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Posted: 15 years ago
hey nice update i hope someone save heer on right time thanks for pm plz update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hiiiiiiiiii aishu

First and foremost for being soooooooo late. I went out of town to celebrate diwali, par now I won't delay it any more.

Thank god aishu yeh update itna darawana nahi tha jitna mene socha tha🤣. Mene socha tha ki pata nahi ish update ke end mein prem hospital mein hoga pata nahi uska kya-2 tota hogašŸ˜†, par yahan toh heer ki jaan par bani hišŸ˜‰. Just because she is our biggest competitor, you are killing her. Arre bechari ko baksh de aishu, varna prem bhi nahi chodega tujhešŸ˜†

Prem was so confused in start about heer's behavior par usse atlast akal aa hi gayišŸ˜†. Ullu she does not remember anything. Heer toh kabhi prem ki baat manegi nahišŸ˜†

Heer bechare ko ek chance de do, dekho varna vo darwaza tooth jayega🤣Heer tum jo cheez tood vood rahi ho, vo arohi kar ghar mein. Yeh bhi yaad nahi tumhe, ruko abhi batayegi tumhe arohi. šŸ˜†

Heer is really funny, at cliff, first she herself asks prem for clarification when he does try to explain, she interrupts him. she is really a unique piece.šŸ˜†

Preet aur kashish ko sach ko nahi pata chala, prem ne unhe kyun bataya, kuch asani hoti heer ko manane meinšŸ˜•. Arjun and arohi are really good for nothing, unhe batake kya fayada hua😔. Aishu ok stop hitting me with belanšŸ˜†, ok I take my words back🤣

I loved it, atlast rishab got a puch from prem🄳. Prem ek aur plz meri taraf se bhi aur ek aishu ki taraf se bhi.this was the best part of this post. Haan aishu hum rishab ko alag tareeke se marege apne sequel mein, vaise hum vo kab shuru kar rahe hai.šŸ˜†

I had goosebumps when that song started. I loved it, just prefect for the situation.šŸ‘šŸ¼

Nice update, especially the song. Aishu ki bachchi agar next time sab theek nahi hua na, tu prem ko main apne saath simla le jaungi hamesha ke liye🤣. Haan-2 I know tu bhi phir wahin bas jayegi uske saath.šŸ˜† Waiting eagerly for your next update. I hope it has loads of scenes between premeer.

Love you

Sia

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: maha_k

really nice and awesommmm part dearšŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘.but plz we can not see prem in pain do something na.but just loved ur update continue soon and thanks for pm😊



well ui too cant see prem like this but i cant do anything tthis is the theme of ma story and ya i l contiinue soon tc
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: PremHeer_Chahat

awesome update
continue soon
thanks for the pm
pm me



heythanks
ya i l contniue as
ap
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: yasu09

another great update..............šŸ‘



thanksyasu
take care dear

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: meeshi.

hiiiiiiiiiiii its such a sad update

i hate that rishabh
bechare prem heer
waiting to know
wat gonna happen
i think prem is going to save her
plz update soon



iknowderaitwasasadupdatebutidonthaveanotheroptionand ya i hate rishabh too
ya i l update soon

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Suhana Ahmed

hey Ashwarya,hi suhana how r u firstly i like to tell u nowadays ur repliesd are bigger u have started talking too much thats really good i love it and do update mas soon or il kill u


thanx alot dear for updating despite of your busy scedule... diwali and all...
you are such a darling... love you for this...shahah thanks to u and ya i l continue asap

and wow!!! very very nice update... dont worry dear i am not going to kill you... coz i felt the story is proceeding well... the things needed to be like that... and trust me i am enjoying reading all this...thank u for understanidng as this is the basic theme of ma story

obviously its very sad but i am damn sure this will lead to a very very happy ending of this wonderful FF...thanks u for ur confidence in me

rishabh...errr...😔 kill that b****y disgusting freak... i mean how can a guy go so far in taking a revenge... the photos thing was too bad... i am warning you Ash you have to plan the worst death for him otherwise me and other readers wont spare you...ya ya i have planned everything the story will soon take a big twist with rishabhs end and prems heers new love saga

bechara Prem... i can feel his pain... and also Heer... lives of both are ruined just coz of a b*s***d...yA REALLY BLOODY FREAK KAHIN KA


and the reaction of Heer is very well described... breaking glass and all... very well done...šŸ‘TTHANK U SWEETY

and Heer is going to commit a suicide??? NOOOOO... but i am damn sure Prem will break in at the right moment... and the Hero will save the Heroine...hahah thats a sequeal wait and watch

but now i am wondering how will Heer come to know the real story??? have you planned it yet... make it really really awesome...ya planned every bit of the story it will be a dramatic knowing of truth

and promise me you will update asap....
will be eagerly waiting...ya i will tc

loads of love,
Suhana.

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Posted: 15 years ago



thanks dear take care
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: luv_kdmhmd

Hiiiiiiiiii aishuhihihiihi sia

First and foremost for being soooooooo late. I went out of town to celebrate diwali, par now I won't delay it any more.its ok dear i really dont mind u should attend all festivals with full joy

Thank god aishu yeh update itna darawana nahi tha jitna mene socha tha🤣. Mene socha tha ki pata nahi ish update ke end mein prem hospital mein hoga pata nahi uska kya-2 tota hogašŸ˜†, par yahan toh heer ki jaan par bani hišŸ˜‰. Just because she is our biggest competitor, you are killing her. Arre bechari ko baksh de aishu, varna prem bhi nahi chodega tujhešŸ˜†hhaha prem ke liye main kisi ko bhi maar sakti hun tu age aage dekh and prem is so sweety pie main usse hospital kaise pohochau tu bol

Prem was so confused in start about heer's behavior par usse atlast akal aa hi gayišŸ˜†. Ullu she does not remember anything. Heer toh kabhi prem ki baat manegi nahišŸ˜†

hahah prem is real ullu tab hi to hume chhod uss chudail ke peche bhag raha hai
Heer bechare ko ek chance de do, dekho varna vo darwaza tooth jayega🤣Heer tum jo cheez tood vood rahi ho, vo arohi kar ghar mein. Yeh bhi yaad nahi tumhe, ruko abhi batayegi tumhe arohi. šŸ˜†usiliye tod rahi hai usse thodi na nuksaan hoga bechari arohhiiii

Heer is really funny, at cliff, first she herself asks prem for clarification when he does try to explain, she interrupts him. she is really a unique piece.šŸ˜†ekdam unique akl naam ki cheez bhagwan ne diya hi nahi usse

Preet aur kashish ko sach ko nahi pata chala, prem ne unhe kyun bataya, kuch asani hoti heer ko manane meinšŸ˜•. Arjun and arohi are really good for nothing, unhe batake kya fayada hua😔. Aishu ok stop hitting me with belanšŸ˜†, ok I take my words back🤣ok ok aage fayda hoga dont worry aur preet ko to maine isiliye nahi bataya kyunki tab prem ko jyada support milta aur heroine asani se mil jaati uss ebhi pata chale hume chhod heer ko patana kitan bhari par sakta hai usse

I loved it, atlast rishab got a puch from prem🄳. Prem ek aur plz meri taraf se bhi aur ek aishu ki taraf se bhi.this was the best part of this post. Haan aishu hum rishab ko alag tareeke se marege apne sequel mein, vaise hum vo kab shuru kar rahe hai.šŸ˜†jald hi and i too love that part thoda aur peetne ka maann tha mera usse

I had goosebumps when that song started. I loved it, just prefect for the situation.šŸ‘šŸ¼thanks

Nice update, especially the song. Aishu ki bachchi agar next time sab theek nahi hua na, tu prem ko main apne saath simla le jaungi hamesha ke liye🤣. Haan-2 I know tu bhi phir wahin bas jayegi uske saath.šŸ˜† Waiting eagerly for your next update. I hope it has loads of scenes between premeer.mujhe do teen part aur de main sab thik kar dungi promissse

Love you

Sia

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Posted: 15 years ago
Authors note: hey friends m back with an update for u
I know I made u guys wait so long almost 1 and half weeks m so sorry for that
Even I had to tell something more this is my last update till 7 of november as I l have my periodical tests from next wekk so no more time available for me at all

Well I had lots of fun in the phase of celebrations I hope u guys too had lots of fun
Ok now I will continue with the story lots of chatar patar I have already done so no more head eating



--------- PART ' 13-----------




HERE PREET AND ALL WITH PREM HEADING ENTERED THE HOUSE BY OPENING THE LOCK

Prem : heer heer

And they went to her bedroom which was even locked from inside

Preet saw through the glass

Preet: heer no heer damn open the door heer


THEY WERE TRYING TO BREAK THROUGH THE DOOR EVEN PREM WAS SHOUTING
SEEING HEER


PREM : heer no plz open the door

Everyone outside was panicking


BUT HEER WAS FIRMED TO HER DESCISION SHE WAS STANDING WITH A KNIFE IN HER HANDD

Heer: I hate u prem I hate u
SHE TOOK THE KNIFE UPTO HER Wrist and SHE was going to do a deep cut to her wrist she just put the knife to her wrist
And prem and preet broke through the door

Prem: heer
Heer ! what leave the knife ( he went ahead and snatched the knife from her hand and was looking angrily to her at that moment prems heart was in his hand he felt like he was going to loose everything )

Heer : jst leave me I don't want to live any more ( she tries to snatch the knife back and was clutching prems collar and here preet , arohi , and arjun were shocked and were standing on the door and was watching everything which is out of their belief and thinking they cant make out what was happening)

Prem: heer leave the knife ( and then he slapped heer as she was out of her senses)

Heer: how dare u ha it is my life and main iske sath jo bhi karu

Prem: ( he is in great anger he holds on heers arms and ) I know I know its ur life but damn it why don't u understand that u r my lifee u r my life

Heer: stop this play ok enough is enough give back the knife and (she tries to grab on the knife )


AND THEN AROHI ,ARJUN ,PREET AND KASHISH COMES TO HEER

Preet : heer what were u doing have u losted ??( he turns heer to herself )

Heer: I don't want to live preet plz let me go plz ( and with that she brokes into preets arm sobbing and crying)

Preet: ( he makes his hand through her hair) don't cry what happened tell me heer

Prem: heer plz calm down


AND THIS SYMPATHETIC WORDS OF PREM MADE HEER MORE ANGRY

Heer: u just get out of my sight what a shameful perjurer u are I mean tumhe jo chahiye tha tumhe mill gaya now what ??? ha u betrayed me , used me , slept with me when I was not in my senses now what more ha

THE WORDS ECHOED IN THE ROOM AND PREET ,ARJUN , AROHI AND KASHISH WERE ALL IN SHOCK HEARING THOSE WORDS

Arjun: heer ye kya keh rahi ho

Arohi : heer u know what u r saying ????

Preet : heer ( he saw heers face which was teling everything)
Prem whats heer saying ha ???/

Prem : ( he was silent as he doesn't have anything to say the person he loved most is now acting like insane )

Preet : u bloody ********

( and with that preet clutched prems collar and gave him a punch which resulted into prems corner of mouth bleed )

arjun : preet plz let him go its not right time to fight

preet: u just stay away arjun
tu hamesha iski side leta hai and see what he did ??? I m going to kill this ****

arohi : heer plz unhe roko plz

preet : ( he moves ahead and gave him another punch which made prem fall on the floor but still he remained quite )

arohi : heer please unhe roko


heer : ( seemed quite and remained silent with half sobbing )

kashish : preet usse chhodo plz preet

preet : I forgave u evrytime prem juneja but not this time what do u think of urself ha
now u watch main tumhe jail tak le jaunga

( and this time when preet was again going to punch him heer stopped them by her words )

heer : preet !

( everyoone stares at her even prem too )

heer : book my tickets for the next flight to canada I am leaving ''.




That's it friends I know its one of my very small updates but I don't have much time to write anything else I hope u guys undertsand
I promise if I get time I l surely update one more part before my exams

Tc all
Love you guys

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Edited by aishwaryagayen - 15 years ago

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