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Mall Encounter


Hey, this shot I'm actually typing from my cellphone. So if the format is messed up, excuse that ne? ^_^ Also, it hasn't been beta-ed aka edited, so excuse the totally crap plot line. =) Try to enjoy.

Meera frowned as she allowed herself to be pulled in the section clearly labeled as "Men's clothing". She stared at her smirking friends and wondered what they were upto this time. She swore mentally, cursing herself for saying yes to their trip to the mall with the Twin Devils aka Kiran and Rinki. It was no secret in their group of friends that when these two would get together, chaos would occur. Mischief was their most prominent trait that they shared and what bonded them as twinnies.
"Ah girls, exactly what are we doing on this side of the mall" Meera asked, following her friends curiously. It also was a well known fact that Meera was naturally curious and often ended up helping the two with their plans.
"Shopping" replied the youngest of the three, Kiran with a snicker.
Meera raised her brow as Kiran glanced at her partner in crime, Rinki who was looking around while tapping her chin.
"And what are you looking for?" Meera narrowed her eyes as the two nodded their heads with twin smirks, seeming to communicate telepathitically.
"Aha!" Rinki suddenly yelled, pointing at something all the while causing Meera to jump startled. She proceeded to glare at Rinki who simply smiled innocently at her.
She sighed and shook her head with a small smile as she watched them walk ahead of her, stopping at times to pick a piece of clothing and criticize it in their own andaaz.
She pulled out her cell and flipped through the contacts before coming to stop at the name of the one person who was more than likely to know what these two were planning, Tonema.
While she waited for a reply, she turned her eyes back to the two whispering while holding some clothes. Meera tried to remember if someone's birthday was coming up that they'd shop for him, but none came to mind.
The phone vibrated in her hand just as Rinki began to walk towards her. Checking the message quickly, she was disappointed to see the "idk, they didn't temme anythin".
"Here hold this Meera" Rinki said, plopping something in her arms and walking with Kiran to another isle before Meera could utter a word. Turning her eyes to the article of clothing in her hands, she stared at it with wide eyes.
Black silk boxers with red hearts stared back at her innocently. A shocked meep left her as she turned to look at her friends who were quickly walking away from her frozen frame. With narrowed eyes, she began to chase after them quickly, ready to lecture them.
Just as she reached them, they both separated and went in opposite directions, making way for Meera to walk straight into someone else. Bright brown eyes stared at her with slight amusement and concern. Warm broad hands held her up, breaking the fall that would've costed her a bruised bum.
Messy brown locks decorated his head and his well built frame was shielded by the tight green shirt he wore with faded blue jeans. Ending their starefest session, she moved to stand without his support, instantly missing his warmth and broad shoulders under her hands.
She watched with mortification as he held up the boxers, stared at them curiously before turning to look her up and down, a crease between his brows and a smirk lighting up his face. She flushed bright red before beginning to stutter out an answer.
"They're not mine" his only reply was to tilt his head, causing her to clarify her answer.
"My friend gave them to me, I'm a girl, and I...umm, yah" she scratched her head as he smiled softly before handing the boxers over to her. She took with a sheepish grin.
"How about you explain more about these over dinner at 8?" He said in a deep voice that sent shivers down her spine.
"Excuse me?" She blinked at him, startled.
"If you'd rather not--"
"No!" She cut him off, before turning red as he stared at her amused.
"I mean, uh yeah. Sure, i'd like that actually" she stated with a soft smile. Mentally she was arguing with herself over saying yes to a complete stranger but her heart told her he was someone she could trust, so she listened to that one side. It had never led her astray before.
"Great. I'm Shahid, by the way" he held out his hand for her.
"Meera" shaking his form hand, she had to stop herself from swooning right there.
They proceeded to exchange numbers and had just finished handing the other's cell back when they heard their names being called.
"Meera!" Kiran stood at the side waving at her to come.
"Shahid!" A man stood a while away motioning for him to hurry up.
"Well, I'll see you tonight then" he said, gently caressing her cheek before leaning down to peck her forhead lovingly. She whispered a soft goodbye before walking to her friends in a daze.
The rest of the trip was spent with her staring into space, thinking about him while clutching those boxers in her hands. She read the text message for what seemed to be the hunderedth time. It still said the same thing.
"Can't wait to see you again.
xoxo- Shahid"
She didn't even mind that she never found out exactly why Rinki and Kiran were shopping in the men's section. She missed their smirks as they looked back at her while wiggling their brows at one another.

There ya have it. Sucked no? =P
The person I wrote this for, aka Meera already knew I was writing something for her. So not much of a surprise. *shrug*
I hope y'all enjoyed it though.
Like button/Comments/Critisism?
-Rinki

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Posted: 16 years ago
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mine! 😛

*edited*

SHAHID!☺️ Told you ShaMee might be cuter than PreMe!😉😆😆 Although you really didn't have to write this, but I already complained about that enough yea? 😛

Anyways....me shopping with you two? Yeah not a good idea in the first place! 😛😆 You two would CONSTANTLY be upto something!😆😆

But yeah the whole giving me something to hold and me not realizing for a few seconds...VERY realistic, thankfully none of the items have been that bad though! *erm*

But who cares when it helped me meet SHAHID! (I'll stop screaming his name now! 😳) Anyways! 😛 I loved this shot, the conversation has to be the best part though....Hot guy = loss of common sense for me! 😳 *hides* Yeah it's that bad! 😛

But awww he asked me out! And I freaked out!! And he got scared! Loved that! 😆 But sheesh Kimz, wait to come and ruin the moment! *narrows eyes* But it's okay, his cute text made it all better! 😉 but seriously..I actually kept the boxers in my hand? 😲 Idiot! 😆

But I'm with Kimz, I kinda wanna have a sequel just to know why we were in the mens section, but if you're not in the mood it's fine with me, just tell me on yahoo! 😛

Love you Rinkz,

Meera😳
Edited by indiandoll89 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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You didn't even tell me. :(

*edited*

This was one of those sweet and simple shots. And it was brilliant. I loved it. You managed to write so much from your phone, so thats like already a great thing. I know how the format can be on cell-webs.

Psh, amazingly I don't have much to say. Except that Meera-Shahid were totally adorable. Specially how awkward Meera became with him then, with the boxers in her hands. There should be a sequel to it. 😃

Loved it. 😊
kimz
Edited by kimmu - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@ Kiran- I didn't tell anyone. Just posted it, so..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Rinkz, that was hilarious.

But why were the twin devils shopping in the men's section anyways?

Love,
Radz

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Posted: 16 years ago
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really funny one shot!

enjoyed reading it........but why did they all land up in the men's section in th efirst place?
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Radz, you're so unsmart. We were shopping in the men's section cuz that whole shahid-asking-meera-out was our plan. Duhhh!

I'm not sure, but I think thats what it is. 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I know I still have to edit, but I'm with Kimz on this one...That's what I assumed it was as well, knowing those two! 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thnx for the comments and pressing the like buttons, guys. =)
Much appreciated.
Ah....as for why the twins were in that certain section in the first place, well that will be left a secret until I get to writing a sequel. If I ever do. *grins*
Besides, when did the twins ever need an excuse to do something totally wacky? *snickers*
I shall reply back to the comments whenever I get a chance, tht mite be nvr. ^_^ so ill jst say, thanks for reading and enjoying. =)
-Rinki
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Posted: 16 years ago
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^ Read and adored.
Shall get to it someday....prolly this wknd. =]

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