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Posted: 15 years ago

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awesome.....loved it ...continue soon...oh hope something like this happens in the show rather than the dragging track

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vbasdeo

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PART 3

Gaytri: " YOU FOOL WHY DID YOU THAT? WHY DID YOU TELL THE TRUTH? YOU RUINED EVERYTHING NOW EVERYTHING! " she yelled at the top of her voice.

Everyone was shocked at Gaytri's words. Ash just stood there crying with the pain from the slap.

Ash: " Aunty you say say what you want, you can hit me how many times you want but it will not change the truth pf the past and what is going on here now. I have changed and i had to pay for my misdeeds and i'm still paying for it, and i know that you haven't changed at all" Ash said still crying but angrily.

Gaytri: " Yes i still do hate Heer and i will always hate her, do you know why? Heer took my son, my family away from me. Heer is the cause of my daughter Veera's death, she killed her by getting her married to her brother. Everything in this house is Heer this and Heer that. She has made my son my Prem go against my wishes she had taken everything from me. I hate Heer so much that sometimes i wish i could punish her just like she punished my Veera." she said angrily.

Gaytri walked up to Heer but Prem stepped in front of Heer blocking her from Gaytri, meanwhile everyone was shocked at Gaytri that she hated Heer so much.

Prem: " Enough MA!" he said in anger now, he couldn't take anymore. " How could you, how could you hate the person who loved you just like her own Ma, how could you hate the person who took care of your every need when i wasn't around. How could you hate the person that has always kept this family Happy and safe and together?" Prem asked her in a angry but sorrowful voice.
" Now i know why you tried to take Chahat away from MY Heer, now i know it wasn't to keep me happy but to get back at Heer. It was to make Heer hate me more anfd go away from life forever, that why you filed the custody papers, i'm i right Ma?" he asked her stunningly.

Heer was shocked to know that it was Gaytri that filed the custody papers, and she just broke down even more to know that Gaytri would go to such an extent to get rid of her. Prem turned around to a very heartbroken Heer and he just hugged her and wiped her tears trying to comfort her.

Gaytri: " Yes that is why i filed the custody case, it was a matter of daighter for a daughter, Heer took my daughter away from me forever and i wanted to take her daughter away from her forever to, so she would know how it feels to lose your child right in front of your eyes" she said with a disgusting smirk on her face.

Prem: " Enough Ma, know i know that you really aren't my real mother, and you never can be my real mother, A real mother would never do anything to cause her son pain and distress, A real mother would love her son's love like she was her own daughter but not a daughter-in-law, A real mother would give her life to see to that her son gets all his happiness in life and if he failed somewhere in life may it be as son or as a husband or as a father she would correct him and unite him with his love, A real mother would never hate but only love." he said crying still holding on to Heer. " that is what a real mother is and you're not that you are just a step-mother, and today you proved what step-mothers really are, that they never will accept their step-children as their own and they will never want to see them happy. you have proven to me that you're just only my step-mother and you can never be my real mother." he said angrily.

Gaytri on hearing what Prem told her broke her heart she began to cry.

Gaytri: " Prem please don't say that you know i have always love you like my own i never thought of you as my step-son, please don't say that" she said crying holding Prem's hand.

Prem: " No i will never change my mind now, i have forgiven before with the custody case but not this time. From today you are just a step-mother to me, you have ni importance to me any more," he said pulling his hand away from her and he turned and looked at Heer and said " i can tolerate anyone saying anything about me or hating me , but i can never tolerate anyone saying anything about my Heer or hating her, and anyone who hates her or against her they are also against me, Prem and Heer are one and no one and i mean NO ONE can take us apart. Heer i love you very much and i will fight for no matter what or no matter who it is, i will break all relationships for the sake of our love and our happiness."

Prem wiped Heer tears and kissed her forehead and hugged her. Meanwhile Lalit fuming with anger walked up to Gaytri and slapped her twice hard.

Lalit: " You, you did all of this, you ruined this family for your selfish needs? what kind of mother are you? " he said shouting at her. " you hate Heer because you think she killed your unborn grandchild and you daughter.? then you're wrong, Heer didn't do anything she s innocent, Veera herself went to the doctor and got the abortion with out Nihaal knowing, she killed her own baby she did want to have a baby, yet no when Heer was telling us the truth no one listened to her it so happen when she took me by the doctor when i was sick the doctor told me everything, yet Heer sat there and took all the blame, why? because she wanted this family to be happy." he said angrily holding back tears in his eyes.

Gaytri: " What are you saying that can't be true" she said shocked

Lalit: " Yes it is true and it is also true that Heer had nothing to do with Veera's death Veera herself began to get jealous when she realized that Nihaal wasn't paying much attention to her when she went back home with him. it was allpart of the plan me and Nihaal had made to get Veera to realize he love for him, but that night Veera tried to cook for him to impress him and that night she was going to tell Nihaal how she really felt, but things went wrong and it was the cause of Veera's death. You see you hate an innocent girl for reason, but like Prem said a step-mother can never become a a real mother." he said with a heavy tone. " from today i have no relation with you and i have nothing to do with you, yes you are still my wife but only with the law but not i this heart or this house." he said angrily and walked away.

Prem took Heer to their room to calm down Heer and comfort her, he let her cry her heart out atleast she would feel better, and he did the same. Everyone left Gaytri sitting there on the ground crying, they all went back to their rooms even though they wanted to go in Prem and Heer's room to comfort them they thought of leaving them alone for sometime.

Premeer's Room:

Prem took Heer to the bed to sit and he sat down next to her just holding her in his arms, wanting to love and comfort her as much as he can right now. Heer just kept crying her heart out after all what had happen downstairs.

Prem: " Heer sweetheart please calm down now, I know you are really hurt and I am too bu its hurts me more to see you in this state, please babe calm down." he said softly and lovingly wiping her tears and hugging her tightly.

Heer: " Prem why, why did it have to happen to me what did i lack in my love for Ma, all i wanted was for this family to be happy and together, why does she have
ve to hate me so much? " she said sobbing into Prem's chest,

Prem just left her to cry it all out he didn't mind that his clothes was getting stained with her makeup he just wanted her to calm down. Prem remained there hold Heer that whole night hugging her making sure that there weren't as much as an inch of space between them. Prem thought long and hard that night when he saw the condition Heer was in, and the next morning he was going to let his father know about his decision.

well thats it for this part will update again soon, sry for d late update but i was kind of busy for you who pm me. i'm sry. hope you like it.

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swati

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

awesomeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggggg for next asap.

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Parisa

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

IT WAS WONDERFUL I HOPE SOMETHING LIKE THIS HAPPEN IN SHOW TOOO

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Whypadhu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#16

nice update
add me in ur pm list
plzzz update the next part asap

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saranya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#17

wow!! i just read ur ff and it's awsome!!!
update soon!! and cn u pls pm me?

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maneesha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#18

Awesome.
Waiting for his decision.
Plz update soon

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vbasdeo

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Posted: 15 years ago

#19

PART 4

Prem just left her to cry it all out he didn't mind that his clothes was getting stained with her makeup he just wanted her to calm down. Prem remained there hold Heer that whole night hugging her making sure that there weren't as much as an inch of space between them. Prem thought long and hard that night when he saw the condition Heer was in, and the next morning he was going to let his father know about his decision.

NEXT MORNING:
Premeer Room:

Heer slowly awoke and searched the side of her for Prem but she only got empty sheets and pillows. She slowly tried to get up to sit on the bed but was held back by a head rush and a very nasty headache from all the crying. She eventually sat up on the bed holding her head with the pain, she wondered where Prem had gone so early in the morning. As she made her was to put her feet down on the floor she spotted Prem coming out from the bathroom.
Prem was wrapped in a towel and his hair still wet and dripping of water, he hadn't dried it properly. Heer just stared at him looking at his flawless body and how good he looked with his hair so wet. She slowly snapped out of it and and just smiled to herself. As Heer placed her feet on the ground to go get his clothes for him Prem turned around and saw her sitting on the bed. Prem smiled and walk over to the bed and sat next to her, Prem just hugged Heer and held her there. Heer felt like heaven having Prems bear skin on her, she can feel the warmth from his body radiating on her. When Prem pulled away to look at Heer he knew what she was thinking.

Prem: " You woke up early i wasn't expecting to get up yet, well atleast until i was done ready. How are you feeling?" he asked her in a very caring and loving voice placing a strand of hair behind her ears.

Heer: " I was looking for you on the bed but i didn't find you so i got up. As to how i'm feeling I have a very bad headache it hurts a lot." she said holding her head.

Prem: " Go freshen up and i'll go get you a tablet and some head balm to ease your headache." he said in a very worried but caring voice.

Heer: " Prem... yesterday..." was all she could say because Prem covered her mouth.

Prem: " Babe i know you are still hurt from yesterday, and i know it is bothering you a lot, but please i don't want t talk about it again. I have seen you gone through so much hard times but i have never seen like that last night, and i don't want a repeat of that ever again. From now on we have nothing to with Gaytri, just forget it because i too am very hurt but i think my anger is much more tan hurting right now." he said almost wanting to break down.

Heer: " But..." again was all she could say.

Prem: " Heer didn't i say i don't want to discuss that matter again." he said soft but a little angry.

Prem looked at Heer and decided to tell her of his decision.

Prem: " Heer i want to tell you something.." he said in a soft voice

Heer: " Sure what is it" she asked

Prem: " I was think that we should shift back to Ludhiana, I want to go back to my old home, where our love started and plus i want Chahat to see where parents grew up and fell in love." he said with a smile on his face. " Here something always seem to go wrong here its never at peace in this house, i think if we go back to Ludhiana there will be so much peace and we can relive our love story. Will you agree to go back with me?" he asked her holding her hand.

Heer was never this happy before, but she really did love to go back home, her home.

Heer: " why do you need to ask you know how i always love to go back home" she said chirpy and with all smiles.

Prem hugged Heer so tight cause he was very happy. They both were.

Prem: " I will go talk to dad and let him know of our plans to shift back there" he told her.

Heer agreed and got up to get his clothes from him and she went to freshen up in the meanwhile, but her headache was so bad that it had her very weak and dizzy.

DOWNSTAIRS:

Prem looked for his father but found his mother instead. Gaytri tried to go talk to Prem but he just ignored her and went about his business. He found his father outside in the gardens sitting on the swing with Harman discussing some business matters.

Prem: " Dad i want to talk to you about something." he said

Lalit: " sure Prem go ahead what is it you want to say?" he asked him

Prem: " Dad actually i was thinking that we could shift back to Ludhiana, i want to go back t my old house, and plus Heer will be very happy there because here the atmosphere is bad and something always going wrong. Dad please can we go back to our old home?" He asked him

Lalit: " Son you read my thoughts, yes we can go back, i want to live in my land before i die, my land where my old memories are always alive,where i find peace and happiness." he said happily. " Well I'll go tell everyone we're going back home and Harman you can shift the business there. Come on go get packing we'll leave first thing in the morning." He said happily but in a very excited voice.

Prem was happy and eager to tell Heer that dad had agreed. While walking back inside he saw Heer coming down the stairs, he couldn't help but look at her goddess like figure and angel like face. He just admired how gracefully she walked the stairs and how beautiful she looked in her saree, how it held every shape of her body every curve. Prem realize what he was doing and snapped out of it. He rushed to Heer and told her the good news, they both where very happy, they hugged eachother and Prem kissed Heer's forehead.
Prem then remembered that Heer had a very bad headache, he took her to the kitchen to gave her a tablet and glass of water. The day was normal, just that everyone just ignored Gaytri the whole day and had nothing to do with her.

LATER THAT DAY:

It was in the evening when everyone gathered around the table to have dinner, Meher , Maya and Kulraj had made dinner, deciding to give Heer a little break. They served dinner to everyone, including Gaytri even though they didn't want to but they had too. Prem sat very close to Heer knowing she wasn't feeling well, Heer didn't budge because she felt comforted with im so colse and she can forget she had a headache.
As everyone was settled down and was ready to partake in dinner, Lalit had something to say.

Lalit: " Before everyone eat i have something to say, I want everyone to hear my decision since we all are going back to Ludhiana" He said in a very strong voice.

Everyone looked at him confuse and worried about his decision. He was happy whole day and now he is a little angry, they all wondered what was wrong now. Gaytri looked scared and she tought to herself.

Gaytri: " I hope he doesn't say that they aren't taking me along with them, i hope he haven't decided to leave me behind after everything that happened, since everyone has been ignoring me whole day. If this is what he decides then i will never forgive Heer for his decision." she tought to herself looking at Heer.

well this is it for this part will update again soon. hope you all like it.