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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ummesulaiman

Rhea where are you?...
Guess who is here with a request......me ...lil ol Fatima.
I'm ready to beg and show you my puppy dog eyes...
Throw a tantrum and do some emotional attyachaar...
Shower you with flowers...
Shower you with dough......(play money of course)
And if all else fails...
I'm even willing to sneak over and hack that computer of yours ....
Oops...I just remembered...I don't know where you live...
So how about if I just say please pretty please...update karo na...

ROFL...Awww am sooo sorryyy...but u noe wat sweety my exams arent ova...deyl get ova on 17th june...I myself am frusterated...But yep i gt a gap...so got dwn to wrk jst fr u...Plz be patient for a few more days...n den il try n b more regular wid my updates...😃😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for updating!
Your FF reminds me of the movie Kahani. When I watched that movie, from the very beginning I tried to connect the dots so that I could predict what would happen next. But I got it all wrong and the climax blew me away.
Your FF is like that. Everytime I read it I try and think about the previous parts and how it could be added up and make an assumption about the story, only to be more amazed and curious at your next update. Your story is very intriguing, maybe cos there is so much left to be revealed. The character of Preet is a real mystery, and after this update I'm getting curious about Sameer too.
All the best for your exams and try to update soon.
Edited by nikitagmc - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Rhea_401

ROFL...Awww am sooo sorryyy...but u noe wat sweety my exams arent ova...deyl get ova on 17th june...I myself am frusterated...But yep i gt a gap...so got dwn to wrk jst fr u...Plz be patient for a few more days...n den il try n b more regular wid my updates...😃😉

First of all Rhea thanks for the update...
But OMG...what a freeking fab update...I'm left spellbound by your FF...
I can't make heads or tails out of the story you are so cleverly weaving...
and I'm loving it...
Preet is so damn mysterious...
and I'm praying Meher will be alright..
Uff Rhea! Your cliff hangers are going to kill me one day...
Waiting eagerly for June 17th to fly by, so I can read the next update. Keep up the great work!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part-14
She stopped midway as Preet stood up suddenly, flung his pad away and made his way to where she sat making her freeze in shock.
He pulled her up forcefully and dragged her towards the bedroom.
He pinned her against the wall. They stood inches apart from each other. She could feel his unsteady breath against her cheek. Her heart hammered wildly against her chest. His deep penetrating gaze making her go weak in her knees. Minutes passed by, while both of them stood transfixed, lost into each other's eyes.
A wave of cold air gushed into the room bringing them back into reality. Preet tightened his hold on her wrists, twisting them , he turned her around violently making her back hit his chest. Meher shut her eyes in pain and fear.
"Jab maine kaha I wanted to talk to you", his harsh voice broke the long reigning silence, "I wanted to get to know you Meher Mann and not some Sameer Khanna!!!"
She opened her eyes to find herself standing in front of the mirror.
"Main iss ladki ko janna chahta hun, jisse tum iss aayne mei dekh rahi ho, tum chahe apna hairstyle, dressing sense, social culture, puri living kyun na badal lo, tum aaj bhi wahi Meher Mann ho!"
"Tum- tum kehna kya chahte ho", she asked timidly.

Sighing Preet freed her from his clutches, "Sit down Meher, we need to talk", he said calmly.
'I think I'd better be going", Meher hated the way her voice shock revealing her innermost fears to the man standing in front of her.
"Sit down!", Preet repeated more fiercely making it clear that it would be dangerous to disobey.
Exhausted she slumped on to to the sofa.
"Kaha kya kehna chahte ho...I don't think we have any thing to talk about...Mujhe pata hai tum kya karne wale ho", she said.
"Oh achha", one of his brows lifted in sardonic enquiry.
"So you can read my mind, huh?", he said...
"Mind reading has nothing to do with it!...It's quite obvious that Sameer knows nothing about my past life and that could damage me badly if that were all to come out. "And obviously tum issi cheez ka fayda uthana chahte ho..Mujhse badla lene ke liye"
"Badla? he asked as if genuinely suprised...You don't know anything Meher...One things for sure you and I have one hell a lot of unfinished business between us!!"
Edited by Rhea_401 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for the PM Rhea! 😃
First of all I hope your exams went well. Now on to the update:
Wow! For a minute I was afraid for Meher...Preet comes off as being a bit too rough with her...I don't want to say rapist like Sherma did in her comment once...but yeah...the thought did cross my mind...😆
There is obviously an attraction there, no matter how much Meher tries to deny it. But I'm totally confused...don't know what past Meher is talking about...the only thing we were shown was that one night Preet comforted her after her friend's death...but nothing happened...so I'm like totally confused. 😕 Why would that destroy things between her and Sameer? Unless she feels Preet will exagerate the situation to Sameer. Fine with me...I mean I want things to get destroyed between them...but still...not at the risk of ruining Meher's general reputation.
I hope Meet's talk in the next part will shed some light on the situation.
Eagerly waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ummesulaiman

Thanks for the PM Rhea! 😃
First of all I hope your exams went well. Now on to the update:
Wow! For a minute I was afraid for Meher...Preet comes off as being a bit too rough with her...I don't want to say rapist like Sherma did in her comment once...but yeah...the thought did cross my mind...😆
There is obviously an attraction there, no matter how much Meher tries to deny it. But I'm totally confused...don't know what past Meher is talking about...the only thing we were shown was that one night Preet comforted her after her friend's death...but nothing happened...so I'm like totally confused. 😕 Why would that destroy things between her and Sameer? Unless she feels Preet will exagerate the situation to Sameer. Fine with me...I mean I want things to get destroyed between them...but still...not at the risk of ruining Meher's general reputation.
I hope Meet's talk in the next part will shed some light on the situation.
Eagerly waiting for the next update.

Well yea my xams were okay...thank u...d only think dat concerns me ryt nw is dat de are ova...😉
Well Preet is a very different character...He's nt one of dos lovey dovey kinda boys...He's one of those rowdy, passionate, not so gentlemen lyk guyz...Not vry expressive bout wat he truly feels...There's a lot to his char dat shall be revealed as d story unfolds.😳
As fr d past Meher is worried bout...Well if u happen to go thro chap 11 of the story u'l get to noe..😊
Cheers,
Rhea
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Rhea_401

Well Preet is a very different character...He's nt one of dos lovey dovey kinda boys...He's one of those rowdy, passionate, not so gentlemen lyk guyz...Not vry expressive bout wat he truly feels...There's a lot to his char dat shall be revealed as d story unfolds.😳
I actually like Preet's "bad boy" character in your FF......but I just don't understand what his beef is with Meher.
As fr d past Meher is worried bout...Well if u happen to go thro chap 11 of the story u'l get to noe..😊
Okay so I reread Chapter 11...I guess I've totally missed the boat....because it still didn't give me a clue...I guessd I'll have to wait and see how the story unfolds.
Looking forward to the next update...hope it will be soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Rhea

It's been a long time. Glad your exams are over 🥳

chapters 13b & 14A are fab updates. Yeah I agree with Fatima on the point - each ch. builds up the mystery rather than solving it. I guess this is a v. long story.

Well I'm never able to see connection betw. any of prev. chs. however, only impression I got is Meher's afraid for her new life turning upside down. She wants peace.
Even before Preet came into her life suddenly, then left. She was affected by it. Again Preet appeared out of the blue. I didn't get the impression that Meher was open about any of her relationship/ friendship to Sameer re:Preet or any guy. If ever Preet decides to tease Meher & show Sameer that he knew Meher from before, there will be problem. Of course I may be wrong, but that's how I understood so far.

Very intriguing story. Excited to find out what'll you show next.
Thank you.


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Posted: 13 years ago
really intense pls do continue 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Rhea...you can run but you can't hide...
I saw you finally come out of the woodwork and comment on my story.
Welll...now you know what I want...
I demand an update...please pretty please...

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