PH OneShot - 'Missing Part From October 7th'

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi Guys this is A One Shot of the 2nd Part That was Missing … I wish it happened like this.

I got an idea o do this because of avisva.

I hope you all enjoy it :D

Here it is …

Prem dieing to see Heer, he was runnig down the hallway Chupke Chupke so the girls wont see him. He went to the terrace and waited for Heer to come.

Meher – "Jiju ap kasay kar saktay hain." Prem truned around and saw Heer, Meher, Kulraaj and Geet standing. Heer with tears in her eyes.

Prem – "Kya hua?"

Geet – "Kya hua? … Prem tum kasay kar saktay ho."

Prem – "Meiney kya kiya hia?" He said looking confused.

Heer – "Prem aj tumney mera dil tood diya hai, ab mein tum par kabhi barusa nahi kar sakti." Prem's face fell after hearing what Heer had just said.

Prem – "Arrey mujhe koi batyo tu meiney kya kia."

Kulraaj – "Prem mujhe sharam ati hai tujhe apna bhai bulatay huay."

Prem looked at her shocked.

Heer – "Mujhe sharam aa rahi tumhein apna pati bultay huay." Prem suddenly fell on his kness and held his ears in fornt of Heer.

Prem – "Heer please mujhe maaf kardo … mujhe pata nahi meiney kya kiya liken I am sorry please asa mat kaho .. I am sorry." He said holding his ears.

Heer Laughed a bit.

Prem looked at Heer confused.

Prem – "Mujhe lagta hai tum na pagal ho gaya ho … kabhi rotay ho or kabhi hastay."


Heer - "Teek hai tu mein pagal hi sahi .... Mujhe koi faraq nahi parta kay tum meray baray mein kya soochtay ho."
Prem - "Heer mujhe batyo tu hua kya."
Heer - "Tumney kiya hai or mujh sey pooch rahay ho."
Prem - "Heer please hamari shaadi sey pehlay mujh sey naraaz mat ho ... Please." He said as tears welled up in his eyes.
All of the girls cracked up laughing.

Kulraaj – "Prem kitna bola hai tu." She said pinching his cheek.

They all kept laughing.
Geet - "Hum tu mazak kar rahay hain ... Heer ka plan thaa ... tujhe daranay ka."
Prem looked at them angry and walked off, shoving Heer aside. All of their faces fell when they saw him like that.

Prem who was walking away smiled a naughty smile.

Heer – "PRem baath tu suno."

Kulraaj – "Chal Heer ab tu ussey mana."

Heer – "Yeh ap sab ka plan thaa or mein manyo." The girls patted her and left. Heer stood their with a sad face ran behind Prem. She saw him walking down the hallway and ran to catch up to him.

Heer – "Prem baath tu suno." She said stopping him by standing fornt of him.

Prem tried to move but Heer did Rasta rook with Prem. She caught his hand and took him back to the terrace. Prem smiled a naughty smile everytime Heer wasn't looking at him.

Heer closed the terrace door and truned to Prem.

Heer – "Prem tum itni jaldi gusa kyun kar latay ho hum tu mazak kar rahay thaay."

Prem – "Bohat maza ata hai na mazak kartay hua kabhi mazak sah kar deka hai." He said acting angry.

Heer – "Prem sorry na … ab naraz tu met ho."

Prem – "Acha ab tum mera mood bi choose kar sakti ho .. kay ab Prem Juneja hasay ghaa or ab gusa ho ga." He said in a weird voice.

Heer – "Preem Sorry." He looked the other way. Heer got on her kness and held her ears.

Heer – "Prem I am sorry … ab sey tumharay saath asa mazaak nahi karoon ghee please maaf kardo na PLEase." He smiled with a naughty grin and truned towards her. He pulled her up by her shoulder.

Heer – "Sorry." She said holding her ears.

Prem – "Tumhein kya lagta hai mein tum sey naraaz thaa tum bi na Heer." He said removing her hands from her ears.

Heer – "Kya?" she said moving away in anger and truned to leave.

Prem caught her by the waist and turned her around. She slammed right into him.

Prem – "Aj nahi." He said smiling which made Heer smile.

Heer – "Prem mujhe jana chiye sab intazzar kar rahay hoon ghaay."

Prem let go of her.

Prem – "Hamisha unki pardi hoti hai … Meher, Ma, Kulraaj Di, Bauji, Preet, Harman, Maya, Geet, Kabhi meray baray mien bi sooch liye karo … apnay pati kay baray mein." Heer smiled put his arms around his neck.

Heer – "Teek hai … ab tumharay baray mein sooch lati hoon." Prem smiled and slid his arms on her bare waist.

Both of them talking and laughing.

Prem – "Wasay Heer tum aj bohat khoobsurat lag rahi ho."

Heer – "Tum bi wasay achay lag rahay ho shewrani mein" *Don't you mean HOT Heer.*

Prem – "Wasay Heer tumney Payal nahi pehni."

Heer – "Kyun kay mein chati hoon kay tum mujhe pehnayo … hamrai shaadi walay din."

Prem smiled and placed a kiss on her forehead. Heer blushed and placed her head on his chest. He held her tightily.

Scence sifts to Harman and Lallu … you all know what happens then

So here is my idea Hope you all enjoyed it :D

Do comment and Press like button

Love Ayysha

Here are links to My other Oneshot

*Meray Saath*
*Soul Mate or Jewan Saati*
*Pyar, Vishwaas or Jeewan saathi*
*Rishta Katam*
*Pehla Pyaar*
*Farz (Resposibilty)*
*Milan*
*KarwaChaut*
Do Comment And Enjoy
Love Ayysha😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#2
yes yes me like!
now call harshiti and ask them to do this scene for next sbs show.
u can direct them !!
and we'll watch .😍
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: avisva

yes yes me like!

now call harshiti and ask them to do this scene for next sbs show.
u can direct them !!
and we'll watch .😍

Awww thats really Sweet😳
Thankyou😳
If i was directing i would faint everytime they would touch eachother😳😳😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hmm... it was cute, naughty and romantic too... Bechara Prem...😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#5
very nice
thanx 4 the pm
KAmal
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Posted: 15 years ago
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veryyyyyyyyy cuteee hw innocent prem is !
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I loved it, 👏 awesome.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Very cute !! I wish it happened like that only .. U know u shd direct the show :) .. thnx for the PM :D
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey
very nice one shot
awesome
love it

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