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Posted: 15 years ago
#51
omg......prem hugged her............sooooooo cute..........prem has started feeling something towards heer.......thats aa good sign.......do continue soon..........thanks for the pm............
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanks for the pm. update soon. this update was awesome. can't wait for the next update.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow what a story

Well expected that from sanjana, prem beggeed in front of her for his father's life and she was more concerned about her skin, and here prem just asked once heer to come along with him an she was ready to him, even though she not her gf, she can understand his pain. Along with it loving the way prem is slowly falling for her. heer mixed up so soon with his family. liked your story a lot, though I didn't like the fact that he is still calling sanjaan back home. Loved the scene between in his room. heer knows about his favourite shirt, wow, and also liked the fact that they are engaged to each other now. sliked your story, do continue soon, thanx for the pm.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
hiiiiiiii
that was an awesomeeeeeeee update!
loved how prem had to put the ring on heer's finger........so they're finally having feelings for each other........waiting for more premeer scenes.........update soon.....and thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55
very nice part
can't wait 4 the rest
update sooooooooon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part - 4

Next day, Prem is working in his laptop. 'Heer, get me a cup of coffee.' Heer went to kitchen to make coffee. After few minutes Prem heard a screaming noise from kitchen. He ran to see what happen to Heer.

Heer is standing near the counter with eyes closed with her hands and screaming and jumping like a kid. Prem rushed to her. 'Heer, what happened?' he removed her hand from her face. She hugged him and pointed area without looking at that direction. Prem with confusion looked at that direction holding her with his one hand close to him.

He laughed. One cockroach is sitting there swinging its tentacles happily. Heer looked at Prem 'why are laughing?'

Prem 'it's a cockroach.'

Heer 'I'm scared of cockroach'

Prem 'see. It ran away hearing your scream.' He is still laughing. She hit his chest with her fist lightly. Like a kid she said 'you are laughing at me.' he held her hand kept it on his chest and hugged her. He whispered 'I won't get coffee now.' Heer pulled away and prepared coffee, while Prem stood there admiring her. She handed over the cup to him. He took it from her and kissed gently on her cheek 'Thanks' and whispered to him 'to cockroach'.

Heer 'What you said?'

Prem 'I said thanks.'

Heer 'you said something else.'

He grabbed her by keeping his right hand around her waist and dragged her along with him. 'help me to finish my job Heer.' She went with him putting her hand on his left shoulder.

After two days, Lalit returns home convincing the doctor. Prem is about to inform about Heer's departure plan. Lalit 'Prem. where is my Bahu. I came home to spend time with her.'

Prem is confused. Heer came there wondering 'what made Prem stare like this?'

Lalit called Heer to sit next to him. 'Uncle you have to take rest.'

Lalit 'I don't want rest now. I'm happy. I want to see Prem and your happiness. I want to spend time with you.' he kept his hand on Heer's head.

Prem and Heer are confused. They both thought' what is he going to do now?'

Prem 'Dad, Heer is leaving tonight. She didn't get leave in her office.'

Lalit 'Why my bahu should work in another office? She will be here only. Anyway you are leaving after 4 days. till then Heer will be here with me only.'

Prem 'Dad'. He looked at Heer with helpless face. Heer with her eyes 'I'll manage.' Prem released a relived breath.

In the night, Prem is standing in the terrace with confusion. His hair shuffled because of running his finger through it. His kurta buttons are undone. Heer came there 'Prem, Aunty is calling you down to have dinner.'

Prem looked at Heer 'Heer'

Heer 'Prem, I can understand your feeling. Now uncle's health is important. He is just out of hospital. We need to keep him happy. Only 4 days. After that everything will be okay.'

Prem 'Heer, I'm giving you more burden.' Heer smiled 'come.'

She turned to leave. Prem pulled her had and turned her towards him. Heer shocked by the sudden pull and dashed on to his chest. Once her face touched his chest, she couldn't pull away herself back. She wanted him to wrap her with his arm. To her surprise prem wrapped her with his arms and kept his chin on her head. Her hands moved to his back. Without her conscious she placed a kiss on his chest. Prem felt her kiss on his heart. He tilted her head and bent down so that her head will touch his cheek. He kept his upper arm under her head to give her comfortable position. He stroked her hair gently. Both lost in their world.

Prem 'Heer, I want you to be with me always. Will you?'

Heer 'I' will Prem.' with his one hand he lifted her face to look into her eyes. He gently rubbed his thumb on her cheek. She closed her eyes. He gently rubbed her lips with his thumb. Her lips parted inviting his. He lowered down to catch her lips with his. His phone rang.

Prem 'ha Preet.'

Preet 'PB we are starving here. There you two are romancing.'

Prem 'ha coming.' Prem and heer went down. Prem is still holding Heer by her waist and her hands around his shoulder. When they reached down, they broke and sat opposite to each other. They finished their dinner without looking at each other.

Next morning, Heer woke up. Unknown fear filled her. She is so confused. She got ready and went down to join Gaya3 in pooja.

After pooja, Gaya3 told to give prasath to everyone. When she went to give to Prem, he took it with a smile and noticed a fear in her face. he sighed her to come to his room. Heer followed him.

Prem 'Heer, are you alright?'

Heer 'Prem, from morning I'm little bit scared.'

Prem 'about what?'

Heer 'some unknown fear.' He cubbed her face with his palm. She hold his palm with hers.

Prem 'don't worry I'll be with you in all your decisions.' Heer nodded and smiled. They both went to join others in breakfast.

After Breakfast, Lalit asked them to gather in Living room. Prem sat next to Gaya3 and Heer with Lalit. Preet is eating his apple.

Lalit 'Heer beta, will you do whatever I say?' Heer looked at prem then turned to Lalit 'ha Uncle, what do you want me do?'

Lalit 'will you Prem?'

Prem 'ha dad. Want to go somewhere?' Lalit sighed Gaya3. Gaya3 called Preet to follow her.

Prem and Heer looked at each other with confusion. Lalit smiled. Before Prem and Heer could come out of their thoughts Gaya3 and Preet came there with some boxes.

Lalit 'Gaya3, give this to Prem and Heer. Help them to get ready soon.'

Prem 'Dad.' Preet dragged Prem to his room and Gaya3 took Heer.
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Edited by newt2007 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57

superb😊

Edited by dryflower000 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58
great


cant wait 2 see wat happens


thanx 4 the pm


update soon


Kamal
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59
awesomeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60
hiiiiiiiiiiiii
awesome update
very romantic
and intresting
i think they r getting ready for their engagement
well update soon

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