FF-Broken Soul, Chapter-2 and precap, Pg-17 & 18 - Page 2

Originally posted by: curledup

wow!

thats thats something dude I really really like it....do continue when eve you can!
it is something different!

-aashifa-

Originally posted by: tasnime

hey what a team !! i luv u both 🤗 my 2 fav bhabies .. nice combination =))

I love the teaser !! Premeer are separated .. I really wanna know why .. Poor Heer, she is suffering a lot ..
I hope all her problems get solved soon, slowly but steadily..

can't wait for the 1st part, update soon !!

ps : now don't kill me !!

Originally posted by: yasu09

Hey Ayysha and Sia.........
the teaser was amazing...........
rely curious as to why prem left Heer..........
but eagerly waiting for the next update.........
and definelty add me to ur pm list........

Yaz

Originally posted by: fungrl

Ayysha and Sia, its an awesome start,

Can't wait to read more😊

Originally posted by: luv_kdmhmd

he taz

my sweet devrani ma sweet Sia baby bhabhi <3

i know hamari team bahut dhamal machyegi😆 Haha I know m gonna hav loads of mastis' n mazas' with u both .. I just hope at least here I won't b in the middle of u both ( My hope is very big this time since here, u r both mate/colleague )

thanx taz😃, well it is different concept it has nothing to do with serial story, you will know what i mean when we post next update, plz then dont kill us😆
Yeah, I can see a different concept, I love when love stories have sad parts but I hate it when it does have a tragic end .. So dnt b surprised if I bash u both !! or evn kill u !! aww I won't kill u or others will kill me bcoz u can't update further ..😆 ( but as long as ur devar is safe, u r safe too 😆 ) ..
but the teaser rem'bed me my fav song : "

Kabhi kabhi hum ek doosre ko khokar bhi toh pyar ko ooncha darja dete hain. Judaa rehkar pyar ki oonchaaiyon ko praapt karte hain. Har pyar milan to nahin. Judaai bhi toh ek pyar hai." ( translation : Sometimes even by losing each other we elevate the status of love. In separation we reach new heights of love. Every love doesn't end in being united. Separation is also a form of love.)😍 .. So my guess is u r gonna elaborate their team song, ryte ? I know its wrong lollz .. I really wanted to write this down n my previous comment, but my comp was abt to shut off at any time .. 😳

i hope so😉

we will try and update soon U have to !😈

P.S. ish baar toh tum bach gayi, but dont expect that every time this will happen😉
then u won't have my comments !! Its upto u !! but dnt think ur devar is gonna let u go that easily !! We can ovrcome any obstacles together, so what these 2 deewanis do ? 😆

love you

luv ya loads !❤️