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Posted: 15 years ago
Authors note: hey guys m back I m so sorry that I am so late but u know I cant help it actually my lap top charger got broken so I cant switch on my laptop as there was no charge , then I got it back repaired before 3 days and I was so busy in preparation for exams as per new cbse pattern that I didn't got time to write so here I am trying to cope up with the story …. And even my mood was also not good from few Days I got a new puppy I n my house and it got stolen it was so sweet and I lost it lolz m praying that I get it back
Bloody freaks who stole my lil doggy

Pray for my lil baby dog [dhuldhuli ]



PART – 23




THE NEXT DAY PASSED IN PREPARATIONS AND ALL

The 3 days passed in preparations for arjun and arohis marriage even prem was somehow busy in his work as he has some important contracts , heer arranged for the needs of arohis marriage and preet also helped her and even took care of kashish due to her preagnancy and morning sickness …

Heer and prem were now husband and wife but they also have talked to registrer for their official declaration and they were hiding everything to their friends so that they can give them some surprise
Finally they decided that they l get married officially after 4 days of arjuhis marriage and announced theeir marriage plans to everyone


ON THE DAY OF ARJUHIS MARRIAGE

Heer : prem jaldi se bed ke uss side flowers lagao tum itne lazy kyun ho gaye ho internet pe abhishek ke aarami classes se training le rahe ho kya u sickko

Prem : main kya karu itna to karr hi raha hun …. U know heer mujhe ye bed ,flowers dekhke bahot sharm aa rahi hai I mean I am imagining u and me

Heer: oh really hey hey listen shadi ki raat main sone wali hun u know , din bhar itna tension lene ke baad I am not going to get exhausted anymore

Prem : haye dil ke armaan aansooein mein beh gaye thik hai tan nahi to abhi hi sahi

HE PULLS HEER AND BOTH GETS TRIPPED ON THE BED


pnd then preet enters

PREET : hmm hmm

Prem and heer gets shocked to see him and heer is blushing crimson red

Prem : abe saale teri timing bahot kharab hai

Preet : meri timing kharab hai ya teri aadat ye koi waqt hai I mean arjun ki feelings ke bare mein to soch I mean usse kaisa lagega ye dekhkar ki uski suhagraat ke kamre mein uske aur arohi ke alwa koi aur hai
Waise bhi arohi ke saath arjun ka kya hoga who to bhagwan hi bata sakte hai

Prem : ye baat to shai hai ab raam hi rakhe arjun ko usse sach mein kuch tutions lene parenge
Aur tution classes ka naam hoga
''KAISE EK CHUDAIL KO SAMBHALA JAYE ''

heer: guys arohi ka mazak mat udao who to arjun hi bheegi billi hai

preet : aahaha arohi ke liye pyaar umar umar ke aa raha hai I mean any personal reasons koi experience hai kya uske saath raat ka haa

heer: tujhe to main uslta latkaungi pankhe se

prem : preet u r right heer mujhse aaj door bhaag rahi thi
chi heer kahi tumhara koi dostana scene to nahi hai na I mean aahh

heer: tum ruko tumhe to main abhi batati hun

with that heer took the pillow and throwed it to prem

prem : arre mian mazak kar raha tha tumhara sexual orientation mujhse behtar kaun janega u know I know everything

preet : hey bhagwan aajkal kya kya sunna padta hai come on lets go down pandit ji pheron ke liye bulate hi honge

prem : hume arre heer chalo pandit ji pheron ke liye bula rahe hai

preet : kyun bhai arjun ko paresaan kar ne ki plannning kar raha hai unki shadi ho jane de

heer: lets go guys tum dono ki bakwas sunke ab mujhe nind aa rahi hai

prem : main bakwas kar raha hun ha

preet and heer says together
yesssssssss

prem : haha bana lo mujhe bali ka bakra parr remember har bakre I mean kutte ka din aata hai

heer: prem just take a chill pill

THEN THEY ALL CAME DOWNSTAIRS WHERE CEREMONIES FOR THEIR MARRIAGE TOOK PLACE AND ARJUN AND AROHI BECAME ARJUHI

NEAR THEIR ROOM
Prem : finally arjun ka sapna sach ho jaye right bro arohi ke pari parmeshawar ji

Arjun : yaar tu dara mat aur bol mat main bahot tensed hun aaj mera sach mein khush hone ka aakhri din tha ab arohi mujhpe raaj karegi

Preet : aaj se nahi beta tujhpe to arohi pichle 4 saal se raaj kar rahi hai tujhe to aadat ho gayi hogi

Arjun : yaar tum log bakwas bahot karte ho


Here on the other side heer and arohi

Heer: decoration acche hai na

Arohi : yeah good I must say tumne aur prem ne kaafi mehnat ki hai

Heer: uss lazy ne kuch nahi kiya

Arohi : well thank god finally sab thik ho gaya ab tum aur prem bhi ek ho jao jaldi

Heer: yeah

THEN PREM , PREET AND ARJUN CAME AND THEY LOCKED AROHI AND ARJUN IN THEIR ROOM

It was a start of new relationship the best buddies growed liking towards each other and now were finally in a relationship




NEXT MORNING

Arohi : arjun now lets go down yaar who log sab aate hi honge

Arjun : yaar ye log bhi na mujhe apni biwi ke saath time bhi nahi denge kya

Arohi : wel u have to everytime remind me that I am a wife of a fool { she chuckled }

Arjun : no not neceeeeeee{ he then got the point what she said ]
U called me a fool

Arohi : oohh my shona

Arjun : chalo iss baar chhod diya nahi to

Arohi : come on lets go down nahi to phir hume embarrase karenge who log


IN HEERS HOUSE PREM CAME TO PICK HER UP

Prem : heer kaha ho lets go

Heer: prem jara upar aao plz

Prem : you want me to be naughty I l come I l come

Prem went upstairs and heer was sitting there

Prem : heer why r u crying kya hua ????

Heer: prem …. I was thinking there is some problem I anm running 3 days late on period and even I had vomitting many a time so I got this preganacy checkiing tubes and I tried it many a times and I m sure now m pregnant

Prem : but how come heer I mean its just two days we intimated I mean I think there is some mistake

Heer: its not now prem it's the last time when I wasn't in senses

And heer hugged him and started crying

Prem : ssshh kuch nahi hua we r married and even we l get married infront of everyone in a week it's a good news why u r crying come on don't be nervous I love u

Heer: I love u too I was just

Prem : sshhh just calm down

HEER GOT READY AND THEY ALL LEFT FOR AROHIS HOUSE

Preet : ab ek musiba gayi to doosri aa gayi I mean now inki shadi ki tayyari

Heer was silent with stress

Kashish : hmm well inki shadi to special hogi the most awaited

And then prem got a call

And he went outside to take it and when he returned he was stressed

Arjun : what happened prem ???

Prem : I think I have to leave tomorrow for a meeting in gurgaon there is some major problems

Arohi : arre tumhari 4 din mein shadi hai and u l leave

Prem : I cant help it

Heer: plz prem

Prem : heer don't worry I l be back in a day yaar u should understand and don't worry

Prem gave a approval look to heer so thqat she feels relaxed

And then they chatted about many things







OK THAT'S ALL

I will write the next part and then a new character sketch soon so keep waiting
Bbye





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Posted: 15 years ago

hii aishu

yupiee i m the first to coment ........................................
it was hillarious in the begining
i was laughing like hell 🤣🤣🤣
specially prem preet and heer convooo
hehehehehehhhehehee
sooo prem is going
i think mis vamp will do some more melodrama....................................😆
pls ab toh separate mat kariyoooo
lekin madam aisa jarur karegii
pls update soon
Edited by meeshti. - 15 years ago
additi10 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
Aw heer is pregnant

loved premeer part
plzzzz update soon
Whypadhu thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
Aw heer is pregnant

loved premeer part
plzzzz update soon
topsyturvy23 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago

hey fabolous part

Great reading it

Thanks for pm
PrincessPatel77 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update
loved it
please continue asap
thanks for the pm
pm me
premeeristry thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
Atlast miss aishu got the time for update .......kitna intezaar karwaya yaar
yeh kya horaha hai aishu you shud hav some control on ur prem.he is discussing the private things in front of preet 😲.but it was fun.i know u.........uuuu ab prem ko marna padhega ryt.and u will again wish heer to cry.bohot maza aata hai tujhey ismey ryt.but it was worth of waiting so many days shud say 👏 this is for prem consoling heer in a superb way.waiting for the next chapter so update soon.aaww u really lost ur puppy 😲 hope u find it soon.

love
saba
sonia7 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey awesome update
wow heer is pregnant
i hope they get married soon
please update soon
newt2007 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice
waiting for the next part
Pumpkinn thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update !
heer is pregnant ,that's great !
i hope they get married soon !
please update soon !

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