Premeer Oneshot: During a Game of Cards,Sequel p12 - Page 6

Originally posted by: riyaasehgall

lyk always gud..............bt it ws more hilarious i laughed alot..........do write meet nw too sumthng romantic.....i luv da way u write...............thnx

Originally posted by: 9rpatel

hiiii

it was awesome

keep writing

thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: sereaishitedare

You're on a roll! I LaLaLaLaved itt!!! <333

Originally posted by: Kamal_23

amzing Os

i cant chose my favourite

they r all awesome

thanx 4 the pm

Kamal

Originally posted by: fungrl

WoW.....Prem is very besharm😳
in my dreams he definelty is.........😆



Awesome OS as usual
thank u sooooooo much.........😃

Originally posted by: luv_kdmhmd

🤣

I am still laughing

so became the leader this time and displayed the path to his family members for being romantic.😆

'whether he was first or last, his presence is felt by everyone', that is true😉--the way you described prem that was so good. perfect.

i still cant stop myself from laughing.😆 especially the effect prem's move had on others was so hilarious. 😛. ok really good. do consider its sequel. Amazing OS.

Originally posted by: additi10

add me too in ur PM list:P
ur a awesome writer

Originally posted by: anoushay_kdmhmd

awesome as alwayz dying 2 read more one shots nd u r an awesome writer so do write a fanfic it wud b gr8

Originally posted by: aaminaman

loved it superb and add me also in the pm i like your writing svery much

Originally posted by: eternal.beauty

hey dear

again a very beautiful os fnx u soooooooo much, but mature content don't let children around to read it😆😆.Okay jokes apart intersting concept prem is potrayed as wild lover but i think tht he should'nt be reacting lyk this in front of his whole family, so embrassing fr heer☺️, but don't u think tht ravish ws a wrong word😕😕 as in it mns forcefully i know but prem meant in a jokey manner................................ but i m disappointd wth u so less of PH i want more of them chillax ,i'll be writing more os on them so more premeer scenes to look 4ward to , can u just wite 1-2 more parts of ths, i really hope tht u won't disappoint me hmmmmmmmmm i shall think about it😃😃 n if so thn think bout childrens also🤣🤣

👏👏

Ashlesha