Premeer ' Our Love ' Part 7 Page6 - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
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great.
Hope they leave gay3 and go.😆
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awesome part
update the next part asap
plzzzzzzzz frnd
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hope they plan to leave gayatri back in some ashram to learn something of her life..........
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awsome!!! it's really awsome the way u write....
waiting 4 the next part!!! update soon!!! :)
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PART 5

Lalit: " Before everyone eat i have something to say, I want everyone to hear my decision since we all are going back to Ludhiana" He said in a very strong voice.

Everyone looked at him confuse and worried about his decision. He was happy whole day and now he is a little angry, they all wondered what was wrong now. Gaytri looked scared and she tought to herself.

Gaytri: " I hope he doesn't say that they aren't taking me along with them, i hope he haven't decided to leave me behind after everything that happened, since everyone has been ignoring me whole day. If this is what he decides then i will never forgive Heer for his decision." she tought to herself looking at Heer.

Everyone looked at Lalit still wondering what it was he wanted to say. Prem and Heer looked worried.

Lalit: " Why is evryone looking so tense, relax, its nothing to worry about but something to be happy about, " he said calming the environment around him. " I want that when we get back to Ludhiana, i want Prem and Heer to get married again, its been 6 years they were apart and now i want to unite them again by remarrying them. This time it will be a huge wedding lots of fun and dance and this time every ritual will be performed grandly and properly." he said looking at Heer and Prem with a huge smile on his face.

Prem and Heer looked at each other with smiles on their faces, so was everyone around them happy. Gaytri was at relief now but she was a annoyed with his decision, she still hated Heer after knwo the truth because her family was close to her but yet very far cause no one paid attention to her.

Lalit: " Meher you are the sister of Heer, so i ask you, Meher will you give your sister's hand to my son?" he said in a kind voice.

Meher looked at him confused as to why he was acting like that but she just played along.

Meher: " Yes i will give my Heer's Di hand to Prem," she said witha huge smile on her face,

Lalti: " Well there done. As soon as we get back to Ludhiana we will begin the preparations for their wedding." he said.

After have said what he had to everyone partake in their dinner. Prem and Heer was so happy that they where going to start their lives again.

TWO DAYS LATER:
Ludhiana Junaja's House:

Everyone arrived at the Junaja's House in Ludhiana, Heer was the first to enter, she opened the doors to her old home, and stepped inside. Heer remembered all her old memories with Prem as she walked in the house. Every corner of the house was fulled with their memories. It brought tears to her eyes when she remembered those moments. She suddenly felt someone hand around her, she knew it was Prem. Prem hugged her from the back and placed his chin on her shoulder giving her a kiss om her neck. Heer smiled and placed her hand on his face.

Prem: " this house is full of our memories, memories which i want us to relive." he whispered in her ears.

Same time everyone walked in and Prem let go of Heer. Chahat ran to her mom and dad. Prem picked her up and gave her a kiss on her cheek. Lalit came in and saw everything in the house was covered with white cloth.

Lalit: " Ok everyone" he yelled catching everyone's attention, " i want this place cleaned up and decorated as before, come on we don't have much time, i'm planning the wedding for next week" he exclaimed happily.

Everyone just gave a heavy sigh and began to work, Kuraj and Meher went upstairs and cleaned the bedrooms, Preet and Harman began painting over the house, Gaytri and Maya helped clean and dust out the living room and library, Prem and Heer redecorated the house and hang up photos and placed fresh flowers in every corner of the house. The kids played and helped out a little too. Everyone helped here and there to get everything done in time.

3 DAYS BEFORE THE WEDDING:

Prem and Heer were talking to Geet in the hall, they were telling her about the wedding and how she should be here for it. While talking to Geet Prem kept troubling Heer and making all kinds of moves on her. When Heer hanged up with Geet Prem began to trouble her even more, just then Lalit , Kulraj, Harman, Preet , Maya and Meher walked in .
Kulraj and Preet began to trouble the both of them, mostly Prem. Lalit was also part of the fun but he got serious.

Lalit: " ok enough with the fun, Prem, I ahve something to tell you" he said

Prem just looked at him and shook his head.

Lalit: "from today until the wedding day, you are not to meet Heer, you are not to talk to her , look at her or even stay in the same room with her" he said witha smile on his face.

Everyone began laugh and tease him, Heer just looked at his expression and smiled shyly.

Prem: " dad what are you saying, Heer is my wife how can i do that? No . No that is impossible She is my wife i can't do that." the said firmly.

Lalit: " Ey you have to, that is the customs and you are going to follow the customs, YOu are not to meet Heer until the wedding day and that is final" he said " plus Heer isn't your wife, she is your wife-to-be so you have follow every customs ok?" he said

Prem mouth fell he couldn't live without seeing Heer for a second, how was he going to live those 3 days he tought to himself.

Preet: " PB don't worry Me and Harman is there you can look at us how long you want" preet began to tease him,

Harman: " yes PB if you want we can stick a picture of Heer on our faces to make you feel happy, and while we having all the fun for the wedding you have to stay in you r room" he added laughing.

Everyone began to laugh and Prem began to chase Preet and Harman around the house while Kulraj, Meher, and Maya took Heer inside to get her ready for the Mehindi ceremony.

Gaytri just looked on at how everyone was happy about this wedding and no one is still not talking to her.

ok thats it for this part too, hope you guys like it.





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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesomeeeeeeeee too good very nice part will be waitingggggggg to read more.
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wow!! awsome!!! they r getting married again!! cnt wait to see wt happens next!! pls update soon!!! :)
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WOW!! waiting 4 the next update.
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PART 6

Everyone began to laugh and Prem began to chase Preet and Harman around the house while Kulraj, Meher, and Maya took Heer inside to get her ready for the Mehindi ceremony.

Gaytri just looked on at how everyone was happy about this wedding and no one is still not talking to her.

HEER'S ROOM:

Meher and Kulraj was helping Heer get ready for the ceremony, they where teasing her about Prem and how beautiful she looked. when they where finished with her they left Heer alone. She looked at photo of Prem and her, she was missing him alot and noticed the window was open. She walked over to window to colse it but was startled by a smiling Prem. She helped him inside and he just hugged her.

Prem: " wow you look beautiful in this saree" he said moving in to kiss her. but she pulled away

Heer : " you look quite handsome yourself, and thank you," she said with a smile. " by the way what are you doing here you know we are no to meet until the wedding," she said teasing but happy.

Prem: " said who you're my wife, plus i'm dieing not seeing you," he said giving her a kiss. " i wanted to give you this to put on from today and after the wedding," he said handing her the payals.

Heer was happy to see the payals and she handed him it back pointing at her fee, indicating him to put it on for her. Prem smiled at her gesture and willing bent down and placed the payals on for her.

Prem: " Heer when you wear these payals and you walk around this house with them , it will fill every corner of this house with it's beautiful chimes.

Heer hugged Prem nad gave him a kiss on his cheeks just then there was a knock on the door, Prem got annoyed and Heer laughed.

Heer: " Prem you better go before someone sees you and we get into trouble" she told him

Prem didn't want to go but he had to. He hugged Her one last time and gave her a kiss and left. Heer went to open the door and Geet and Meher was waiting for her.

DOWNSTAIRS:

There were lots of fun and dancing and singing downstairs, everyone was happy and enjoying the occasion, except Gaytri. She sat down ina corner looking at how happy everyone was and no one cared about her. Just then she saw Heer coming down the stairs laughing and all happy but Gaytri was fuming with anger at this. Kulraj took Heer nd placed her down to sit to start the ceremony.

Mehindi lady: " wow you chose such a beautiful Bahu, don't worry i will decorate your hands to look just as beautiful as you" she said prasing Heer.

Kulraj: " I have one request for you, can you place Prem's name so small on her hand that it will be impossible for him to find. He will be looking for it his whole wedding night" she said laughing with everyone.

Just then Gaytri couldn't take it anymore she was about to leave when someone stopped her.

Mehindi lady: " Gaytri where are you going? you are the mother-in-law to be you have to place the first mehindi on Heer's palm" she said stopping Gaytri.

Meher , Kulraj, Maya and Geet looked at each other worried and angry annd the looked at Heer who looked like she wanted to cry. She looked at Kulraj and Kulraj placed a reassuring hand on her shoulder indicating her to go ahead. Gaytri walked up to Heer and sat next to her, she looked at her with so much anger and hatred in her eyes. Gaytri picked up a mehindi tube and made a blot in the middled of Heer's plam and got up and left. Heer seeing her eyes began to water, Kularaj and Meher calmed her down and Maya got a tissue and wiped it off. Kulraj told the lady to begin the ceremony.
Heer was happy she just looked on at the dancing and singing.

OUTSIDE IN THE GARDEN:

Since no guys where allowed at the party inside the gents decide to take theirs outside. Preet and Harman had a blast teasing and troubling Prem outside. Prem was getting annoyed with them but he just ignored them. He just wanted to go see Heer, he was missing her so much. Preet and Harman on seeing how uneasy Prem was they decided to spear him, they realized how much they both loved each other.
they walked and stood side by side next to Prem.

Preet: " Harman I'm sure they are having so much fun inside there, i wish i could see" he said

Prem just ignored them

Harman: " yeah I'm pretty sure of that to, by the way i saw Heer Bahbi just before coming here and i must say PB you chose a really beautiful gem" she said praising Heer.

Prem just smiled to himself because he knew how she looked he saw her before everyone, she looked beautiful, not that she don't normally do but just tonight there were a special glow about her.

Preet: " PB if we gave you 5 mins, just 5 mins to run inside and see Heer you promise to come back fast?" he asked him

Prem: " are you serious? but dad..?" prem said

Harman: " yes we are, don't worry about dad we'll take care of him, Now go remember only 5 mins." he warned him

Prem gave a huge smile to his brothers and left. He covered his head with his shawl like a lady and ran inside.

INSIDE:

Prem went to the open window where the ceremony was taking place. He stood there and looked at all the fun everyone was having but his eyes searched for one person his Heer. He spotted her getting her hands done, he looked at her how happy she was and how much fun she was having. Heer was looking on at everyone when she happened to spot Prem by the window. She gave him a huge smile and Prem saw this and blew her a kiss. Heer became shy and lowered her eyes and smiled, meanwhile Prem's heart was melting seeing her shy. Just then Geet took Heer by her hands and took her to dance, she looked at Prem and he nodded his head encourging her to dance,. Heer smiled and went head. Prem just looked on at her and admired her.
Suddenly he felt a hand tap on his shoulder, he got scared.

Lalit: " oye what you doing here, didn't i say no meeting Heer plus this is an all ladies party" he said in a stun voice but teasing.

Prem was speech less and just looked sad. Kulraj spotted them by the window.

Kulraj: " Prem what you doing there, this is a all ladies party, have you no shame to spy on us huh..huh.." she said teasing him " go, go away you will get Heer in 1 day, " she said laughing with everyone.

Heer just smiled at Prem who gave her a puppy face while being forcefully moved by Lalit. Heer just smiled to herself at how Prem really was trying, but she too missed him a lot and it was just a matter of
1 more day. Heer shook her head and went back to all the fun and singing and dancing with everyone.

that's it for this part hope you like it. wont update until Monday because i wont be home weekend so sry guys, hope you can forgive me. but will update on Monday. thanks for reading.

Edited by vbasdeo - 15 years ago
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awesomeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggggggg for next asap.

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