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Posted: 15 years ago
was a great one shot
cant wait till ur next one
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet @s candy

was a great one shot

cant wait till ur next one

Awww Thankyouuuuuuuuu😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

Amazing OS. I so wish something like this could happen in the show but creatives of the show are more like destructives of the show. thanks for pm for all your ff and OS.

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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely os !
waiting for your next one !
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice one!
thnx for the pm!
waiting to read more...
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superb and awesome os........
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Premeer OneShot

|| Tuney Jo na Kaha ||

4 years had passed since 2 best friends had met. Prem and Heer best friends since forever. Shared everything together. Anyone would see them and think they were a couple, but both of them knew it was just friendship, that was until Prem started to have feelings for Heer. But those feelings dissappered when Heer fell in love with one of their other friends Shahid. They dated and when Heer found out that Shahid was cheating on her she broke because she was in love.

After that she moved to Canda away from England but now she was coming back to see her friends. Everyone told Prem to tell about his feelings but he thought that he would be lucky if Heer even remembered him, because after she left not once she phone her friends. But lucky for them she mailed Diya that she was coming.

All of them waiting at the AirPort.

Announcer – "Canda Airways has landed and passengers will be making there way from the opening gates."

Sam – "Prem she is Here yaar." He said hitting his shoulder.

Piya – "Come on guys lets go over there."

Sam – "Yaar this is awesome … I swear when I see her she is going to die …. Stupid brainless person didn't even think about calling us." All of them laughed.

Prem – "Guys don't mention anything about you know…"

Diya – "Don't worry Prem we wont." She said placing a hand on his shoulder.

All of them looked towards the gates.

2 skinng legs landed their feets outside the gates. She came out looking straight while rolling her suit case. Her hair open and upto her elbows.

Light makeup, skinny jeans, white t-shirt, flats, a purse and a jacket on her arm. As soon as she saw Diya she waved. Sam and Diya walked towards her in a hurry.

Prem stood their watching Heer smile.

Aaya woh phir nazar aise, baat chidne lagi phir se
Aankho mein chubtha kal ka dhuwaa
Mmmm..mmm…mmm…

He looked at Heer laughing and hugging Sam. She was saying something but it was all mute because all Prem could hear was the music.

Hal tera na hum sa hi, is khushi mein kyun gham sa hi
Basne laga kuyn phir woh jahan
Woh jahan dur jisse gaye te nikal
Phir se yaadon ne kar di hai jaise pehal

Prem remember all of their past. First meeting, Parties, Jokes, Shopping, teasing and last meeting.


Lamha beeta huwa, dil dhukata raha
Khamaka bewaja khwaab buntha raha

Diya called Prem and walked towards them while wiped his tear. Heer felt different when she saw Prem, not like she use too. He changed he wasn't the same Prem he use to be, because if it was her Prem he would pick her up from the happiness but he seemed to have to no reaction in seeing her. Prem and Heer looking at eachother, Prem still shattered and remembered when Heer said "Prem I am in love with Shahid." Those words kept ringing in his ear. But he knew she was he best friend so he pulled her into a hug.

Tune jo na kaha, mein woh sunta raha
Khamaka bewaja khwaab buntha raha
Jaane kiski humein lag gayi hai nazar

Heer smiled as Prem hugged him. Prem had tears in his eyes. Prem could steal feel there friendship grow.

Night 1:00

Everyone asleep and Prem Heer talking outside by the pool. Heer – "Bohat kuch badal gaya." Prem – "Sab kuch tu nahi badla Heer … deko hamari dosti abhi bhii usii mord hai jahaan tum chord kay gayi thee." Heer – "Prem apni dosti nahi chooti thee…" Prem – "Tum tu chalo gayi thee Heer liken kabhi hamray baray mein soocha … hamari dosti kay baray mein." Heer looked at Prem as he got up and walked away. Heer – "Prem tum bii badal ghaay ho." Prem – "Jab time badal thaa hai tu insaan bii." He said and walked away.

Sam – "Prem Heer ko bata yaar." Prem – "Sam nahi jo hamari dosti hai woh bii katam hoo jayay ghee." Sam – "Nahi ho ghee ek baar ussey apni feeling kay baray mein batyoo deeakna." Prem – "Heer kabhi mujh sey pyaar nahi karay ghee." Heer – "Hi guys." She said walking in. Prem shook his head looking at Sam and walked away. Heer looked at Prem with a broken heart. Sam – "You should sleep its really late." Heer – "Sam prem ko kya hua hai." She said sitting on the couch. Sam – "Bus bohat kuch uskay saath hota hai aj kaal." Heer – "Jab sey mein ayi hoon mujh sey ek baar bii sahi baath nahi kii … usko yeh bii nahi pata mein uski birthday kay liye ayi hoon." Sam looked at her shocked. Sam – "Kya?" Heer – "Prem is turning 19 in 2 days and I only came because of that, since he once told me he wants a box of chocolate, watch and a us to watch a movie together. I wanted to make him happy and fulfill over promise so I came back, but I guess he doesn't think of our friendship as the same way." Sam smiled and sat beside Heer. Sam – "Heer what happping yaar?" Heer – "I don't know sam I don't know … since I came here the way Prem is ignoring me I am …." She didn't know what to say. Sam smiled and looked at Heer with a cute smile. Sam – "Jayo or Prem sey baath karo." Heer nodded and went upstairs towards Prem's room. Heer saw Prem sitting in the window and walked in.

Heer – "Still moon talking." She said leaning against the window. Prem smiled and nodded. Heer – "Prem…" Before she could say anything prem intruppted. Prem – "Heer sorry for being so rude to you … I guess I thought you didn't care about our friendship that why you left." Heer looked at Prem shocked. Heer – "Prem how could you even say that?" She said looking angry. Prem – "Heer its not hard to see." Heer – "I guess you don't know what our friendship means to me prem … the only reason I came here was because it was your birthday and I wanted to fulfil the promise I made you when we were 5." Prem looked at her shocked. Heer – "Prem I don't know who you are any more I don't know what you are, I don't know what you did to my friend, My happiness and most of all My PREM." She said with tears and walked out the door wiping her tears.

Is shehar mein na apna tikana raha
Durr chahat se mein apni chalta raha
Bhuj gayi aag thi, dhaag jalta raha

Prem looked outside and watched the moon. Prem – "Tuney Na Kaha." He said wiping his tears.

2 years later

Heer and Prem never confessed their love but in their hearts they always belonged together. Heer was back in Canada and Prem in London. There friendship was the same and both of them still awesome friends but feeling something towards eachother all the time. Heer never confessed because she was happy with what she had and didn't wana losse her PREM.

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Okay guys that's it. I know it's a sad ending but I liked it this way. Hope you all liked it =)

Please do comment Love Ayysha =)

Edited by xoHarshaxo - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Ayysha...u r gonna write a sequel to this...when Premeer confess their feelings and live happily ever after! show main toh Premeer are never happy! at least tum log apne FFs aur OSs main toh unn dono ko milado!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Nice OS... I wished they had confessed...

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Posted: 15 years ago
I Loved it. How dare u end it like that(just kidding). Plz make them confess asap, I cant wait. Plz... thanks.

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