warna meri haaye laga gi tumhe.😆got inspired frm kis desh😆
but its ok ends weel all well
do write more os soon jee madam
thanks its really awesome gift 🤗Your welcome, i m glad tht u lykd it
luv
Fatima
Aqsa
p.s:it is the longest comment of mine on any os
arey thanku thanku i m overwhelmed😛

Originally posted by: nuptalie

This comment strictly to aqsa coz i have promised that i will write a comment to her OS but forgot it every time ..* sorry *
Good writing skills buddy ..Thankss But u know i didnt become a fan of this OS like i did on the 1st one..I told yuh that personally ..* angelic muah* i knw tht madam *devil eyes*
But i hope ur nexy one will rock more than any of these two..lets see
All the best ya for the upcoming stories..all the best?😆😆😆

SHADES OF LOVE

And people were taking advantages, all over the drives, beaches, couples can be seen hand in hand, arm in arm, some walking silently enjoying windy night, some non- stop babbling so as to divulge the verses of each second, some showering their love through kisses and hugs, under the beautiful moonlight.

But not all people always think alike.Who were making this beautiful weather hotty with their temper.

What he thinks of himself? she muttered punching onto her pillows

Truly no brain, always try to act over smart she groaned, atleast could have asked me but no............ why would he? He is Prem, the great Prem Juneja who can never go wrong and doing action with consults certainly not suits him, she bemoaned and threw the nearby vase on the front wall and got up from the bed to change over.

Coming out of washroom she was near her dresser when she heard some sound but she ignored though that warm shower relaxed her body but still not her mind and not even managed to flush off her anger.

Hi smexy someone addressed her and she knew who but she was not being able to find the person, near your window, he said with a grin.

Heer paced towards the window and was shocked to see Prem hanging on a nearby pipe.

Are you insane? she asked with a sigh of frustration, you stupo what you doing here on a conduit?

Yeahhh madam i did this not because today I m in so very mood to hangout on passage nearby of people's windows but because of you, he said with a pout and most innocent look.

For me? she asked bewildered but still maintaining her angry and questioning look

Look Smexy you came from there without talking to me, when I asked to drop you, you just took my car keys and drove back to your place. And knowing your calm temper I was well aware that if I dared to give a knock at your door or pressed the doorbell I would be surely welcome with an antique, he said in one breath without any pause and at the same time sarcastically commenting on the broken vase. Since no one was at your home to save me, so it would be risky for me, love ,and I surely wouldn't want to die as a bachelor he said with a smirk.

But still I needed to pacify you so thought of climbing to your window, for you I did this, he said with a puppy-dog face

And was about to babble again when she cut off, And you think your Rajeev act will save you? she said with a frown

........Rajeev.....???????? Who is he now? he asked totally perplexed. Ohh Gosh you and your Shahid Kapoor he immediately utter with a sigh

I am talking here about my work that I did for you just to bring down your temper and still you dreaming about Shahid, he said with a frown. Look mam "Shaadi karni hain yaa nahi ?, irada toh nahi badal dia" he asked little annoyed. Haan shayad, she replied back and turn her back towards him and was about to move when he got hold of her waist and pulled her back, slowly tracing his hands forward and backward and sending shivers down her spine, You sure that you have changed because of your plan, for that dream man you are thinking of leaving dream of every girl, most eligible bachelor in town he affirmed. Yeah right but the thing is that I am not interested in this God's gift, she retorted back atleast not after all this she said in anger and let herself free from his hands.

Look I am sorry love, I know I shouldn't have acted or voiced immaturely but I seriously thought that you wouldn't join me. You crazy Prem?, am I mad or what that I wouldn't attend our marriage functions, she said with disgust. Love, I thought that after how rudely I behaved with you 7 days back you would be angry and was surely no need of my company he tried to reason out. Surely I was or I am but that doesn't mean that you don't tell me about our marriage affairs only, she said with a straight face. Love, it was just a Cocktail Party and nothing more and you also were very well aware of it, he replied to her.

Love I tried to call you but with a fear that you might not picked up my call or would disconnect, I didn't ring you up he put forward another reason. Woww How Convenient, you very well know I never disconnect your call no matter how much angry I am, fine then you could have left me a text message, email anything, there were lot of ways of conversing it to me she retorted back.

From where that idea cropped in your mind, thank God I reached your home and Ramu was there who informed me about new venue and I reached there before party got ended she said with a sign of relief

So now what is the issue of this anger baby? you reached, matter over he tried to calm her down. My point is how can you say that , if I was not there you could have asked me about my whereabouts by ringing me up, you just said that in front of both the families, what they must have thought before my arrival, she said with a big disappointment.

Ohhh darling your parents would have thought nothing and so as mine you know how understanding they are, he reasoned with a smile. I know but still whatsoever they are my would be in-laws and I can't manage to leave a negative impression on them and most importantly I can't manage to skip any of the functions by Uncle-Aunty and that too for me only, it would be their disrespect. And also there people were busy at their gossiping business. When I entered the first thing I got to hear was before marriage she is not giving importance to her in-laws and family occasions, what she'll do after marriage then someone asking aunty that inspite knowing that the party is for me I am only not available, all guests are here but host only are not present. And I guess it was a valid reason to raise my temper. When I reached it was very embarrassing and even aunty too looked bit disappointed. And...........................

Her words cut off at mid as he sushed her lips by his. At first it was gentle kiss, he was slowly savouring her taste after whole good 7 days of separation, his one hand moved into her silky hair brushing them and other on her cheek slowly caressing it with his thumb. It too took only seconds for her to respond back, her hands encircled around his neck, loving the feeling of his lips against hers, he slowly pulled her more closer so that now there was not even an inch gap between them. Driven crazy by her sweetness he slowly turned it into a passionate kiss, but soon their bliss ended as they broke apart, turning in bright shades she turned her back towards him so as to avoid him seeing her face. Though it was not their first kiss perhaps after their engagement Prem always managed to stole atleast one kiss in their every single meeting if not more but still his kisses always drives her crazy.

Blushing slightly but still with a good try of maintaining a stern look she uttered ,Still you can't tame me down with your kiss.

I'll think, you just start your bit, Heer replied with a fake annoyed look

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okay okay, enough of your punishment, I forgive you, now you can go home.

Home.....???? he asked

Fully aware of his intentions she tried to change the topic, no Prem look all the guests are at your home, it won't look nice naa baby. No sweet heart my presence here is indispensable, he said kissing her earlobes.

Yeahh Fiancee jee we are just engaged not married, so you can't reside over here she said with a smile.

His cologne was creating havoc in her senses and she was not able to either decline or approve, she just remained quiet. Kissing her cheek and corner of lips, he uttered I take it as a request to stay over.

Saying this he directly crashed onto the bed taking her onto him.

And like other lovely lovers they too enjoyed this weather to its full on and monsoon abled to spread its charm on them too.

Okay this is so not me, I mean just 3 1/2 pages😲. Okay but what you can expect from, who just wrote to change her mood and to celebrate that finally xams are over.