Hey selvy how r u?
I loved each and every chapter you wrote. Here is the individual comment for each chapter.
Chapter 17-oh my god prem got gun shot, I felt so bad, I simled when he said that he won the battle. He so bold I guess to calm his heer. he didn't want her to be hurt in any way. I love the way heer took take care of prem and he understood her pain. I cant believe how dare she blackmail our heer to leave prem, why doesn't heer tell him everything, I am sure prem will do something to keep sanjana far away from them. he cans ense that something is wronfg with her, that she is going far away from him, I wish he had stopped her. I felt so bad when prem got the news of heer death, really I felt a shiver run over my body. How could that happen? How could he let her go? This update ended on a very tragic, I was on a verge of crying if you would hv contd more, with heer junejas too had gone. I am feeling so bad for prem. I hope heer is alive, and sanjana planned this all. I hated that gal.
Chapter 18- I truly hate for taking advantage of heer's death. But what else one can expect from her. and then prem is perfectly right to not allow anyone in place of heer, and least of all sanjana. I support him for this decision. Godddd these people are so cheap, they can do anything to ruin prem, I hope somehow heer comes between sanjana and rishab's plans. I loved the flashback, I am feeling as though its so long since they were together. Wow atlast sanjana plan was flop and prem didn't drink anything and didn't even fall to her charms. I hope this is heer, I eman either of the two girls but I hv a feeling that anjali is heer.
ch-19 wow anjali is heer, now that is so good, has she lost her memory or is she faking her ideantity. Sanjana and rishab are they together as a couple now? Otherwise how Mrs. Mehta know about her? omg sanjana is trying to trap prem through this fake heer, but is she really not heer? would she able trap prem and ruin his life, I hope not. When sanjana said that prem is not romantic and he wont touch anjali, I was laughing bcos clearly sanjana doesn't know prem at all. he is very romantic for his heer. I hope rpem see through sanjana's plan.
Ch-20 that was cute scene between premeer. She this proves he really cant his feelings when ard heer and sanjana thought that prem is a workaholic not his wife doesn't matter to him. if prem can sense his heer, then it is definitely her, he can never be mistaken about his heer. it is actually his heer, thank god you got he back so soon. I was missing her in his life, and now they both will give sanjana her much deserved lesson. Our prem really cares about heer, he can do anything to get her bk in his life, even risk his life for her.
Ch-21 so heer is confident that prem will not fall for ash tactics, well she knows her prem quite well. Is she jealous? I hope prem soon gets her to speak herself. I liked the scene between prem and his chahat, sweet scene. Ab naye villains premeer ki life mein aa gaye, ahi toh ek bhi chotkara nahi mila, aur ash aur balwant aur aa gaye.
Ch-22 heer is dreaming a lot, abt her moments with prem, I wonder how prem can keep himself in check.😆 aww so sweet, I was smiling when I read that scene between prem and chahat, true to his word prem did what he thought he would do on the first birthday of his baby. Even maya is with sanjana, that's why she insisted to prem to have heer as his ps. You hv to do something abt heer dreaming so much for being with prem otherwise she will surely go mad😆 you know evrytime I thnk it is happening but then you crush our hopes by stating that it is a dream. 😆 prem knows that chahat is their daughter, he is so sure. So sweet. I hope heer is not in danger, that the dream that prem had abut heer is not turned into reality.
Ch 23- glad that prem saved his family, this shows how much he is connected to his family. he could sense that they are in danger, and was already there to save them. what is the plan of ash and balwant, I am confused why are they after heer? thank god sanjana did one thing rgt, atleast she let heer know that prem is not cheating on her with ash. This all also gave heer the hint that somebody is spying on prem, I hope now she takes incahrge of saving prem from his enemies, may be this is the only reason why she didn't let anyone know her true identity.
Ch24 why doesn't he trusts heer? why doesnt he first think and then speak, it is bcos he has a right on her. jis par haq hota hia ussi par hum chilate hai, but then I liked heer attitude she gave him afterwards. As always preet and indirectly lalit has come to rescue of premeer, it is gud now they will live together. Gud that unconsciously heer is coming close to prem.
Ch 25- great that heer came to live with them, preet is really gud in making stories, and now even prem will support him. I liked the cute scens between premeer, that he cant take her calling him sir. Even when she was in trouble only was there to help her. atlast she told him that she is his heer. now prem and she together will kick sanjana out of their lives.
Ch-26 wow such nice scene between after so long not in flashback. Heer had to go through a lot without prem , I hope now she doesn't leave him alone. Liked the way chahat fought with heer to keep her away form prem, very cute scene. Loved it
Liking the way you story is going. Keep up the good work
Tk care
Sia