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Originally posted by: yasu09

hey.........

intesting ff..............👏

can't wait 4 da next update.................😍

plz add me 2 ur pm list........fnx

hey added u to my pm list

well tahnks for reading and liking will update soon dont worry

Originally posted by: -fsn-

😊
hi dear
amazing update
cant wait 4 the premeer scenes
wait 4 next update asap.
thanks 4 the pm

luv
Fatima

hey thanks for reading as well as replying

ya will u give u good premeer scenes next time

this time to take the story ahead i used preet and meher scenes

bt nect time only premeer

so romance some stunts

lol it l b fun

even i want some song suggestion so plz if u can suggest go ahead

Originally posted by: emacoolman

awesome yaar, very nice... good going... wating for next update...

hey thanks

ya will update asap

actually i have my classes so i wont be getting much time now but i l try to update at night

Originally posted by: sanju_veni

hey really nice n amazing update.........plz update soon n thanks for pm waiting eagerly for u to update soon

ya thanks for reading will update soon

well i want some song suggestions can u help me?????

Originally posted by: -Pooji-

Hey

Nice update

thankz for pm

ya will even pm u the next time

helpme

if u have some gud romantic song selection give me hun

Originally posted by: Premeer_chahat

Hey really nice update!! Can't wait to find out more!! Plz continue soon!! Thnxs for the pm!!

hey thanks

u need to have patience and wait as i l test ur patience as everyone used to do with me when i read their ffs hahahah

ya aill continue asap

Originally posted by: Kamal_23

very nice

update soon

Kamal😃

thank you whole heartedly

aill continue asap

Originally posted by: luv_kdmhmd

hey aishwarya

I like the way preet and meher fight---"

preet: i meant ki bakra dulhann ko bolega aa meri pooja kar le aur mujhe kaat"

----I loved this dialogue---awesome preet🤣

Another one'"tumhe kissi ne goat ki acting karne ki punishment di hai kya".Heer had made full plan to separate them😆 but alas they loved each other.🤣

This update was full of witty dialogues---full of entertainment. So even prem was invited, now that will be intereating to read. 😉Waiting for your next update. Thanx for pm.

Sia

HI DEAR

thanks for the long reply

i too used the moments to make the sad story lighter

hha hat dialogues my god i dont know how i got them in my mind

ya heer ne to poori antim sanskar ka plan banaya tha

ya nextt part will be interesting funny romantic full of stunts jst wait and watch

and y ai nneded a help

can u suggest me some romantic songs

if u can???????

tc

regards

aishwarya gayen

part - 5

flashback begins;-------

recap-

after they proposed i mean kashish and preet their engagement ceremony occured

on the day of engagement of kashish and preet whole of the college was called

included prem

in the ceremony-

after the ring exchange

arjun- hey guys u guys r so bore lets have some raunak shaunak

arohi -ha tujhe badi masti chadhi hai tu hi kar raunak shaunak

and arohi turns to leave

arjun- rang rang mere rang mein rng jaye gi tu rang sang sang mere sang sang mein sang aayegi sang

arohi jst turned back

hmm rang sang mera mil jayeg aang ang tera khil jayega rang sang mera mil jayega ang ang tera khil jayega

and with that both arohi and arjun starts dancing

now its preet on the floor

gunji si hai saari fiza

kahsish dropped her jaws seeing preet pointing here

jaise bajti ho shahnaiyan lehrati hi mehki hawa gungunati hai tanhaiya

sab gaate hai sab hi madhosh hai hum tum kyun khamosh hai shaaz dil chhedo na chup ho kyun gao na aao na aao na aao na aaona

and with that arjun shouts its time for kashshish to reply our handsome

and kahsish blushed

and then heer in place of kahsihs sang

heer was wearing some thing like this

accha to hum chalte hai

accha to hum chalte

and preet in surprised said kya gaa rhai ho

arohi came and did the male part for heer and sang phir kab miloge

and heetr said jab tum mujhe haar manloge

and everyone bursted laughing

and now preet and arjun were thinking what to replty to this

and rishabh made a funny move

he sang nayak nahi khalnayak hun main

and arohi came beside him and said ye dekho lo

lekin gaaya tumne bada thik

and everyone laughed

then its turn for our hero

prem was wearing something like this

hmm

premmmm

jis dil ko ishq ho jaaye

ha jis dil ko ishq ho jaaye

woh chain kahin na paaye

im in love its abt love( moving aroung heer and touching his hair)

its driving me crazy coz its love

jis dil ko ishq ho jaaye

after this everyone was busy in their own masti

when kahsihs mother came and said heer that

beta dekh na main shagun ki kuch cheeze table pe ghar par bhool aayi hun tu le aayegi

heer; ha abhi jaati hun aunty

aunty: i thnik rat ho gayi hai tu apne sath kisi ko le kyun nahi jaati

heer: par kise arjun she called arjun

arjun:ha

heer: chal

arjun: nahi main khain ahi jaane wala

tu kisi aur ko le ja hmmmm

arre premmmmm plz listen

heer: ye kya kar rahe ho

arjun : ruk na

prem: hmm kaho

arjun : plz go with heer and with that arjun left

kahsihsi house was near so prem and heer started walking

after some minutes of silence

prem said: tum mujhse itni ukhdi kyun rehti hun i thought we were frnds

heer: nahi aisi koi baat nahi hai

prem: ha kam se kam jhoth to mat bolo

heer; ok listen ! actually mujhe lagta hai ki tum amir baap ki bigdi aulad ho frankly speaking even my frnds called u a womanizer

prem: really and why they call me a womanizer

heer: bcz u always flirt with them

prem: did u saw me flirting with any

heer: nope

prem : then is tarah to main bhi tumhe kuch bhi bol sakta hun

heer; after seeing sometimes towards prem

she murmured well sorry i must not have spoken to u like that

prem : its ok lets go inside

they went and took the shagun ka thal

and when they were walking back rain started

ohh the hell prem and heer started running

and heer slippped

aah

ahe closed her eyes as she was afraid that she d hit the ground and would be hurt

but it never happened some1 grabber her by waist a pair of strong arms went rounded to her bare waist making her feel butterflies in her stomach

she holded and cluthched prems kurta and was hitted to his broad chest and the wet ness in all is creating temptations

they could feel each others breathe

and were attracted but then prem let her go

and heer felt somehow embarresed so without looking at him she said thanks

prem said tum abhi bhi mujhe frnd nahi manti na

no thanks plz

heer friendship mein plz bhi nahi hota

hahahahahahah they both laid a small laugh while their cheeks were blushing

prem put his hand above heers head to protect her from rain and they both came back

it was the frst time heer felt different for prem

promo

next day was kept for bachelor party

and everyone were called in a disco

arohi and heer were preparing arrangements

heer: pata hai arohi

arohi:hunn

heer: main prem ke bare mein jaisa sochti thi woh waisa nahi hai

arohi : ha

heer: tu sun rahi ahi na

arohi: tu barbara na band kar aur abhi yaha dhyan laga hum baad meinbaat karenge

heer: hunn in her mind main ye kya soch rahi hun

at night

the song playing in the background was

mar jawaan tere ishq pe marr jawaan

everyone was were half naked modern dresses

except heer as she was wearing a anarkali type which is of red cloured kurta and jeans

now in the party

will prem and heer bee together? will she be cheated? what is rishab trying to do?

will continue asap

more of promo

heer went weak her leg didnt supported her and she felt in prems arm

prem got hurt in his forehead

heer was bleeding too

she felt dizzy

lol thats it this much of emotional atyachaar for u guys next part u will get more atyachaar wait and watch

thats it frnds