New FF ABUSED Chapter 20 pg.96 Oct.26 - Page 30

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sinak

Awesome.

Prem started having feelings for Heer but still in denial.



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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: tanyaaaa26

heyyyyy nicee ff do cont it soon



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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: khajju

awesme......oh wow prem is changing......great.....premeer scenes wer cute......hahaha that towel scene was soo funny.......cant wait 4 premeer romantic moments........and plzz plzzz plzzzz write the recap too plz.......thanxx 4 pm

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hay guys sorry for not updating i did y'day but it got deleted anyways this update is dedicated to Riddhima because she's the reason im updating!!


Recap: Premeer aren't talking to eachother because Prem scared Heer and Heer laughed when PRem's towel was about to fall off so now PRemeer, meet, and Harmon and Maya are all going out.


Chapter 14

So Premeer are in one care while the others are in the other car. Prem and Heer are still not talk and in the other car Preet was telling everyone why he had said to go to out and explained the plan to bring Premeer together as in make them talk to eachother.


When they reached to a park they all got out "okay me and Meher are going for a walk" said Preet "and me and maya are going going to that ice-cream stand" said Harmon "okay" said Prem "so where shall we put the blanket so that we all can meet at lunch?" asked Heer "umm how about over there underneath that big tree" said Maya pointing straight ahead "teek-" but when Prem turned to look at them they were all gone.


Prem and Heer took all of the stuff and placed it underneath that big tree and both sat down opposite from eachother. "u know someone can complement me" said Heer looking around and than Prem looked at Heer "u know to complement someone there should be something to comlement" said Prem looking around as Heer glared at him.


"boys look aful in light brown shorts" said Heer "really but girls look horriable with a dress with more the 1 or 2 colours hay like the one ur wearing" said Prem looking at Heer. "well than glad we got that settled" said Heer "Prem" she said "wht?" asked Prem " i dont get it?" said Heer "wht?" asked Prem "like u cant handle a towel and yet ur handling a big bisnues empire how?" asked Heer laughing.


"that;s it" said Prem and got up and was going towards Heer but Heer quickly got up and started to run with Prem chasing her. "HEER HEER" yelled Prem. Meanwhile the other two coupled were having a good time as well "Preet" said Meher "hmm" said Preet "this view is great na" said Meher "but i like the one that im staring at right now" said Preet and Meher looked at him and he was staring at her.

"Preet" said Meher and hugged Preet "harmom" said Maya "hmm" said Harmon "this view is great" said Maya "well i love the view im looking at now" said Harmon and Maya turned to look at him and said "that's such and old dialouge" and than they both laughed.


Here Prem caught Heer but sudently lost his balance and fell on her. Both of there eyes were closed and than Prem opened his eyes and looked at Heer and Heer looked at Prem. "by the way right now u had the fun but maybe tonight i will" whispered Prem into Heer's ears and than lightly bit her ears as Heer bit her lip from not moaning. She knew that PRem wasn't that serious because right now there relationship wasn't at that stage.


Prem looked at Heer biting her lower lip and than he said "dont bite ur lip thats my job" said Prem as he saw Heer blushing in 100 shades of red. Than Prem got up and helped Heer up by giving his hand to her and when she got up Prem didn't let go of her hand and they started walking hand in hand. SOmeone was watching this whole scene and that lady came up to Prem and Heer and said "u 2 make a cute couple" said Prem "ohh were not a couple" said Prem and winked at the lady.


PRem was just kidding but he never knew that Heer would take it that seriously Heer had tears in her eyes "so Prem.......HE doesn't......." thought Heer and let go of Prem's hand and ran away and Prem was watching her and was wondering what's wrong so he followed her "Heer" said Prem and than he saw Heer enter the ladies room and than he thought "maybe she had to go to the washroom. SPeaking of washrooms i gotta go" thought Prem and went into the mens washroom.


WHen Heer entered the washroom she bumped into someone and there were shocked to see..........................................


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Edited by -BabyCupid- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice Part Thanx for the PM Look forward to the next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
gr8 prt....luv preet for his intelligent idea.....
nd maya lol...."that's such and old dialouge" and than they both laughed. like da planning bt whos da mystery woman...
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome


thanx 4 the pm


update soon


Kamal
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Posted: 15 years ago
superb update !!

waiting for next part...

thanks for ur pm.
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Posted: 15 years ago
gr8 update!
hpfly the mystery woman doesn't come in between premeer!
plz cont. soon..
thnx for the pm!

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