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MoBiX

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

will comment after reading although i know u r geeti2 writer😆

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

another fantastic oneshot Ashlesha.............⭐️..........👏

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Shruti

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

hai rabba how many reserved slot i m having 😆😆😆😆😆

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MoBiX

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

wow just finished reading u r an awesome writer waiting for more one shot👏 no words to describe how beautiful u wrote da emotion of both of them 😳

will be waiting for more one shot geeti2😆

Edited by MoBiX - 15 years ago

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Parisa

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

Great.......................I loved it specially the END......

You are a Fab writer,,,,,do write more OS

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Maha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#16

awesommmm OS.aqsa you dont know yara you are an amazing writer seriously not joking or not saying bcz u r my friend😊

🤗sweety for adding my character in ur OS.i was great same to same like me😆.but tujhy main itny gusy wali lagti hon kya😕

and now about OS

tujhy apni complain to bta di main ny☺️ be carefull next time.i want a complete explainantion😆.

beautiful combination of past and present yara👏👏.even i think i read this kind of OS first time.😃

about past first i thought like prem' raj and heer are serious i am also stupid like prem😆😆.and i think prem was also not at fault bcz 1st he was not sure about his feeling then his guilt and after that raj heer drama.koi bhi confuse ho jaiy ga yara😆

but amazing OS yara raj and ayesha were too good😃

ending was perfact👏👏👏

keeo writing

waiting for more

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...Nikhita...

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Posted: 15 years ago

#17

you're a fab writer......glad you opened a thread of your own......as for this shot......it was very looooooooooong and very beautiful........very few oneshots are this long......loved this......was really emotional and romantic......

keep writing more!

and thnx for the pm