meet ff - 'hum ko to milna he tha' chp 26 - Page 10

Created

Last reply

Replies

142

Views

22.4k

Users

17

Likes

187

Frequent Posters

LotusPetals thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 15 years ago
#91
my spot !! See my spot is back today !! 😆
as usually, i'll torture you with loads of question 😈, I know m evn worse than Mehr naa 😆


*unsereved* :

Glad Mehr's family is back in the picture .. Wowww, Poor Mehr, she's evn sacrificing her family's happiness for Mausam, she's truely a sweetheart 🤗 .. So her family lost its happiness and all, what'll b Mehr's reaction to it if she comes to know abt this ?
Ok so Vibha has a plan to get Mehr back, but does she know she'll be a part of that conference ?
Aww Mehr was waiting to see Rj but unfortunately, she cn't .. but better for her, that way she can concentrate on Preet more 😉 .. OMG I can relate myself to Preet in the sequence where he sleeps at 3 am till 9 am, we are definitely not normal 😆 ( I evn eat snacks and fruits at 3 am 😆 )
Old Preet is back yeyyy , I can't see my Preet depressed ! woww his description left me 😍, u know just like the Preet of my profile pic 😳 .. " Preet Juneja always takes his lady luck with him" , how cute it was !!
Loll she's actually dressed up for the first time u wanted to say huh ? 😆 ... wow Mehr feelin nervous for him and Preet calm, how sweet !!

overall, as usually, I enjoyed reading this part, long, interesting and well written .. can't wait for the next part, update asap !!

ps : this part actually the last few parts reminded me of some Meet scenes, like Mehr encouraging Preet when he lost his job and his first interwiew, Mehr boosting Preet on the day of his very first project and him getting his first salary and many more .. thks for bringing back these beautiful memories, m gonna watch these scenes again now 😳




Edited by tasnime - 15 years ago
Orion thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#92
wow! wht a change in preet! n poor meher!
wonder how his presentation is gonna go...
plz update soon....
thnx for the pm!
366791 thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#93

Nice update

Feel bad for Meher's family they are suffering alot
Cant believe Preet took Meher with him to the presentation just dressed in her sleep suit
Thanx for the PM
Update soon please
foxi thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#94
hi loved ur update pls continue ..... waiting😊
riyaasehgall thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#95
nice update..........
i hope preet and meher fall in love sooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn.
addiction thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Fascinator 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#96
hi friends, here's the update.... hope u like it.....
chp 20

preet walked up to the stage'''' all the people stared at him some in disappointment'.some in surprise'''.

Preet wasn't looking one of them''''..(hard core businessmen,)

Preet gave his presentation '''his calculation''..that were in par with all the other business proposals''.

Then he said''..

After hearing my proposal''.. ' Why should mr. wilsan make a deal with me?

All were surprised with this question of his'''

Preet ' well, because I am preet, I am not like those businessmen who sit in the cabin & just make decisions base on the assumptions of what people coming to the discos prefer'' I am one of the regular disc goers'.. just one of them''''.

Discs are for youths''. & so only a youth like me can understand the needs of the youth dancing in the youths''.

For example,

I would introduce a trademark music which will play only in these discos & which nobody can record & use it any where''.. Then he played that piece of music that he had made himself'''''

All & mr. wilsan was so impressed that he on the spot declare that he would work with preet juneja''.

The news of the fresher getting this big project created a lot of buzzzzzzzzzzz in the corporate world.

Harman & bauji were taken aback; they couldn't believe their ears''.. They tried to contact preet but his phone remained unreachable'.

In the conference room'.. After the presentation'''.all the people started to congratulate preet'. But between that crowds preet was just looking at meher & meher was just looking at preet.

Then preet came to meher & hugged her tightly ''. Held her hand''' & drove the car'''.

In the car'''. They both remained silent (actually they both were feeling a little embarrassed after that hug)

Preet stopped at the crossroads which was empty'.. & he just hugged meher again''''

Meher ' preet ''''.

preet ' meher ''.

Meher was shocked to hear that name from preet's mouth.

Meher ' meher?

Preet ' I will call u meher from now, you are like god's meher to me.

Meher was little relieved to hear that'''.

Preet ' I got what u said, my project had preet juneja as the head; which no other project had. All these days I was just trying to be like prembhaiya'' I had lost confidence in me'.. Actually I never felt that I could do anything like this, but you made me realize that I too am capable of achieving great heights''.. & I did all this because I didn't want to disappoint you.

Preet kissed her on her cheeks''.. So you deserve a treat from me''''

it was already evening by now''..They went in a sea beach hotel'''.

Preet ordered all the healthy food that was meher's fav'.

Meher(was surprised ) - preet you don't like all this''.

Preet ' but u like it''''..

Meher ' no, preet but today is your day, & we will eat that food'..no '..All the junk food '''' which is your fav'''

Preet was so happy on hearing this''.. It reflected on his face''''

Preet ' meher, u will eat my fav food. It's all junk food.

Meher just gave the order'. They eat the food merrily. but somewhere in here mind one thought was hunting her why did r.j & her dad gave this conference a miss... she that initially thought that she would meet them here.....


i know that this update is small, but hope you like it, plz leave your comments


Edited by addiction - 15 years ago
LotusPetals thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 15 years ago
#97
me*

*edit*

aah my comment wasn't saved, I have to write again !! 😡

I hate these ppl who underestimate others .. m glad Preet showed them otherwise ..
what I liked more here is that, like Mehr suggested, he was Preet and not like any other businessman; he explained his idea not in terms of calculs, benefits, loses and all, but as a simple disco goer .. to me, he was more a simple man who represented the disco goers in general and said what they are expecting, nice idea :) .. but I nvr expected Preet to evn compose his own music evn though I knew he's pretty good at playing the guitar .. M so happy he won this contract .. Now how will Harman and Bauji face Preet ? they, who have always insulted and made fun of him, who thought he wasn't capable of anything .. thks to Mehr only, Preet could show his talents and what he was capable of in front of the world .. So a big hug to Mehr

"But between that crowds preet was just looking at meher & meher was just looking at preet. " it has to be the sentence/phrase of the part .. its very cute, romantic, sweet and it does really mean a lot, I'll try to elaborate on it whenever I get time to .. right now I have too many reserved place to unreserve 😆 .. and already my comment is bcoming long lollz

woohoo their first hug after Preet came back to his senses, I mean back to himself, it was very cute and it was a good way for Preet to thk Mehr, and tell her he hadn't forget her evn in this crowd .. they were embarassed and here he goes for a second one, I completely understand, Sir is overexcited lollz .. But it's very normal since he didn't believe himself ..
How cute of Preet to call her Mehr not because its her original name but bcoz for him, she's the God's Mehr .. very very romantic, I wd hv given this the SOTP too but the other one deserved more lollz .. Now we may gotta see Meet

Ohho the 1st sweet kiss on the cheek, now weren't they embarrassed ? I wd hv lvd to know abt Mehr's reaction on that .. was she blushing ? confused ? surprised ?
U know me naa, I have to ask u atleast a question 😆 but didn't know what to ask since everythin was so perfect, so i cd only think abt this one .. 😉
the last scene was so cute, A Sea Beach Hotel, my favorite too !! it's the ideal place to confess whatever we want !! And here, Preet is ordering Mehr's fav and Mehr Preet's .. now here we had Meet :) 😃 ..

now the last paragraph, maybe it'll bring the confession ? I mean Preet may notice the changes and a small disappointment in her face so he might question her .. And i think it's the ideal place for Mehr to confess abt her .. but that said, I dunno how the story will unfold later so its upto u :).

Overall Taniya, Quality counts more than Quantity, and this part had many qualities too :) .. but u'll have to make up for it in ur next update 😆 .. well written, can't wait for the next part, update both of ur FF's asap ..

ps : sorry for the lenght of my post, I wnder if I've evr written that long in my exams 😆 .. have a happy reading and best of luck 😆I dnt evn know if my comment makes sense 😳 .. you shd be thkful that my 1st comment got deleted since this one is shorter than the previous one 😆


luv ya loads,
Taz :)


Edited by tasnime - 15 years ago
riyaasehgall thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#98
ya its gud but small...........
i hope story moves quickly...............
update soon
441240 thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#99
awesomeeeeeeeeeeee...................⭐️
Orion thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago

it was a good update! glad tht preet finally got his confidence back....waiting to read the next update...plz cont. soon....

thnx for the pm!

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".