FF-Broken Soul, Chapter-2 and precap, Pg-17 & 18

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anumol

@sweetanu2314

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#21

omg......another one???how do u ppl maintain all these ffs and continue updating.........all the concepts are sooo good and at the same time different........tooo good infact.......do continue soon.....thanks for the pm.......

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Reema

@Reemz93

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#22

hey sia n ayesha

love the concept n teaser, i can see already that this isnt a laughing 1 (or is it?) but i rly luk 4ward to readin it..

poor heer now what did prem do n why did he leave n when's he coming back? hehe, i sound lyk a 5yr old kid...

oh well, u 2 are here 2 take me thru the FF nd after reading both of ur FF's and the teaser am sure i'll enjoy it =D

upd8 soon hunnies =D

PS thnx for the PM, can i be added too pls??

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441240

Suspended

Posted: 15 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: luv_kdmhmd
heyy yaz
where have you been?

thanx for liking it

hmm you will know that soon

we will try and update soon

and trust me it will be a big shock for all of you

thanx we will😃

ok now im rely curious, can't wait to read the first chapter...............

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Kamal

@Olicity_23

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#24

hey sia

absolutely
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

wonder why prem leaves Heer though

thnx 4 the pm

update soon

Kamal

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366791

Suspended

Posted: 15 years ago

#25

Hi Sia and Ayysha

This sounds very interesting

Cant wait to read more

Please add me to your PM list

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Riya

@PrincessPatel77

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#26

Hii Sia and Ayyesha!!!
awesome start !!!!!
please tell me its not tragic
i can't stand tragic ones
please update ASAP
why did prem leave Heer???? I feel really bad for her!!!
please continue asap
and please add me to ur Pm list!!!!!!!!!!

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-alisha-

@-alisha-

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#27

so prem hurt her............i wonder how long hell be able to stay away from her..........gud piece of work n thnx for the pm..........do update soon

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jass2897

@jass2897

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#28

this is great plz add me to ur pm list

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dreamysouls

@dreamysouls

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#29

wow. Gr8 teaser.....
Can't wait to read....Continue soon.

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sia

@luv_kdmhmd

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Additi...
Hey Ayysha and sia

Very Good teaser, i liked it , it seems like tum loog humi bohut rolani wali hoo yeh mai nahii Title kehta hai

"Broken Soul" 😭😭

Waiting eagerly for the first part plzzzzz update soooooon😳

heyy neha

thanx a lot

may be shayad😆tayar ho jane rone ke liye😉

title describes the plight of heer in ht epast and prem's plight in the present....kuch samaj aya ab?😆

we will try and do