|| Ashlesha's Assets ||* Eternal Journey * PG 61 - Page 13

Originally posted by: sonia7

hey i loved your one shot

it was fabouloues

thanks a ton for the pm

Originally posted by: additi10

Awesomeeeeeeeeee Updateeeeee⭐️
loved it Ash
awesomeee

Originally posted by: yasu09

a very fantabulicious and romantic oneshot Ash.........⭐️

Originally posted by: crystall

Beautiful os !

Loved it !

Do write more !

Thnx for pm !

Originally posted by: MoBiX

😆😆😆 aree ash 2😡😆arey you are ash2 ididot u know na im so lazy 😆😉 i know that

so im jst clicking the like button😆and den runnig to my prem papa and heer mummy😳😳noo baby hw can ash have parents heer n prem, you are child of DJ and balwant

coming to the oneshoot areee prem left my mummy for 2 years 😡😳how dare he left her ?

and loved their dialouge it was very well written 😳👏thankss

once again a PHantastic oneshoot 👏😃glad you liked it

loved it write more and update ur ff also eager to know what will happen😡😆well can't say on it😆😆

Originally posted by: nuptalie

Hii baby😳Hello mumma😛
* plz guys dont think any thing else, these days im so used to talk to aqsa and fats baby which they dont actually and annoy them so much*
And so sorry for editing late. REaly am. But kya karoon lazy hai na😆i knw you always do this ab kab tak maafi maangti rahegi😛

I have already told ya that this is very nice , and i loved it.😳well when?? jhoothi😡😆😆
I do realy. yeahhh mam on yahoo, i got appluading hands too😃

I think i have told yuh earlier too that im so in to dialogues than the scenes so thanks for writing more dialogues to explain the situations.😊 And i know u were realy confused yesterday when i was explaining the whole scene.yes I was well you always confuses me, madam theek se bolna seekha

Good start. Than god u have come to the story directly other than roaming me around with the environment. hehe stupo here the story was directly now in a house where would or could i took you to, idiot😛
And my most favorite scene is where heer is asking for the reasons or asking him to justify him self why he left her and all. The dialogues were used there was awesome. 😃Thankss😊 glad you liked them
and like the place where prem is justifying him self coz i realy felt what u wanted to say in there.
And the last part was damn cute.😆 Where they had a bit romantic lines.
And i this is the most romantic OS of urs so far. I know its only coz of amreen * dont evn remind her to me*😡hmmm she was nudging from the day when I wrote an OS for you my first OS so finally i gave up, you know naa she never leaves me🤣
And like to take the oppertunity to compliment u about the vocabulary lol. Well written and got to learn some new words. Thanks for that. your welcome
Last but not the least it was a very sweet and great OS which i highly enjoyed reading it. * actually twice*😊😊Thankss agian
Edit-
Haye ram main kya aur bolu tujhe?? By the way baby is my word and u are not permitted to use it even for me hmph😳😆😉shut up i m gonna use it, no copyrights
I forgot to add that when i was reading this i thought of the name Surprise or new year gift. you told me already But im happy that u came up with blind fold😆 yeahh it was the first word striked into my mind while writing the very first line * sorry i already told yah when i was chatting but couldnt mentioned it over here. I hope u will add more romantic scenes for me next time other than amreen's parts gosh besharmon sharam karlo, aur kya chahiye tumhe, well I know your part mani, i read at one fic but sorry those stuffs not for me😉
And dont u dare say it again that u r not a romantic OS writer coz actually u r 😃😃thankss, I only discovered it now
And at last wanna say this is a beautiful OS😳😳😳Thankss 😊

Originally posted by: stunninstar

*edit soon*

that was so beautiful.. woww, strtng line only, thankyou

i knw i have said that to yuh.. he he..yeahh you had

loved the start.. like it s said first impression is the best impression..once the start is great then yuh will continue reading til the end.. i loved the start n so was all interested...n that lasted til the end.. Thankss,glad could hold your interst throughout

liked the way yuh show how Prem missed Heer and stuff..

how heer recognised Prems presence.. how she was shown mad at him.. it was all so good..

and not to mention ...yr romantic scenes were fantastic as usual...Thankss😳

eep writing..yuh are an awesome writer..Thankss, thats a huge compliment

MOBINA:

Originally posted by: premeerrock

hey ash! em finally here! aint u proud of me?? Well I am n hopefully will gve you same opportunity *devlish smile*😃 *looks angelically as ash glares at her* em really sorry i simply forgot to comment *kaan pakaring* 😛😛 its okkk, better late thn never but not always especially in my case

i read both of ur one shots last breath and shades of love and i liked ur work....😊Thankss

since last breath was ur first OS so as a starter it was quite good... Thankss i really liked the original idea behnd it tht life is not a bed of roses.... ofeten its cruel to the most nicest of people in this world and same thing happened with heer... she was all alone in this world and had onli her bestfrnd and God upon whom she cld rely on and they were the sole ppl in her life whom she loved with all her heart... i really felt bad for her at the moment tht God always used to listen to her prayers and fulfill them as to him she was like his daughter and didnt like to see her sad but then agn he took away the onli thing she loved next to him and tht was prem.... it was realy painful tht the moment she got her love she lost him all over agn... and once agn she was alone... and this time not even her god was at her side coz he was the one who taken prem away from her and thus there was no reason to live😊😊 uh em i makin any sense here?? 😕😆 well you are completely making sense teaching me about love,life,death and life after death i think tht em blabbering on n on abt matters of love and death n i hope tht u have not dozed off while reading this 😆😆😆 well I always does this so my comments are dead long, ppl should learn to blabber other thn tht the romantic was quite ahem 😳😳well you saying it please yeah i know u got the point😛😆😆 all in all a nice effort dear! 👍🏼thankss

as for shades of love.... i liked blindfold more thn this one 😛😛 i know you have told me n tyms *sighhh*i got a little confused with shahid kapoor thing ....was prem teasing her in order to divert her attention from their fight or did she really have the hots for shahid kapoor? 😆😆well she is infatuated with him and do have feelings fr him i didnt undertsand tht bit.... 😳😳hope you got it now other thn tht i really liked it and umm i have to ask this tht wat was wid the party thing? it was party to celbrate their engagement? no it was just a random cocktails which was supposed to held at some place but changed it last min as Prem forgot to informed or maybe was scared to 😆😆 and prem didnt inform heer because he cldnt reach her... tht was the main thing coz of which heer got angry ryt?? ahhh you got it i really liked the way he made up to her coz angry or not she cant resist him now can she? 😛 guys tend to do tht alot u know and thts nt fair.. n em nt speaking from personal experience here mind it 😆😆well who knows *suspecting eyes searching fr hiba * i have read a lot of this in many of the fics... it makes things more interesting 😆 it was a nice piece of work! keep it up! 👍🏼thankss

love

hiba Ashlesha