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aishwarya gayen

@aishwaryagayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#481

Originally posted by: sonia7
hey awesome update
wow heer is pregnant
i hope they get married soon
please update soon

hey sonia thanks for liking dear i too hope they get married i mean they r already but lets see where fate takes them

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meeshti jain

@meeshti.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#482

abe mujhe tpomatoes se pitne ki baat kar rahi hai kitni badmash hai tuu hahahhaah

well tab toh kuch na kuch sochna parega as i dont like tamatar nor eggs nor mujhe rotiyan pasand hai ki main belan ki maar bardasht karungi

u know m a rice lover hahah a

haan kya karun dear

teri sangat ka asar hai😆

hehehehheehee

very funny

abi has leeeeeeee

baad mein jab itna sara na pasand khana milega toh khayooooooo🤣🤣🤣

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aishwarya gayen

@aishwaryagayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#483

Originally posted by: newt2007
nice
waiting for the next part

thanks for liking selvy m continuing now

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aishwarya gayen

@aishwaryagayen

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#484

Originally posted by: crystall
awesome update !
heer is pregnant ,that's great !
i hope they get married soon !
please update soon !

ya m continuing sweetheart i hope i didnt made u wait so long

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aishwarya gayen

@aishwaryagayen

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#485

Authors note : hey friends m back with the update I know this time m fast so u should all thank me huh and HAPPY SARASWATI POOJA IN ADVANCE may goddess saraswati who is fair like the jasmine-coloured moon protect u and brighten ur life with knowledge

PART- 24

HEER GOT READY AND THEY ALL LEFT FOR AROHIS HOUSE

Preet : ab ek musibat gayi to doosri aa gayi I mean now inki shadi ki tayyari
Heer was silent with stress
Kashish : hmm well inki shadi to special hogi the most awaited
And then prem got a call
And he went outside to take it and when he returned he was stressed
Arjun : what happened prem ???
Prem : I think I have to leave tomorrow for a meeting in gurgaon there is some major problems
Arohi : arre tumhari 4 din mein shadi hai and u l leave
Prem : I cant help it
Heer: plz prem
Prem : heer don't worry I l be back in a day yaar u should understand and don't worry
Prem gave a loving and caring look to heer so that she feels relaxed

Preet : so babes arohi kal raat ko nind thik se hui ya nahi I mean if u both feeling exhausted u can proceed to ur rooms

He gave a naughty smile to prem

Arohi : w oh w oh well tumhe meri bahot chinta ho rahi hai kya baat hai ??/

Preet : chinta to hogi hi na k al poori raat tum ek monkey ke saath bita kar aayi ho and I can see monkey ne tumhe bite bhi kiya hai so m worried well if u need help I can take u to doctor for an antiseptic or injection

Arohi was blushed she saw that on her throat there was love bite so she just blushed crimson red

Arjun : saale meri biwi ko kyun ched raha hai aur saale dost dost na raha ha mujhe bandar bola tune

Prem : bandar ko bandar nahi to kya insaan bolu

Arjun : miain uthunga to bura hoga

Prem : dekh philosophy samajh hum insaan bhi to pehle bandar hi the to isme sharm kaisi aur science mein likha hai man is a social animal u know so tu hume legally kuch nahi kar sakta

Arjun : abe newton ki aulad isme philosophy mat la saare logo ko tere jaisa pagal samajh rakh hai kya

Preet : arjun mind ur language ye tapori language mein kyun bol raha hai bhai shistachar ki raah apna I mean be peaceful

Prem :chhod na preet bechare ko peaceful sleep to mili nahi to ye kya peace failayega

Kashish : ooff ohh tum log bhi na when u guys start u don't stop

Heer: yeah sahi kaha bas inko mauka chahiye

Prem : haha humne arohi ka halchal pooch liya to sab jal rahe hai

Heer: yahan koi nahi jal raha so u better keep ur lips locked

Prem came closer to heer and whispered in her ears

Prem : lips locked with whom ?????

Heer throwed a pillow and banged it on his head

And everyone giggled

NEXT EVENING 8:00 PM

Outside in the parking lot

Heer: plz don't go I really feel lonely I don't want u to go plz

Prem : I also don't want to leave but don't worry I l be back in a day and by the time u prepare good for our marriage okk

Heer: m too afraid I feel like sand is getting out of my clutch and I cant do anything to stop it

Prem : ok ok stop being emotional and yeah take care of my little angel in u okk

Heer: I will

Prem moved ahead and holded heer by her waist and gave a small kiss on her forehead and then he moved to leave when heer holded his shirt and lingered up and gave a small peck on his lips

Heer: be back soon I l be waiting and tc of urself

Prem : tum to aise bol rahi ho jaise main wapas aane hi nahi wala

Heer: sshh aisa kabhi mat bolna

Prem : I wont leave u arre tumhare saath saath phere liye hai aise kaise jane dun hmm aur abhi legally bhi to apna banana hai ya nahi ms.heer jo independent business owner hai usse mrs banana hai taki main uske business mein hak jama saku hmm

Heer: har waqt mazak chalo ab jao nahi to main jane nahi dungi

Prem : bbye

And with that prem left
Heer kept on staring on the back of the car till it got out of sight then she wiped her tears and went back inside where preet and others were planning decorators and managers for their grand ceremony

Preet : so he is gone

Heer: yeah

Preet : lolz tum dono parking lot mein itni der kya bol rahe the I mean we thought ki na who jayega aur na tum wapas andar aaogi

Heer: well I too felt he should not leave but still he have to go

Preet : oh come on my dear ek din bhi alag rehna muskil hai ek doosre se kya

Heer: u teasing again main kashish ko bulau kya

Preet : well well m leaving don't worry

Preet left and then heer felt like nauseated and she ran to the bathroom
She knows its normal during preagnancy but when she was coming out of the bathroom kashish stood before her

Kashish : what ahppened r u okay ??

Heer: yeah m fine

Kashish : u don't look fine lets go and see the doctor u were vomitting and I doubt it can be food poisoning

Heer: no its ok

Kashish insisted on her and heers tongue slept she said what she should not

Heer: kashish m fine I know what has happened to me

And after heer said this she felt of kicking herself

Kashish : what the hell u talking what has happened to you

Heer: oh nothing I just

Kashish : just spit it ou what u wanna say

Heer: kashish ok I m telling u but I don't want u to tell this to everyone now plz for atleast till my marriage

Kashish : I promise

Heer: kashish I am preagnant

Kashish : what ??? does prem knows this

Heer: yeah he does and we are even married not might be legally but m his we married in temple u remember after the hospital we went

Kashish : yeah yeah I do

Heer: we want to tell this news after we r married so I want u to be shut not

Kashish : yeah yeah I will but how come I mean its just so fast

Heer: it was not then it was the previous time u remember after we came

Kashish : huh so two preagnant ladies in a house

Heer: u r not upset on me

Kashish : why should I be I mean u both in love are married or going to be whatever

Heer: thanks

Kashish : u r welcome sweety

They both laughed and heer was happy to tell her heart out

THAT'S ALL FRIENDS

LOVE AISHWARYA GAYEN

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meeshti jain

@meeshti.

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#486

heyy aishu ............................

ab toh tere pm karne se pehle hi parh liya maine

as usual , i m the first to coment

ur loyal reader

hehehehehhehe

coming to the update .................................

awesome loved it .................................................

preet and arjun part was sooooo hillarious🤣🤣🤣

and prem's dialogue ' lips locked with whom '

hehehehehhehehehe

sooo tu ne soch rakha hai heer ko rulane kaaaa😡

waitinggg...........

pls update soon

Edited by meeshti. - 15 years ago

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Riya

@PrincessPatel77

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#487

awesome update

loved it

please unite prem and heer asap

thanks for the pm

pm me

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mandy60

@mandy60

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#488

awesome update
plz continue soon

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sinak

@sinak

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#489

Awesome. Waiting for Premeer wedding. Plz continue soon

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saba khan

@premeeristry

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#490

wow agar itni hi jaldi updates miltey rahengey na aishu then...................i will be very happy 😃.it was amazing.arjun n preet part was just 😆 😆 😆.aisi koi flirting waali baat ho aur prem chup baithai is it possible.......😕 no.. never........😆

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