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Posted: 15 years ago
#91

a excellent update fantastic 👏 dear loved heer and prem and other's too but i was crying at the end while reading how prem can be so patient? no feeling of hurt just absorb everything happen😭😭 but why it happen with prem and now he is making his life more painful by marrying sanjana why? hoping for the best right now and the last part where prem just sleep on his bed it made me to cry more and thank u soo much for the pm dear 😃😊 plz plz plz....update soon waiting anxiously for the next update😃😊

take care bye😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#92
Great

was heer forced 2 marry rajveer??????????

anyways thanx 4 the pm


update soon


Kamal
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Posted: 15 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: Additi...

Achcha tu yeh tha MAHA sach......How Heer vould marry Rajveer........

I hope Rajveer dies.......Or i will kill him for sure for coming betweent Premeer.....Continue sooon....



Dekhte jao aage kya hota hai?? thanks for your comment

Originally posted by: amu142

OMG! Heer married Rajveer!!

but y??
and what now?
its so mysterious
update soon!



you've to watch out for the next parts...
it is...
thanks for your comment

Originally posted by: -fsn-

hey suhana
heer married to rajveer nahiiiiiiiiiii
y u put that rajveer i just hate this name *sigh* but whatever.
dont worry i m not gonna kill u both if u dont solve this mystery soon then chances r v high so if u both love urs life then do this soon
wait for the next update asap
luv
fatima



hmm even i hate that name par kya karien ddn't finf another...
next update coming soon
Edited by premeer4rever - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: meeshti.

hii suhana

awesome update
loved neev's character
y heer married to raj
plss reveal this mystry
update asap



Thank you
mystery will be revealed soon

Originally posted by: yasu09

Hey Kavya and suhana...............
another magnificent update................⭐️
but why oh why is Heer married to Rajveer...............
can't wait 4 da next part..........
so plz continue soonnnnnnn.................



Hii Yaz
THANK YOU
you'll know that soon

Originally posted by: sonia7

it was great update soon thanks



thank you 😊



Regards,
Kavya and Suhana

Edited by premeer4rever - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: fungrl

becahra Prem......tell me this Rajveer died.......I want happy times for Premeer

btw awesome story so far



Thank you 😊 happy tyms for prem are coming sooooooooon

Originally posted by: luvharsh

hey u guys really nice part update soon and thx for the PM :)



Thank you 😊

Originally posted by: PremHeer_Chahat

Hi Suhena and Kavya Di
u better start running as I am comign after u guys!!
how could u do that?????
but great update
continue asap
thanks for the pm
pm me



Hello Riya
sabar karo evrything will be fine soon
thank you 😊



Regards,
Suhana and Kavya


Edited by premeer4rever - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: Waqas...

OMG!!! Heer married to Rajveer...

Prem mein kya kaami thi... Ab kya hoga prem ka...
But it was awesome...



Koi kaami nahin thi..jus watch out for the next chapters...
thank you 😊

Originally posted by: dryflower000

did heer really married rajveer?i don't think so......



Well it's what you believe 😉
lets see what happens as the story unfolds
thank you for your comment



Regards,
Suhana and Kavya

Edited by premeer4rever - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: Mus@

a excellent update fantastic 👏 dear loved heer and prem and other's too but i was crying at the end while reading how prem can be so patient? no feeling of hurt just absorb everything happen😭😭 but why it happen with prem and now he is making his life more painful by marrying sanjana why? hoping for the best right now and the last part where prem just sleep on his bed it made me to cry more and thank u soo much for the pm dear 😃😊 plz plz plz....update soon waiting anxiously for the next update😃😊

take care bye😊



Thank you so much 😊 .... we're so sorry to make you cry.. even i felt teary writing all that... will try not to write so emotionally from next tym😆 watch out for the next chapters 😊

Originally posted by: Kamal_23

Great

was heer forced 2 marry rajveer??????????

anyways thanx 4 the pm


update soon


Kamal




Hmm yeh toh aage hi pata chalega ki kya hua tha.. you've to wait for it dear...
thank you 😊


Regards,
Suhana and Kavya

Edited by premeer4rever - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#98
Hello Everyone
here's comes the next part....

CHAPTER-4

The next morning prem wakes up, gets ready and comes for breakfast.

GAYATRI: Prem aaj mein ne teri pasand ka nashta banaya hai jaldi se aa.

Prem smiles and sits. Lalit and Preet also come and join them. Lalit talks about how well the party went on last night and prem just keeps listening.

GAYATRI: Woh sab chodiye uss kaam ka kya hua jo mein ne aap ko diya?

LALIT: Kounsa kaam?

GAYATRI: Aap bhool gaye, aap aise kaise bhool sakte hain? Mein ne kal raat ko kitni baar kaha aap se?

LALIT: Arre shaant ho jao gayatri mein ne call kar diya hai'. thodi der mein aajayenge.

PREET: Koun?

GAYATRI: Prem ki shaadi ki itni saari tayariyaan karni hai na usi ke madad ke liye..

PREM: Ma mein chahtha hoon ki shaadi bohut hi simple sa ho..

GAYATRI: Prem tune shaadi ke liye haan kardi na ab sab mere haaton pe chod de.

PREM: Jaisa aap chahe maa..

He leaves for office. Preet goes out to meet his friends. Gayatri was going through a magazine when someone walks in.

GAYATRI: Beta tum aagayi. Mein tumhara hi intezaar kar rahi thi.. aane mein takleef toh nahin huyi na'

GIRL: Nahin aunty'

GAYATRI: chalo shukar hai tum theek se pohnch gayi' meri Mrs. NArayan se baat hoi thi' unhoon ne tumhein sab theek se bata tou dia hai naa???

GIRL: ji aunty' sab ache se samajh lia hai main ne' ab aap apni sari tension mujhe de dein' I assure you aap ke bte ki shaadi is going to be the best shaadi of the year'

The girl smilingly assured GAyatri and Gayatri placed a hand on her head to bless her. Just then something or should we say someone came running and bumped into Gayatri causing her to almost fall, if the girl hadn't held her from arm.

"oops' sorry'", a cute little squeaky voice came and Gayatri had to look down to see where it came from.

The girl snapped her head seeing the little devil in front of her eyes and she was much embarrassed with this bumping of his.

"I am so sorry aunty ji' aap ko lagi tou nahin naa???", the girl said as she held the little devil from his hand and made him stand by her side.

"nahin beta main theek hoon' per yeh chota sa' pyara sa shetaan kon hai??", Gayatri said as she pinched the cheeks of the cute little boy standing beside the girl.

Before the girl could say anything, the little boy spoke up.

"owo' aap ko pata nahin ke chote bachchon ke cheeks pe pinch nahin karna chahiye' it hurts.", the boy said as he rubbed his cheek.

The girl showed eyes to the little boy and gestured him to stay quiet.

GIRL: I am so sorry aunty ji' yeh Sid kuch zyada hi naughty hai' aur bohat bolta hai'

GAYATRI: nahin beta theek hai' iss umar mein bachche aise hi hote hain' aur yeh Sid tou bohat hi pyaara hai' per yeh hai kon?

SID: I am Sidhart' apni mamma ka beta' aur yeh aap ke ghar mein jo shaadi hone jaa rahi hai naa' iss meri mamma organize karein gi' (Sid said as he raised his collars to show how proud he is of her mother's job)

GIRL: Sid' I told you to stay quiet' aunty ji' yeh mera beta hai'

GAYATRI: tumhara beta? Tum tou khud itni choti si lagti ho'

SID: tou kya aap ko lagta hai' Sid ki mamma ghalat keh rahi hain?

GAYATRI: (laughed) nahin beta' main tou bas yunhi' tum bohat smart ho'

SID: woh tou main hoon hi' coz meri mamma bhi bohat smart hain'

SID'S MOM: sid you go and sit in the car' main aati hoon'

Sid left and the girl turned to talk to Gayatri.

GIRL: I am so sorry aunty ji' I promise ainda aisa nahin hoga' woh actually Sid ki vacations hain aur woh akela ghar pe reh nahin sakta is liye I had to bring him along' par kal se main koi day care centre mein iss ka enrolement kara soon gi' you don't worry'

GAYATRI: nahin beta sorry ki koi baat nahin hai' bohat pyara bachcha hai tumhara' tum chaho tou isse apne saath la sakti ho' mujhe bohat maza aaye ga uske sath khel kar aur uski baatein sun kar'

SID'S MOM: thank you aunty ji' ab mein chalti hoon' kal se aap ke bte ki shaadi ka kaam shuru ho jaye ga'

GAYATRI: acha beta' bye'

SID'S MOM: bye aunty ji'

The day went as usual GAyatri all tensed about wedding preparations and others trying to pacify her.

The next day dawned and the guys went to office and GAyatri started waiting for the wedding planner to come. After some time the servant informed her that the wedding planner had come, she asked the servant to bring her in.

The planner came along with Sid. Sid walked up to Gayatri and bend down to take her blessings, she was shocked because yesterday the boy seemed to be a high tempered naughty boy but today he was being so nice.

GAYATRI: jeete raho beta' aaj ghussa shant hai aap ka'

SID: mamma kehti hain baron se ashirwad zaroor lena chahiye' aur I am sorry main ne kal aap ko tang kiya'

GAYATRI: sorry ki kya zarorat hai' aap itne sweet ho beta ke aap ki baat ka koi bura mana hi nahin sakta'

SID: thanx a lot' (Then he turned towards his mother) see mamma' I apologized' ab aap Sid se naraz tou nahin ho naa??

Sid's mom greeted Gayatri and assured Sid that she was no more mad at him.

The wedding planner got started with her work and Sid found himself an activity in form of few birds kept in a cage in the garden of Juneja Mansion.

Gayatri was much impressed by her skills and agreed to each and every plan she was coming up with.

It was the evening time and Gayatri had finalized the venue and the dress theme for the engagement now she was discussing the necessary details. Sid was running around in the house, he was playing the Cop and was after some imaginary theifs.

Sid was at the entrance when he bumped hard into Prem, who just came from office. He could have fallen if Prem wouldn't have balanced him by placing his hands on his shoulders and catching him on the right moment.

PREM: hey' who are you???

SID: I am Sidharth' meri mamma ka beta!!!

PREM: ok Mamma's boy, tum yahan kya kar rahe ho???

SID: main aap se kyon bataon??? Mamma says don't talk to strangers'

PREM: tumhari mamma kon hain??? Main unhi se baat kar leta hoon'

SID: meri mamma is the best wedding planner' aur iss ghar mein jo shadi hone wali hain naa woh meri mamma hi arrange kar rahi hain..

PREM: Acha chalo dekhte hain ki aap ki mamma kitni best hain..

SID: Aap koun hote hain mere mamma ko judge karne wale?

PREM: Mera naam hai Prem.. Prem Juneja..aur aapki mamma meri hi shaadi arrange kar rahi hai...

SID: Ohh i'm so sorry.. please aap mamma ko mat batana.. warna mujhse phir se naraaz ho jaayegi aur mujhe ice-cream bhi nahin milega.. (making a sad pout)

Prem finds him so cute that he lifts him up in his arms..

PREM: Toh sid apni mamma ki daant se bohut darr tha hai..

Sid nods his head.

PREM: Aap ko pata hai bachpan mein.. mein bhi aapni mom se bohut darr tha tha.. bachpan mein kyun mein ab bhi darr tha hoon.. agar mein ne andar jaane mein thodi aur der kardi na.. toh mujhe bohut daant padne waali hai.. chalo chalte hain..

Gayatri was walking around impatiently in the hall scolding prem as he didn't turn yet..

GAYATRI: Yeh ladka bhi na kabhi nahin sudrega.. humesha kaam kaam.. Just then prem walks in with Sid..

Gayatri sees them.

GAYATRI: Prem mein ne tumse kaha na jaldi aane ke liye par phir bhi tum.. tum kab sudhroge prem..

Prem and sid glance at each other and giggle..

GAYATRI: Tum dono aisi hass kyun rahe ho?

Prem goes towards gayatri and hugs her from side..

PREM: I'm sorry ma agli baar se khayal rakhoonga.... Ab bataiye kya kaam hai?

GAYATRI (handing him a piece of paper): Market jao aur yeh saari cheezein leke aao.. ek bhi nahin miss honi chahiye..

PREM: Ma mein?? aur koi nahin hai kya???

GAYATRI: Nahin hai isliye yeh sab tujhe hi karna padega..ab jaldi jao..

PREM: Lekin ma mein akele kaise jaoun?

GAYATRI: Kyun nahin jaa sakta..tu chota bacha nahin hai jo kho jaayega... Sid giggles at prem..

PREM: Tumein bohut hassi aarahi hai na.... ab tu bhi chalega mere saath..

GAYATRI: Haan sid ko le jao mein uski ma ko batadoongi..

Prem picks up sid and makes him sit in the passenger seat beside his putting on the seat belt.

Prem sees the list and mutters " oh god mein yeh kahaan phas gaya?"

SID: Hum kahaan ja raha hai?

PREM: Jahaan yeh saari cheezein milegi..

SID: Par yeh milti kahaan hai?

PREM: Pata nahin

SID: Toh phir hum jaayenge kaise????

Prem makes a sad pout. Prem's mobile start ringing and it was one of his employees' Nihaal on line.

PREM: Haan Nihaal bolo

NIHAAL: Sir mein ne project ki file ko check kar liya hai.. kya mein aapko file deneabhi aa sakta hoon...

PREM: Nihaal filaal toh mein bahar hoon.. shayad ek ganta lagaega.. tum 8:00 baje aa jao..

NIHAAL: Ok sir.. teek hai toh phir mein 8 baaje aa jaata hoon..Bye sir

PREM: Nihaal rukho...

NIHAAL: Jee sir..

PREM: kya tumhe kuch kaam hai abhi?

NIHAAL: Nahin sir mein toh free hoon..

PREM: Mere liye ek help kardoge..

NIHAAL: Sure sir..

Prem reads out the list of items and nihaal notes them down..

NIHAAL: Ok sir mein yeh sab lene ke baad aapko call karta hoon..

PREM: Koi problem toh nahin hai na..

NIHAAL: No sir mujhe bhi ghar ke liye kuch samaanlene tha saath mein yeh bhi le loonga.. totally alright..

PREM: Thanks NIhaal.. He puts down the phone.

PREM: Chalo humari problem solve hogayi..

SID: Toh kya ab hum ice-cream khaane jaa sakte hain?

PREM: Kyun nahin chalo chalte hain..

Prem takes him to a beach. Both of them play with the sand building castles, running along the water. Prem becomes a kid playing along with Sid. Both of them were eating ice-cream when he gets a call from nihaal to inform him that he was done with the shopping. Prem and Sid come back home. Prem parks the car and then before stepping out of the car.

PREM: Sid tum kisiko nahin bataoge na ki hum beach pe gaaye the..

SID: Hmm mamma kahthi hai jhoot bolna galat baat hai..

PREM: Aapki mamma sahi kehthi hai par kabhi kabhi hum chote chote jhoot bol sakte hain..

SID: Teek hai nahin bataounga magar

PREM: Ab kya hua?

SID: Kya hum phir se jaa sakte hain? He asks prem making a cute face which brings smile on his face and kissing on his cheek replies

PREM: Hum jaroor jayenge...

SID: Thank you..

He kisses prem on cheek and runs from there. Prem smiles and laves to meet Nihaal at the entrance. He takes the covers from his hands and goes in.

Meanwhile Sid's mom completed her work early. She felt happy as she could spend some time with him now. She was searching for him but wasn't able to find him anywhere. She was tensed. It was then when he came running shouting mamma.. mamma. She hugs him tight and then she makes an angry face.

SID'S MOM: Kahaan chale gaaye the tum?

SID: Mamma

SID'S MOM: Tum he pata hai mein mujhe kitna chinta ho rahi thi?

SID: Mamma

SID'S MOM: Mein tumhe kitni baar samjaya hai jahaan bhi jaa rahe ho batake jao

SID: Mamma. Just then gayatri walks in.

GAYATRI: Kya baat hai sid aapki mamma aapko daant kyun rahi hai?

SID'S MOM: Aunty mein pichle adhe gaante se isse doond rahi thi aur yeh..

GAYATRI: Arre I'm so sorry beta mein ne toh tumhe bataya hi nahin.. Sid mere bete ke saath shopping pe gaya tha..Kaam ki tension mein baat dimaagse nikhal gayi I'm really sorry beta..

SID'S MOM: Koi baat nahin aunty.. mujhe hi isse pooch lena chahiye tha ki kahaan gaya tha? She holds her ear and says "Mamma's really sorry beta agli baar aisi galti nahin karoongi.."

Sid bows down his head.

GAYATRI: Sid galti meri thi na apni mamma ko maaf kardo..

SID: Teek hai..
He hugs his mother and she places a kiss on his cheek.

GAYATRI: Acha ab mere saath chalo mein tumhe chocolate deti hoon. Gayatri and sid leave while his mother stays behind watching him going with gayatri.

Prem was walking in trying to manage holding the numerous covers in his hand which made him to collide into sid' mom whose back was facing him making him drop all the packets and hold her.

Her dupaata falls on her face and slowly it slides away revealing the most beautiful pair of eyes in which he once dreamt of drowning in..

PREM: Heeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrr...................


ok that's it
so tell us guys what you felt
we'll be waiting eagerly for your comments
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesomeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggg for next asap.

Edited by sweta2005 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

hii suhana

its a very cute and sweet update
loved sid charactaer
i think he is prem's son
well update soon
loved the ending
Edited by meeshti. - 15 years ago

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