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Posted: 15 years ago
hii as u say ashwarya
but i hope u will update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago

hi Aishu

🤣…..😆…..saari problems ko tera hi address kyun milta hai😆.

Ok lets be serious its ok not a problem if you cant update, vaise bhi I want to remember last update for long. I guess god is on my side😉. But don't you think it will be quite long if you update on 24. but its ok I know if you update before that than you will. Atleast do me a favor mere comment ka reply karde, kyunki I am dieing to read it. I check it everyday but alas you have not replied yet. you know na mujhe tere replies bahut pasand hai. I hope teri saari problems tujhe chod kar door bagh jaye🤣. Not a problem, update as soon as you can.

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mish1996

its awesome plzz update 12 part soon and pm me..



ya i l update after 24 of the month and i l surely pm u
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: angel82

aishwarya, omg they slept together but heer wasnt in her senses....oh poor prem, whatever he appologised and confessed was atually unheard by her....

oh now she is going to misunderstand him and hate him more....gosh i cant wait to read ahead...
one sugeestion, can u use a smaller font...it is soo big ....lolz



heysweetheart
ya everything is ruined all prem confessed is not remembered by her
wel to hate him more or not will be revealed afterwards
and u have to wait a few day sweetheart
m too busy
ya i l use smaller fonts from next time
thanks for the suggestion

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: angel82

aishwarya, omg they slept together but heer wasnt in her senses....oh poor prem, whatever he appologised and confessed was atually unheard by her....

oh now she is going to misunderstand him and hate him more....gosh i cant wait to read ahead...
one sugeestion, can u use a smaller font...it is soo big ....lolz



heysweetheart
yups bechara prem ab uska bhagwan hi bhala kare
and i l update after 24 i l try to be fast but if i cant then 24 is the date
ya i l use smaller fonts next time thanks for the suggestion ur suggestions are always welcomed
tc

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: luv_kdmhmd

Hi aishu hi bhootni

Meri sweety kaisi hai? How is your leg now?better tera comemnt padh ke better ho gaaya haisorryyaariwassobusyicantreplytourcommentsnor
urffihavejstreplieditwatchitandeveniwillreplytoursixthpart
itwasawesumbaadmeinhisahiparmainreplyjarurkarungi

You dedicate it to me. Wow , this part was for me'''..it was sooooooooo good. I don't have words to say how good it was. Ya I was waiting eagerly for it. and thank god you took my advice and didn't update a promo and straight away went ahead with update. I love you for this. I wish yeh kabhi kahatam hi nahi hota. 😉. I am sure prem would have like that, wouldn't he? Now to update.haha ya i used ur suggestion of updating and explaining well heres ur comments ha i too wish ye kabhi khatm na hota prem would have blushed hahahaa

He loves soooooo much, hai naa aishu. He cares for her, that why he is taking her to his house than the hospital😊. Doc aap toh aise keh rahe hai jaise ki prem ne kaha aur heer maan jayegi🤣.hmm he loves heer too much yahi to prrob hai hume pyaar nahi karta bewkoof kahi ka
ha doc bechara kare bhi to kya
aur ye agar hospital mein heer hoti to romance kaise hota jungli
waise i made sense heer was drunk aur agar hospital le jaate t o heer ke khilaf case banta to prem ne use trouble se bachan eke liye ye kiya par khud hi ab trouble me ohasega

Prem vo behosh isliye tumne uska haath pakad liya. Varna thapad lage hote dus😆.hahaha dhishummmmmmmmmmmmm chatkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

Aishu I really loved this song. I had never listened to it, but the lyrics were sooo touchy, perfect for the situation. The way you expressed prem's moves and gestures on each and every line was soooooooo good.yaits a sufi song by kailash kher

Aisha lag raha hai, that prem only needed a kiss from heer and then he was reading to show how much loves her.🤣 just kidding sweety I loved prem's confession. he really can't live without her anymore. Plz don't keep them apart for long. It was so natural for them to come so close.hahaha main unhe alag hi rakhungiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii nahi
nahi yaar main jaldi milwa dungi dont worry par next update will be a total shock aur uss update ke baad ka update to bahot waited hai

Its not good that heer forgot about everything, she could not remember what she said to him, how she felt to be in his arms. She couldn't see the man who was next to her but the moment he hugged her, she knew, this means she recognizes his closeness, his warmth. Where prem was thinking that he got the best gift of his life, finally got the gal he loved the most and here she would just insult him again. Aishu ki bachchi tum naa inhe dor hi rakhna. Pehle ki misunderstanding kam thi ki jo aur badha di😡hah she cant remember now par baad mein to yaad aayega haaha bechara prem itne insult ke baad bhi heer ka hi sochta hai kaash mujhe bhi aisa mr perfect hota
main hun misunderstandings ki raniiiiiiiii ahhahahaahahh

Hmmm rishab ne college mein bhi tamasha kiya.😡, yaar mujhe laga tha yeh insaan aur nahi gir sakta, but I think he has decided to prove me wrong every time.😈. I would love to kill him. and why couldn't prem stop it. hamesha late hi poochna😡. Vaise aaj jaldi pooch gaye toh ab heer tumhe nahi chodegi🤣. Bechara😆yupscollege ka tamasha bad mein pata chalega haha arishabh ko main aasmaan se giraungi and we l plan a sequeal together to kill rishabh okkkk ha ye prem na bahot inpunctual hai aur iss baar time pe aake sab gadbad ab bhookto

But thinking from heer's pov I think what will happen next would be justified. She was not in her senses and she doesn't remember what prem said to her. I hope prem bechara next update ke baad sahi salamat bache🤣i too hopoe prem ki haddiya sahi salamat bache

I loved it aishu🤗. Atlast you updated. I loved every bit of it. pata nahi why but I don't want to read that confrontation. After so long premeer are together, I don't want it to end. But I know it will end thanx to you🤣. Carry it on sweety, yeh phir ek honge and this time nobody could separate them. I know you will let that happen😊yaaaaaaa jaldiii hi aisa hogaaaaaaa

Loved it truly in all sense. It was a beautiful update. Did you notice aaj kal main kuch zyada hi lamba reply post kar rahi hoo, soch rahi hoon next time kam likho😉. Par mujhe pata tu mujhe mar dalegi toh I guess aise hi rehne dete hai.
aha mere paas chudailoein ko bhi marne ka formula hai tu mat samajhna tu bach jayegiiii hmmmmm
love
Sia

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Ashwarya,hey suhana

first of all i am really very very sorry for not commenting on part 10... that was really very sweet 😳 of you to dedicate that part to me... and me a stupid fool.... reserved a place but forgot to comment😕... i hope you will not take that very seriously and will forgive my for my mistake...m so very angry u said sorry theres no sorry in friendship i understand it happens i might be busy its ok no need to embaraase me by saying sorry hmm and u r not stupid fool u r too sweet

i really am SORRY dear!!! plz naa forgive me... *holding ears*...hmm well u look cute holding ears hahahaha

and i promise i will get back commenting for both parts,10 and 11... as soon as i finish reading your latest update...

so this spot is **reserved** for my comments on part 10 and 11...

**unreserved**


see i am back just as i promised...

so here goes the comment for both marvelous parts...

PART 10

ok first of all thanx alot for dedicating that part to me... i am so 😳 at this gesture of yours...well its my duty to dedicate a part to my sweet friends

and next... the incident you had to face in the class... come on yar... some people are just jealous of your abilities... such morons tend to tease you and bring down your moral whenevr they get a chance of doing that... so the simple most solution to deal with all this is... IGNORE them... and give it a damn to all crap they speak about you... ek kaan se suno aur dosre se bahar nikalo... your life would be much more easier...
haha i have started doing that ya my classmates are jst weird fellowssss
and oh my GOD!!! what you did to your leg??? i really hope you must have been fine by now...ya ya i m fine now dont worry


ok now lets come to the main thing... THE UPDATE!!!

do i need to say time and time again... that you are doing a fantastic job... trust me dear... you really are too good with words...m glad to hear that

though it was a bit short part but i really enjoyed reading...ok next time big update

so that's the real story behind... i knew that Prem isnt that much responsible for all.. i knew from the moment you mentioned rishabh, that stupid idot a**h*** had some serious relation with all the troubles in Heer's life... disgusting freaky psysho... ruined Premeer's life... plz yar Ash kill him... and plan the worst death for him... i can suggest very very painfull ways to end his life... and HELLO that doesnt mean that i am very brutal and cruel... i am a very sweet girl... trust me... bit jab Rishabh ka naam aata hai tou... errrr... my blood boils...ahhhaha really well yaya u r even included in plaanig a death for him m ther with u and i know u r too sweet even his character boils my blood well its not jst the real story there is more in behind keep waiting nex part i l update the whole back story

and Preet's reaction towards the situation was very cool... a true friend he is... i wish he wish he would have thrown that idiot down the cliff...nahiiiiiiii yaar woh ye karta to jail mein hotaaaaa usse to cliff se main giraungi woh bhi imagination power se

poor Prem... though he isnt totally innocent (it was a bet for him in the begining) but still he tried to clarify but she misunderstood him...yayayay sab golmaal ho gaya

and then the accident... you described that scene very nicely... Prem's reaction and all was very well well written ...i am obliged to heat that


so that's it for part 10... i hope i made up for my mistake by giving such detailed comments...
now you are happy naa... and forgiven me naa???arre haa meri maaa maaf kar diya tujheeee ab paka mat

and here goes for latest update...

PART 11

ahh... pretty hot... much awaited Premeer romantic moments finally happened...hhmmmm it was kind ahot

very well written...

but again yar... part was very short... i couldnt get enough... plz hun... make a bigger part next time....surely

but what the hell??? Heer didnt remember anything... why why why???to create some twist say twist say twist

plz yar clear up everything now... i just want them to be together...itni jaldi kya hai thoda maza aane do hahahaha m the villain

and you were right that part really came up as a treat... except for Heer not remembering the night moments...ohh so sorry next time after night i l surely make heer remember everything actualay m plaaning a traic end to the story dont u think it will be interesting ookokok sorry no lkidding no tragedya and saas bahu dramam

and now i am wating even more eagerly for next part as you said you will be giving a shocker in that one...

plz update asap... warna main pm bhej bhej kar tumhara jeena mushkil kar doon gi... and mark my words dear i will really do that if i dont get an update in less than 4 0r 5 days...hayey suhana ji aapke ideas to weird hote jaa rhae hai

ok i think thats enough of my chatter patter... agar kuch aur likha main tou you will think of me as a big time PAKAO... and i really dont want people to get that impression about myself...
no no i have gud impression about u chalo koi to mila mere aur sia ke jaise chatar patar karne walal
**edit**
oops... i forgot to mention about the song "saiyyan"... you know what??? when i went to bed last night i remembered that i havent written anything about the song in my comment... and then i decided that i will do that in the morning... immediately after i get my hands on the pc... silly me naa???hmmmmm

the song was very well chosen... it fit the situation completely... i love the song from the time Mouni Roy performed on it in Zara Nach ke Dikha... from then since whenever i hear that song it gives me goosebums... and same happened while reading your update...hahaha well a coincidence i also didnt know the song but after i saew mouni dancing i started liking the songgggggg i did an investigation and found the song and it became my faavourite

i really appreciate you for chosing this song... awesome job done...

ok dear...
have fun...
love you loads
Suhana.

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: prempadmasujal

kitni achi update hai
i love it
iam waiting for next part
update the next part asap
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz


thanksdear
well will try to update asap but i doubt not till 24

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: --Sarah--

beautiful update..loved it
OMG Heer was not in her sense? this is going to create more misunderstanding
Poor Prem..her confessed but she was not in her sense
can't wait for the next update



thanksdear
hahaha ya it will create more misunderstandings
hahaa
weel u have to wait a little bit
till 24 ok
tc

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: 9rpatel

awesome update

please don't seperate Heer and Prem again!!! Please
continue asap
thanks for the pm
pm me



thanks
well i wont but bear me htis time
ya will continue soon
take care
and m glad u wrote some lines rather than only thnaks and pm me

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