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Maha

@-Maha-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#41

hi finally i am here to edit lol

hmm another awesommm os.👏👏 just loved the start dear

the way you explain the whole atmosphare was great.love and love birds every where😳😆

but i am confused again it was a day or night lol😆i wanna read it once again.so making bahans😆😆

it was short hmm but really really nice.heer was quit different na and prem like always 😍 perfact.

and rajeev😲😆😆 loved the line 'shadi karni hy ya nhi' was really cute na.

and and the end.was cute and romantic yar

overall it was an amazing OS 👏👏
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
you know i hate all kind of rajeev or rajveer type names😆😆
our prem is better😳😆i know i am writing nonesense.khair leave
as i wrote before OS was aweommm dear(but i liked previous two more compare to this😃)but it was short simple and sweet.👏
👏heer was angry on prem the way she behaved was cute but prem easily calm her super prem in his own style😆 but i think you should add some rose or chocolate part there hmmmmmmm but you know better😃
in last it was damn romantic hehe☺️ loved that part😳.
overall it was really good dear so cute and so simple👏👏
love
maha

Edited by maha_k - 15 years ago

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maneesha

@maneeshaF

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Posted: 15 years ago

#42

Love u too darling 🤗
Il comment now it self coz i normally forget to comment , U know my temperary memory loss hehe
By the way yeah i promised you that il comment after u posted ur OS😆
Are tum toh meri peeche padgayi hai length ki baat lekar..hehe
Yeah il tell u now that i like medium size OS s okk
coz easy to read and can remember what u read in the begining coz normally what happens when its lengthy is u forget what are u even reading also in the end..hehe * no offense to any one*
Every one has its own taste and this is me hehe
Okk coming back to ur os I have told yuh also this is my kind of story .. a bit cheezy, childish * the charactors* , romantic , interesting story ..
So i liked it..
and ur smexy part make go 🤣 I didnt tell u before but it was a bit u know hahaha .Lol sexy is not a bad word , u can use when its needed.. Ok bachcha😆
And i liked how Heer talked to prem coz normally Prem is the one who talks like that but its great to see heer talking like that . fpr ur kind info aqsa madam this is about a comparison about serial prem and heer with ur OS prem and heer😆😆😆 and wanna add how heer talked about what could be the consequences occur if she didnt come on that day. and all ...I like that point of view coz its kinda real scenario😊
and dude u can romantic stuff too even though u think u cant ..
So overall this is my fav among all of ur oss..

Edited by nuptalie - 15 years ago