|| Harsha's OneShots || Page90 {Feb 23rd 2010} - Page 10

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Posted: 15 years ago
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very nice and cute OS......
thanks 4 PM...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#92
awesome, this shud happn in the show, as they're simply draggin it too far, tht it aint evn interestin no more

lol neways keep it up!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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liked it but y did she have to be breathing i want her to go
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey ayysha loved it. you are rught we really don't care what will haapen to ash. What matters most that premeer are together and will remain with each other forever. Loved your idea.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#95
nice...
but i think it shud be continued mentioning a ending of Ash's khel...
awesome Ayysha...

regards,
Suhana.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey lovelt one shot thanks for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Premeer OneShot

|| Heer Ka Pyaar ||

Heer slapped Ash across the face as hard as she could. Prem smiled seeing Heer angry at Ash. Ash looked at Heer will the most scariest look.

Ash – "Tumhari Himat kasay hui mujh pey haath uthany ki?" She said looking more angry then she had ever been. Heer – "Tum mujhe batyoo tumhari himat kasay huay MERAY prem ko chunay ki, soocha bii tumney kasay kay tum meray Prem ko apna bana saktai hoo, mujhe hi meray Prem sey dhoor karney ki kosish kii." Ash – "Look Ms.Heer Maan meri baath suno kaan khool kay …" Heer – "Nahi tum suno meri baath Ashtlesha Maan, MERA Prem ko chunay ki kosish bii kin a tu mujh sey bura koi nahi ho ghaa, jab sey tumney mujhe tumharay or Prem kay yeh nakli rishtay kay baray mein batyaa thaa mujhe tab sey pata chal gaya thaa kay tum JHOOT bhool rahi hoo … agar tumhein lagta hai kay mein Prem ko phir sey chord kay chali jayoon ghee tu tum GALAT sooch rahi hoo … Meiney Prem ko koi galat waday nahi diye thaay samaj ayi." Prem smiled. Heer – "Or Haan agar tumhein lagta hai kay tum or Sneha meray ghar mein or HAMARY rishtey mein jaga lay sakti hoot u I am sorry to say kay tum phir galat ho." Ash – "Kay baqwaas kar rahi ho." Heer – "Baqwaas nahi jo sach hai woh bhool rahi hoon." She said grabbing her by the arm.

Heer pulled Ash down stairs while dragging her suit case. Everyone looked towards that direction. Heer in full anger and Ash trying to get out of Heer's grip. Heer – "Dafa ho jayo iss ghar sey or kabhi wapis murd kay dekaa tu deeak lena." She said shoving her towards the door. Preet – "Oh Haan agar ghar chiye tu apney malak makaan ko bolo tumhein wapis doo kyun kay jo naya ghaar thaa na woh humney apnay servent ko day diya hai … or wait agar tumhein servent bana hai tu you can stay." He said giving Meher a wink. Prem smiled. Prem – "Oh haan meiney Sneha kay real parents ko bula liya hai woh issey lenay aa rahay hain." Heer – "Sharam karo ek bachi ko apney use kay liye apni beti banya." She said in a discusting way. Ash Gave a killer look before Prem pulled her by the arm and kicked her out. Preet – "Arrey mera bathroom clean karney wala hai … array servent suno too." He said calling after Ash. Everyone laughed. Chahat – "Tu Mama ab app nahi jayin ghee." She said hugging Heer. Heer smiled and looked at Prem. Heer – "Bilkul nahi." She said kissing her cheek. Prem smiled and winked at Heer.

Everyone was happy since Premeer were in there old spot and Heer only planned to leave because she wanted to bring Ash's truth out so it was all a plan. Heer and Meher made dinner which everyone enjoyed. Prem flirted with Heer in every chance he got like when Heer was setting up the table. Prem – "Heer Kahaan ho?" he said looking around the kitchen. Heer – "Prem dining room mein hoon." Prem – "Heer mujhe meray pasay nahi mil rahay?" Heer – "Wallet mein hoon ghaay deko na." Prem – "Nahi hain meiney deka hai." Heer walked upto Prem and asked for his wallet but it was empty. She reached into the pocket on his shirt and took out money. Heer – "Yeh lo." She said giving it to him. Prem smiled and moved forward. Heer – "PRem." She said trying to push him away but he didn't. When Heer finally hit the wall. Preet – "Kabhi Yeh romeo or Juilet play kabhi bhand kyun nahi hota?" he said sitting on the table. Prem and Heer moved away shockingly. Preet – "Kartay raho meiney kuch kaha." He said laughing. Preet – "Bohat entertaining hai ap dono ka ROMANCE." He said as Heer walked away blushing. After every one ate dinner. They chatted and watched a movie together. Prem and Heer sitting beside each other.

Everyone was asleep and Heer was just cleaning her room when Prem walked in from the bathroom, wiping his face from the towel *Prem dehaan sey kahin Towel pagal na ho jayay meri Taran … FAINT.* He saw Heer putting some stuff back into the cupboard and smiled. Prem walked from behind her and slid his hands under her sari pallu. Prem – "Packing hoo rahi hai." Heer – "Nahi sir wapis rak rahi hoon." She said closing the cupboard. Prem turned her around and put his hands on her wiast. Prem – "Wasay Heer apnay plan kay baray mein pehlay kyun nahi batya?" Heer – "Tumharay paas dimaag hota tu tumhien pata chal jata." She said putting her arms around him. Prem – "Acha ab mera dimaag nahi hai?' Heer – "Meiney kab kaha … wasay tum batyoo jo mujh sey bool rahay thay neechay woh kya thaa?" Prem – "Kya?" Heer – "Koi zaroorat nahi hai issey safi denay ki." She said rasing her eyebrow. Prem smiled and kissed the tip of her nose. PRem – "Shayad mera bii plan thaa." Heer – "Ahaan." She said rolling her eyes. Prem – "Wasay Heer Chahat bool rahi thee woh sneha ka bohat miss karey ghee kyun kay uskay paas koi bhai ya behan nahi hai." Heer – "Tu?" she said knowing what Prem meant. Prem – "Tu kya matlab … ab hamra faraz pardta hai ussey bhai yeh behan denay kaa." Heer – "Matlab?" Prem – "Heer Samjho." He said looking annoyed. Heer – "Samjayo na mujhe kya pata." Prem – "Acha teak hai mein samja thaa hoon." He said hugging her and falling on the bed. Both of them laughing and the light faded away.

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Okay Guys I know the ending is a bit too surrising but we all know we want that. Hope you like it. Please Comment and Press Like button =)

Love Ayysha

Edited by xoHarshaxo - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#98
great

thanx 4 the pm

cant wait till ur next OS

Kamal
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Posted: 15 years ago
#99
super and awesome
i just love it
thanks for beautiful os
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Posted: 15 years ago
very interesting and romantic.. ash should be kicked out this way in the show too.. Preet's dialouges were superb..

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