Premeer ' Our Love ' Part 7 Page6

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I just thought of writing something after today's episode. hope you guys like it..

Premeer Room:

Heer walks in the room locking the door behind her like she used to always do 6 years back, step by step she took into her's and Prem's room she remembered all those old memories they had together in this very same room, all the fun and sad times and all the romantic times and mostly all Prem's mischievousness. Heer slowly came back to reality and walked to the drawer that was open and went to close it when she spotted Prem standing by the window looking at the moon. After 6 long years the moon hasn't shine as bright as it had tonight, looking at Prem she walked up behind him and placed a hand on his shoulder and turned him to face her.

Heer: " Prem...." she said with a soft loving voice. " Isn't it beautiful, just like it was 6 years back, but now this moon, our symbol of our love is much brighter tonight that usual, its just simply beautiful." she said while looking at the moon.

Prem: "Heer" he said placing his hands on her face turning it to watch him, " Heer you're right, this moon is the symbol of our love and its the reason for our being together and loving each other and the reason why Chahat is here in our lives now... our little angel.." he said moving closer to a very shy Heer. " Heer 6 years, 6 years we have been apart, we have cried and we have hurt a lot inside, but not now, not ever, now we will remain as one, you and I, we will stay with each other now through thick and thin and all sorrows and bad times, Heer i don't want to ever lose you again , it was a hard task to get you back in my life and I'm not going to let go of you ever again, and i promise to never let a drop of tear or a ounce of fear or mistrust built up in you." he told her wiping the tears from her eyes.

Heer: " you are right Prem, we both have cried and hurt a lot, and this time I want us to be happy like before and forget the past. All mistakes are forgiven and now our love is at a new start that which we have to live now and forever." she said holding his hand that was on her face. " Prem I'm really sorry that i have hurt you and that i have tried to go away again from your life....please forgive me. I don't want t ever hurt you again." she said crying her heart out with all the love she has for him..

Prem: " Heer i do forgive you but please don't ever do that again, Prem and Heer are one, faith can't separate us , nor can anyone come between our love, a bond and love that was formed infront of god no one can't separate them cause it was God's will for us to be together.." he said while wiping the tears from her eyes giving a kiss on her forehead.

Prem pulled Heer in and hugged her tightly and comforted her and loved so much which he couldn't do for the past 6 years.

Prem: while hugging Heer he said " Heer i promise in front of this moon and in front of god that from tonight we start our new life, i promise to keep you happy at all times , i promise to never let anyone or anything come between us again , and i promise to keep my Heer and my Chahat, MY SMALL FAMILY together and happy forever."

With saying those words to Heer she pulled away a little to look at her husband and she leaned in and give him a kiss. Prem and Heer really did become one that night letting all their longing and desire and love that they have lost and all the pain they went through in the past 6 years, they let all of that out and freed themselves tonight loving each other like it was the first time.

The Next Morning:

Heer awoke the next morning, stretching all the tiredness from her body and she noticed Prem sleeping sound like a baby next to her. She over looked the most handsome man next to her , his flawless features, and his intoxicating facial and body feartures. She was suddenly snapped out of it when she noticed the mess the room was in, all her jewelery thrown on the ground her saree thrown on the chair and Prem's clothes all over the floor. Heer had a shy smile on her face remembering every moment of last night.
She got up and went to refresh herself and cleaned up the room before anyone walked in and saw it. She walked over to the window and opened the curtains letting the sun rays enter the room, then she walked over to Prem's side and bent over him trying to wake him up. In the process of trying to wake him up little drops of water from her fell on his face really waking him up this time. When she had given up and turn to walk away Prem caught her hand and pulled her causing her to fall on top of him.

Prem: " Ahh...Good morning my dear and lovely wife" he said witha very mischievous smile on his face..

Heer: " Good morning my lazy but loving husband" she said with a huge smile on her face.

On telling Prem that he rolled her over placing himself on top of her and just then there was a knock on the door. Heer looked at Prem and told him to go freshen up that they have to go downstairs. Prem refused but he had no choice. Just then someone knocked again.

Chahat: " Mama! Papa!, Mama! Papa!" she yelled while knocking the door.

Prem went to the bathroom and Heer opened the door for Chahat.

Chahat: " Mama!" she said happily hugging her mama very tight, " why did you take so long to open the door , you know Chahat have been waiting for the sun to rise to come see her mama and papa. By the way where is papa mama?" she asked Heer

Before Heer could answer Prem came out the shower

Prem: " Your papa is right here" he said with his arms open waiting to just hug his little angel.

Chahat hugged Prem and they all went downstairs together, Prem holding Chahat in his arms and Heer on his side holding her hand. The entire family just looked at them very happily and tought of what a loving and wonderful family they are. Lalit just smiled at himself looking at his son who is now a father and a better husband, he was happy that Prem and Heer where one again and now they had their own family.
On the other hand Gaytri was not happy at all she just kept on fuming with anger and hatred for Heer, she knew that she was not going to let Heer go so easily even after all the sweet talk Heer gave her yesterday.
Everyone happily sat down for breakfast, Heer didn't serve Gaytri but Meher did cause she very well know that she will never eat if she served her, but she happily served everyone else. Prem kept trying to hold Heer hands under the table but Preet had noticed this and started to taunt them and make fun....

Everyone was happy eating breakfast and then suddenly there was a knock on the front door. Meher went to open it only to be shocked and scared on seeing the person standing in front her. Preet kept asking her who it is but she never replied so he got up and to see for himself who it was that had Meher so quite. On seeing the person himself he got angry and worried and scared at the same time....

Hey thanks for reading it hope you guys like it.. please do comment...next part will be up soon i promise.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesomeeeeeeeeee................👏
can't wait 4 da next part..................

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awesomeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggggg for next asap.
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WOW i liked it please update soon

I think the person on the door is ASHLISHA
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it was very nice

continue soon.
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Lovely.........
very romantic.
I know who the person is, but dont like her at all to tell the name..
I hope she doesnt come and spoil the situation.
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hi very good!!cntn soonn and plz can u pm when u update the next part thanks
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PART 2

With Preet fuming with anger and fear he yelled out

Preet: " YOU! What you doing here? have you no shame to come back to this house?"

Meher was shocked at Preet's side at the tone of his voice. With hearing the tone of Preet voice everyone rushed to the door to see who it was to get Preet to speak like that. They where all shocked to see not one but 2 people standing at the door with their luggage. Lalit had asked Kulraj to take the kids inside the play room.

Kulraj: " kids you are to stay here and play until Nana comes to talk to you ok? I will go get your breakfast for you so you can eat it in here..and no one is to come outside of this room ok?" the told them and left to get their breakfast for them.

Meanwhile outside everyone was fuming with anger and fear as they took quick glances at Heer. Prem went and stood next to Heer putting his hand around her shoulder trying to comfort her cause he could already see the tears and anger in her eyes. All this time Gaytri was pleased with herself and she was happy with this situation cause she knew that is Heer left 6 years back because of this same situation if was for sure she will leave again this time looking at the results of the past.

Lalit: " What are you doing here Ashlaysha and who is this?" he asked her in a very stun voice.

Ash: " 6 years back Prem played with me and my emotions due his drunken state over this Heer and now 6 years after i have to suffer all by myself with my child, but not anymore." she said while walking in the house with her child.

Prem's face changed color with anger and fear, not with what is in front of him but the person he had his hands around, his Heer. He got her back only yesterday and today this has happen, he was scared if Heer will not accept this one and leave forever this time with no chance of coming back. Prem was so scared he didn't know what to do.

Prem: " What rubbish are you talking about, I clearly remembered you where the one who took me to that house and you where the one who played with emotions. I will never forgive you for taking my Heer away from me, nor will i accept you nor this child in my life, i have one love and that is Heer and i have one child and that is Chahat." he said angrily

Prem turned and look at Heer who's eyes where red like a cherry with all the anger and tears in her eyes, he looked at her and just wiped her tears.

Prem: " Heer i have to pay for my misdeeds always, I'm always be punished over and over again, Heer please forgive this last time and please don't leave me, don't leave my family and my love, i love you, you alone and i can't live without you again i will die time this for sure...." he said keening down in front of her holding her hand crying.

With Prem's last words he'll Die for sure, Heer bent down quickly and covered Prem's mouth.

Heer: " Don't you dear ever say that again, Prem and Heer are one, they are one soul, one breath, one heart beat, if Prem is out of Heer's live she too will die, they belong together the complete each other, please don't ever say that you will die." she said lovingly consoling her husband wiping his tears and hers. " What makes you think that i will leave you again Prem, I made you a promise last night that no matter what the situation is i will never leave you." she said holding his hands.

Gaytri was over the edge now and she went to Heer and grabbed her hand and took her in front of Ash.

Gaytri: " Look at her this is the same girl That separate you and Prem 6 years ago, and Look and this boy he is going to put you to your end in this house." Gaytri said hold Heer's hands tightly, " I will make sure that you leave this house forever this time and never return in my son's life again!" she said whispering in Heer's ears causing tears to flow constantly from her eyes.

Ash just looked at Heer and she looked at Prem and she saw all the pain they where goin through because of her and she looked at Preet and Meher and how much they loved each other and their family, and then she looked at Harman and Maya and Lalit. She kept thinking to herself that this was once her family before everything, they where the ones who gave her a home when her parents thought about themselves, and Heer and Meher where always like sisters to her, anything little thing they would have done for her. She agreed that she was pretty upset that Heer would take away her love from her and get Meher married to Preet, that it was out of hatred she fooled Heer and Prem and destroyed their lives with helping Gaytri. Then she looked at Gaytri and saw all the hatred she had for Heer and looked at the little innocent child she had by her side, she asked herself what was this child's fault that he is getting punished for nothing.

With Gaytri holding Heer and telling her hurtful stuff in front of everyone, Ash lost it.

Ash: " ENOUGH! STOP IT!" she yelled at the top of her lungs, causing everyone to turn in her direction and froze. " I had enough now," she said angrily .

Everyone looked at her confused as to what she was talking about. Ash went up to Gaytri and removed her hand from Heer's one.

Ash: " Enough Aunty, it has been 6 years since all of this has been going on but not anymore. You may still have that hatred in you but not me i have learnt my lesson, i had to to pay for my wrong doings in the past 6 years and I'm not going to go back to all my mistakes." she said with tears in her eyes.

Ash walked to Heer and took her hand and placed it in Prem's hand.

Ash: " Heer Prem please forgive me, i have made a really huge mistake by separating you two." she said with tears in her eyes. " Heer please forgive me for what happened 6 years ago, nun of it was true, Prem never slept with me, he never even looked at me or touched me, he just kept repeating your name all the time. It was a big set up to just separate you two so that you can leave this house and his life forever, but i have been paying for my misdeeds since then, but not anymore.." she said totally broken down now.

Heer with anger in her on hearing all what Ash said Heer slapped Ash so hard it echoed the house. Everyone was shocked at Heer's actions but Gaytri came up to Ash and slapped her even harder and began to quarrel with her.

Gaytri: " YOU FOOL WHY DID YOU THAT? WHY DID YOU TELL THE TRUTH? YOU RUINED EVERYTHING NOW EVERYTHING! " she yelled at the top of her voice.

Everyone was shocked at Gaytri's words and that's when all the truth starts to unveil/

hope you guys like it will update again soon stay tuned to hear gaytri's truth and see what prem does..


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hmmmmmmmmm......interesting............
can't wait 4 da next part...........................................
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awesomeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggg for next asap.

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