Hello everybody, my name is Sia, as few of you might be knowing. I and my friend Ayysha (xoHarshaxo), are presenting you with a new FF named "Broken Soul". We both decided to share our ideas for this piece of work. I hope you all like our combined efforts. Here is the teaser of the ff:
Teaser
She stood in the dark room, near a fire place. This room was as dark and painful as her life at this moment. Today everything changed in her life for ever. Even the moon wasn't shinning at her, like it did every other night. Everything she ever gained was lost. Her heart was lost and along with it that hope that everything will be fine one day, also died tonight.
She knew today she had no expectation left from life. Everything was lost; nothing remained for which she would like to live. Neither had she had any energy nor any desire to go on this worthless life. Everything she loved, had been snatched from her. Her heart ached to get rid of the agony she felt, but it keep getting worse and worse. She knew it was just a start, it will not end so soon or may be never will.
Once in life she fell in love and that too turned out to be a mistake.
Has everything bad written in her destiny. He left her, why and what he thought before leaving was something she wasn't awareof but all she knew that she had a BROKEN SOUL which was hard to gain back.
Heer got up and went to the nearby table to pick up a picture of him.
Do, pal ruka, khwaabon ka kaarvaan
Aur phir, chal diye, tum kahaan, ham kahaan
Tears rolled down her cheek, while the picture stared back at her. "WHY?.............WHY?", she asked him while touching his face in the picture. "Why you did this?.....Where I fell short in meeting your expectations?.......how could your do this to me?"
She ached to run into his arms and have him sit by her while she tried to sleep, but
She was wrong kuch pal sirf Do Pal kay liye hi hotay hain.
Do pal ki thi, ye dilon ki daastaan
Aur phir, chal diye, tum kahaan, ham kahaan
Aur phir chal diye, tum kahaan, ham kahaan
"Why?.........Why only me every time? I never broke my limits, then why? You were my only hope and you even took that from me?......What was my fault....that I fell in love with you? Why you did this to me? Why you did this to us?............ Did I never matter to you? WHY?". There was no one around to answers these questions of her life except the silence of the room.
She looked at the paper again, that she was clutching in her other hand and re-read that line, which had now become the bitter reality of her life. Realization dawned on her that she had to live with it in her life, without him.
She cried again for her love, for those moments that they had spend together, for those moments which she would never experience again. She clutched paper near her heart and the photo frame, cried for those beautiful which meant nothing to him, crying for their separation. "WHY....WHY PREM?"
She made a decision. She looked at him for the last one time, and said wiping her tears "You are right Mr. Prem Juneja, we are never meant to be together." She threw his picture along with the last letter he left for her, in the fire, and watched it burn, resembling the tumult and pain within her.
Heer Maan had lost her last battle today.
But Will she ever win what she deserves or stay in a dark life every day.
Will she be able to bring her soul back and forget what happened in her life?
Stay tuned to BROKEN SOUL to find out how Heer Maan gained her soul and how today it was a BROKEN SOUL.
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The End
So this was the teaser. We really hope you all liked it. Any criticism is welcomed as it will only help us to improve. Any suggestions whatsoever let us know. Silent readers if you like it, please press 'like' button. we will be maintaining a new pm list for this one, so people who want their name to be added, do let us know about it.
do lets us know what you felt about it. we are waiting eagerly for your replies.
Take care,
Ayysha and Sia
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Index
Teaser- pg1
Character Sketch- pg 7
Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 2
CID
