My First FF of Kis desh-Uptd-17- Nihaal back home.

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Guys this is just an FF fan-fiction ........ enjoy it.........Premeer are together with Chahat...........😊 Part 1

Preet & Meher are thinking about how Premeer can be united again...... Preet asks sad Meher- y she is crying & she reveals to Preet dat Gayatri is d cause of Premeer not being to gather...... Preet goes to Herman for help & Maya thinks its the time to reveal Veeraa's plan .... Althiugh she takes care dat she herself is not caught & reveals to Gayatri dat it was Veeraa who troubled Nihaal & aborted her own child..... G3 asks for d Proof & Maya calls d doctor who aborted Veeraa's child..... Gayatri is now speechless.........πŸ‘

Gayatri tells meher dat she will not be successsful in uniting Premeer & maya says dat she will help meher in doing so....... Maya calls Ashlesha to d Juneja house alongwith Daljit Maan & asks her to stay in d junejaa house itself from today omwards...... Both leave & maya meher decide to trap Ashleshaa & bring out the truth in front of heer as well as Prem...... Maya & herman threaten the lawyer to refuse Gayatri's case of seperating Chahat from Heer & go against Gayatri itself.......... πŸ˜ƒ

Ash in her room tells d truth to Daljit & its captured in a camera dat is fixed by Preet & Herman in Ash's & Daljit's Room........Ash is unaware of dis....... Kulraj calls all for dinner & dis the the time wen Maya & meher show d tape to Prem seeing which prem is very very terribly shocked........ πŸ‘
This is just a fan fict of Kis desh & not the true epi ! Premeer & meet rock.............. i'll edit d remaining post tommorrow for d second & the last part of d fan- fick reply & rate d fan fick out of 5......Tk cr & bye !!!! 😊😲😊
Part 2

Prem desperately tries to contact Heer..... Heer ignores his calls.......He calls Geet & says he has an important work with Heer & meeting Heer now, could make his life...... Prem reveals to Geet dat he is Chahat's dad...... Heer Juneja's have d dinner & Gayatri asks for Prem.... Preet-Meher-Harmann are very scared but Maya says Prem's gone to meet Heer.... G3 is shocked ....... & tells Maya to call him-Meher refuses to do dat & stands strong against evil - Gayatrii....... 😊😊😊

Gayatri is about to Slap Meher- wen Maya holds her hands & says- stop it Gayatri mom- enough is enough.....πŸ‘πŸ˜†πŸ‘ Preet says Maa you can't do dis with meher & not with Heer bhabhi as well..... Herman says you are doing all dis for Veeraa but you know- wat all she did with Nihaal & Heer bhabhi & Maya here is d proof - of all wat Veeraa did- & you too know it dat is not Nihaal's fault in whatever has happened to Veeraa..... Gayatri gets irritated & leaves off........πŸ˜†πŸ˜ƒπŸ‘

Here, Geet comes to Heer & tells her dat she knows Prem is her husband & Chahat's dad & now - She (Geet...) will unite Prem & Heer & give Chahat her Papa back.........Heer says dis cannot be possible... Geet comes in Junejaa house & overhears Gayatri saying dat she will destroy heer....... Geet is jolted...... Heer prays to god nothing wrong happens in Juneja house..Epi ends on Her face......
Rate d fan- fic & enjoy guys.... I'm continuing it after two days......luv to all..... Tk care & Bye !! 😊😊😊

Part 3....

Geet asks Gayatri y she is doing all dis to heer...... Gayatri says - If you want to listen to d reality listen- heer's & Meher's brother Nihaal killed my daughter Veeraa & seized away my mother hood from me.... Hence, I wont let heer step in dis house- no matter how much ever prem loves her.........😑😑 G3 asks Geet, whether she is d same person who saved her from falling off d car & telling her dat her saree has struck inside d car's door........ Geet replies - Yes......... 😲😲😲

Geet says dat she is G3's friend Jasmeet's daughter & Heer's best of the best friend- Gayatri warns her not to help heer in comming to prem & Geet confronts Gayatri, dat she will expose her to Prem for sure & leaves angrily....... Gayatri is shocked & meher & Maya come from back & taunt Gayatri dat her happy days are over......& Prem & Heer happy days have started & dat Premeer will soon be togather alongwith Chahat & d entire Pariwaar in d Junejaa house for sure..... Geet comes to Heer...Epi ends on Heer's face !
Next part tommorrow- slowly comming towards Premeer milan dramaa.....
luv birds dere will soon meet & dere Chahat will become immortal for sure...... Tk care & Bye !!! πŸ‘πŸ˜Š


Part 4....
Epi starts from Heer's face, AS Geet tells Heer dat Gayatri is evil....& she does not want Heer to come back to d Junejaa house at any case......Heer slaps geet and says- Enough is enough Geet- Gayatri Maa is not only Prem but my mom as well..... How dare you say something like dis to her....Geet tries to convince Heer again but Heer ignores her & warns her if she speaks even a word against Gayatri- She will not talk to her at all.....Geet is very sad.....Heer leaves......... 😭😭😭

Heer while going to d office on road sees an accident- heer saves d man's life and is shocked to realise dat the man is none other dan-Maya's dad...Heer is shocked & leaves ....Here, Maya's dad calls mayaa to his house & says dat u & Veeraa spoilt Heer's life & d same heer saved My llife .....Dis is d difference between people like u & Heer.... If you want to pay her debt of saving my life....... u have to unite premeer with Herman & Meet's help at any case....... 😊

Chahat asks Heer- why she came early from d office today & did not talk to Geet aunty as well...Heer goes into flashbacks & remembers Geet's words about Gayatri......Heer ignores Chahat's questions & sends her to do her homework so dat she can play with her friends in d society .... Chahat is very happy & leaves from dere....... Heer calls jasmeet & tells all wat happened between her & Geet & to take care of Geet as well.....Jasmeet agrees to talk to Geet........😊

Prem prays to God to give him Heer back & Gayatri comes from back & asks God to fulfill whatever prem is asking & to give Geet the good sense of not telling anything to Heer.....She says loudly to herself- Who is dere to stop me....... & maya says I'll stop u maa for sure......😊
Part 5....
Gayatri says, Maya - I though you are a good Bahu????? y are you against me like dat Meherr.....Maya says , Maa y are are you doing dis to Heer didi ??????& y are you going to get by seperating a kid like Chahat from her mother......Gayatri says How did you know dat & Maya replies Meher & Preet bhaiyya told her everything about how you are blaming Nihaal for Veeraa's death & indirectly Heer as well.....Veera's death was a pure & mere accident maa.........πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Gayatri says- whatever it may be But I lost my daughter naa ????? would she return ???? Maya is stunned....Seeing all dis- Meher decides to call baujii- Lalit back from Canada to India- Gayatri fixes d date of d case dat she is going to fight against Heer for d custody of her grand daughter & Prem's daughter Chahat....Gayatri appoints another lawyer & pays him triple amount to win d case & not leave it half way in any any case at all ......... 😭

Maya meher decide a plan to throw away this lawyer & involve Kulraj & Baujii in it......Preet & Hermann overhear dere plan & agree to Help dem........In d kitchen meher is cooking food .......Gayatri comes & confronts Her & shouts at her.....As per plan- both purposely have a huge fight done by Meher....& Gayatri beats her & Meher falls of on the oil pan kept for cooking......Maya as per dere plan- captures dis in a video camera & Preet & herman pretend to save Meher.....πŸ‘πŸ‘

Maya says- maa actually u know wat???? u have become old & so u have completely lost it.....Gayatri fights with Maya as well.......Lalit enters in Juneja house from Canada along with Kulraj's husband- Kiran....Maya tells Lalit dat Gayatri tried to Kill Meher by burning her off like a bloody evil mother in law....Preet & Hermann agree & Meher tries to infact Pretends to Defend Gayatri- Gayatri clarifies d incident But no one believes her..All leave & Maya,Meher shake hands... πŸ˜†

Here in Heer's house- chahat goes to play in d Garden- Chahat is alone .....All come with dere parents... Chahat remembers Premeer both together........πŸ‘πŸ‘One of d kids Parent- hints at chahat & says dat she is Prem Junejaa's daughter who is a very big businessman & is constantly in d news.....Chahat overhears dis all.....She runs home & asks Heer whether she is Heer's & Prem daughter or not.....Chahat is angry........ Heer is terribly shocked..Epi ends on Heer's face ...😊😊
Part 6....
Chahat hears all wat the other people say & runs to Heer to know d truth....asks Heer whether she is Heer's & Prem daughter or not.....Chahat is angry........ Heer is terribly shocked..😲😲 Heer says- Prem is not your dad... Your dad is not in dis world now.....A voice follows- "Buss kar Heer !!! Bahut chhupaa liyee sachchaai Chahat se "..Heer turns behind- She sees Kulraj dee with Kiran Meher & Preet & Maya- Hermann....😊

Meherr directly grabs Chahat from Heer's arms & says dat Prem Junejaa is only her dad & dat Heer mamma is lying to her..Heer is very angry & tries to slap Meherr- Baujii stops her as Prem manages to bring Baujii to Heer's house-after Gayatri dramaa is over....Baujii says dat six years ago my son lost his love but today I lost my daughter.Heer cries & requests Baujii not to say like dat..Baujii insists Heer to come in d Junejaa house again..... πŸ˜ŠπŸ‘πŸ˜Š

Gayatri here is very frustrated so as to how to stop Maya & Meherr from bringing Heer to dis house..... The case day arrives & Gayatri's lawyer says Heer Hid Chahat's birth news from Prem for six long years......& Prem faced mental torture from Heer continuously even after they met back ....All are present but on Meher & Maya's instructions- no one speaks in Heer's favor at all.... Gayatri wins Chahat's custody....... Heer faints in court......... 😲😭

Gayatri is very very happy as Heer is lost & taunts Maya dat she has won & lost & Gayatri herself has lost & won the game...... She has won her Prem's Chahat..... Maya says - Don't be overconfident maa, you don't know wat I have done & u don't know wat Meher is going to do as well.....Wen you will see d consequences, u will also faint- like how Heer bhabhi fainted in d court....Time will tell who has won & who has lost now........ πŸ˜ƒ

Chahat plays with Prem.....Prem some how feels Heer is coming near to him... "Kis desh title song plays in d background & jugnii dances in the rain happily ..... Meher calls Maya & says plan is successful..... Maya smiles......Baujii kulraj & others are back home....Gayatri feels as if Heer & prem are coming closer & closer ..... Chahat falls off d staircase...😲 Heer saves Chahat from falling & enters Prem's house with her bag......Gaytri is shocked how come Heer bought so much of Luggage with her........Daljit & ashlesha are shocked & Heer declears she will stay in Junejaa house from now on.....Gayatri remembers Maya's words & Meher enters with Heer in d house.......πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘..... Epi ends on Heer's face...😊😊
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Part 7....
Chahat comes down in d hall from Premeer's room with Kulraj's son, all other kids & Meher & Preet's daughter Gungunn....... Maya says come lets play every one & takes all d kids & everyone else as well follows Maya.... Gayatri & Heer stay dere alone .... Chahat stays with Heer as she does not realize Maya & feels shy to go with her to play..... Chahat asks Heer y dis choclatewali aunty keeps on meeting us eveywere..... (Lol even Chahat is fed up of G3 it seems........πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† ) G3 smiles..... πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜Š

Meher comes to call Chahat alongwith Maya.....Heer refuses & leaves with Chahat.....Maya says to Gayatri- Remember maa wat I said to u..... time will tell who wins & who looses......Actually we did not speak in favor of Heer didi in court because we purposely wanted Heer di to come to d Juneja house & we knew very well dat not for Prem bhaiyaa but atleast for Chahat- heer dii would return to d junejaa house for sure in any the hell case..........G3 is shocked......Maya is happy again......... πŸ˜†

Maya calls her dad on his mobile & saks about his health.....She tells her dad she completed d promise dat she gave him & brought heer di- not in Prem's life but atleast in d junejaa house permanently....πŸ˜• Her dad talks to her & tells her to thank Heer for saving his life dat day......Maya agrees & calls Heer down in d hall.... Hearing Maya calling Heer- Meher & Prem also arrive with Preet & hermann as well.... while comming Chahat sees Veeraa's photo & asks Heer, where dis aunty has gone away.....

Heer says dis is Veeraa bua- who has gone to d God's house......& will never come back- Chahat- Gayatri & Heer all three are sad & Chahat asks Heer- Y she went to God ???? G3 says- d people who are liked by God are taken away......😊 Chahat says to Gayatri-Thank god - God does not like you or else you would also go to Veeraa Bua & who would gimme my choclates den ?????? Maya & Meher burst out of laughter.....Heer looks at Chaht angrily...... G3 is very sad....... πŸ˜†

Prem leaves from dere as all leave- Meher & Heer are alone & Maya signals Meher & leaves 4m dere.... Meher tells Heer dat Gayatri does not want her in d house ..... Heer remembers Geet's words about Gayatri , but she ignores it & asks meher to shut her mouth......Meher tells Heer dat that night nothing happened between Prem jijoo & Ashleshaa at all & dat Heer mis- understood Prem for six long years, Meher agrees to give Heer d proof.. Heer is very shocked.. Epi ends dere..... 😲
Part 8....
All in d juneja house are having dinner.......😊😊😊 Premeer are missing & cute Chahat asks, were is mummy & papaa now..... Gayatri is shocked as chahat calls premeer mummy & papa- Meher & Preet & Maya Hermann are happy..... All are very happy & have d dinner completely..... All are very satisfied as - as usual Heer d sushil bahu cooks d food for all after a long long gap of six years......& Gayatri repents Her decision of Chahat's custody & leaves irritatedly.......πŸ‘πŸ˜†

All leave- only premeer remain dere alone & Prem picks up Heer on his shoulders - Heer feels occuvered & embaressed But she does not say anything......Maya - Meher are all set for d final Blow to the Ashleshaa chpater......Prem puts her on d bed (Heer..) & kisses her on d forehead & cries saying- i'm innocent Heer- i'm innocent..... You punished me for no reason all dese years & I as well did not stop u from going as I too did not know wat actually happened.........on dat night ......have a look please...... 😲

Maya-Meher-Hermann- Preet & d entire family is in Premeer's room by now- Along with alll d kids of the house & Ash's confession tape is put on.......Geet enters with jasmeet- with d proofs against Gayatri as well......HEER SEES THE TAPE FINALLY......... 😊 Gayatri is shocked and so are all..... Heer curses herself for mis-understanding Prem & faints due to shock.... The episode ends on her face..........😊😊😊
Next on Sunday- Premeer unite on Ganpati day.....Yeah !! 😊😊
Part 9...
Heer runs to Chahat's bedroom- Prem goes behind her & hugs her from back- Lalit tells all not to follow Premeer & to let them be alone for all the unflown emotions to flow off today & clear d rift of mis-understandings dat is in between premeer for six very long years..... Heer tells Chahat to leave d room & later falls into Prem's feet...... Heer is still crying & so is Prem too.......the voice of her cries echos- all over d Junejaa house & all are waiting outside d room with great patience & eagerness as well..... πŸ˜²πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ƒ

Heer tells prem - dat when he knew d truth ! y did he hide it from Her & tolerated all wat allegations she made- & Prem says - he came to know all now itself -with the help of Maya & Meher as well.....Gayatri at d door steps hears all dis & is shocked .....Gayatri goes to confront Maya & meher & is about to slap her on her face when Lalit enters & slaps Gayatri hard on her face only.........Maya -Meher are terribly shocked & tell Lalit not to insult gayatri as she is their Mom.....(Oh God ! only Heer's sister can do this)...😊😊😊😊

Gayatri realises (Pretends to realize) her mistake & asks for forgiveness from Heer- meher- Prem & d entire family.....Ash is about to ask forgiveness to heer But Heer slaps her on her face- dat too not once- but thrice very very hard.....Heer says -If u did dis with me alone-I would forgive u......But because of ur silly act- My daughter - My world Chahat lost her father for six long years- go get lost from dis house- my world- gayatri pretends to Favor heer & pushes Ash & Daljit out of d house & hugs Heer........ 😊

In juneja house- Ganpati is celebrated......Sweets are prepared- idol is bought & all are very happy......After d leap & union- Dis is d first Aartii dat Premeer are doing Togather...... All are very very happy & very very excited for sure.......Dr. says lalit is also very fine now- as his condition has improved very very much & he is more fine den expected by all of us......Lalit says- I will not take ur medicines Doctor- As my medicine- my life my Heer & Chahat- have returned to dere house........ Heer smiles- Epi ends !!! 😊

Today the track of FF ends but I'll continue-If you all want me to do so........Please Pm me ! Bye ! & may dis Ganpati bring lots of happiness & prosperity in all d houses & save people from Swine flu too......"Ganpati Bappaa Moryaa.....Luv, Tk care & bye !!! 😊
Part 10...
Jasmeet & Geet tell Heer dat it was Gayatri-who was responsible for all whatever happened as It was Gayatri- who constantly tried to keep Heer away from prem...& d client which filed a case of custody is not Prem but Gayatri mom itself.......Heer is very shocked as Meher-Maya give her strong proofs against Gayatri & today after so Many days Heer comes to know about Gayatri & her evil plans........All gather except Prem & Chahat & warn Gayatri ...... Heer is very sad for Gayatri....... 😭

All are about to tell prem-Gayatri's truth but Heer enters on d main moment & changes d topic to some other.......After Prem leaves- Heer tells all not to tell anything about Gayatri to prem-As she does not want to create rift between Mom & son-As she knows d pain of d feeling of going away from her child-wen she lost Chahat's custody case.....Meher agrees.......Maya is confused.........All agree & Heer makes a plan to improve & clear Gayatri & her mis-understandings as well- dat too very soon.......... 😊
Sorry short, but important guys.....Next on Wednesday only...... Tk care & Bye ! 😊
Part 11.....
Heer in her room is thinking about how Gayatri can be made aware of d truth.....without hurting her feelings......Maya & Meher enter dere and ask Heer to relax as everything is fine now.....Heer says, till maa knows d truth & Nihaal bhaiyyaa is out of jail-Nothing can be fine.......I know Nihaal bhaiyyaa is innocent & is facing punishment for d crime which he never did at all for sure....😭😭

Heer is thinking & sees Veeraa's photo hanging on d wall.....Heer realizes dat d only persons truth dat can save Nihaal & clear maa mis-understandings-both in one time is the truth about Veeraa's death for sure......Heer along with Maya & Meher makes a plan to find out the truth behind Veeraa's death & den proceed towards her next step The plan is finalized & Maya-meher agree to help Heer..Epi ends on her face....πŸ‘πŸ˜Š
Sorry short, but important guys.....Next on Thursday only...... Tk care & Bye ! 😊
Part 12.....
Maya Meher & Heer (Called as trio in d remaining epi.) plan to go to Nihaal's house where Veeraa's death took place.....d trio reach dere & Enter in d house with d spare keys which d neighbour has got with herself since Veeraa's death & Nihaal being punished by d court......Maya says dat if Veeraa was burnt by Nihaal den , we will certainly get some proof as Veeraa would have tried to resist herself from d attack of fire in an any possible way for sure......... πŸ˜ŠπŸ‘πŸ˜•

Heer says she is sure dat Nihaal did not do nything like dat, coz-Nihaal is her brother & she & Meher knows him very very well for sure....Meher agrees to wat Heer says & Maya is again lost in thoughts of Veeraa & Meher is lost in d thoughts of her father figure-elder brother Nihaal.......Heer gets a clue in her mind dat a neighbour told wrong facts about the accident to Gayatri due to which she mis-understood Nihaal-All d more for sure......... d trio decides to find out the neighbour who lied to Gayatri dat day- as he / she could be d root cause of further mis-understandings in Gayatri & Nihaal.........πŸ˜•

The trio comes out.....Heer is shocked to meet Rajveer- who is an police officer & was introduced in the show-Prior to d leap as Heer's childhood friend....Rajveer is sad when he hears all wat happened in dese six years & how Heer & Nihaal's life got devastated by certain twists & turns of fate......Rajveer agrees to help d trio in dere mission & tells Heer a method to trap d neighbour- who dey r trying to find out -all are happy as d plan is perfect.........Heer goes to d Ganesh mandir along with all d members & prays to god-to give her d strength to bring out d truth of Veeraa's death in front of Gayatri before dis Ganpati festival ends , for sure- by hook or by crook.......All join hands as Ganesh aartii plays in d background & Heer gives a very brave smile after long time......Epi ends on her face as usual only.......... πŸ˜†

Sorry short, but important guys.....Next on Monday only 4 sure ...... Tk care & Bye ! 😊 😊 πŸ‘
Part 13....😊😊😊
Heer & d trio (Maya-Meher-Rajveer....) come to d same old area & try to get certain details about how exactly Veeraa got injured & whether Nihaal was responsible for Veeraa's death or not ????? All tell whatever dey know about d accident as well and Veeraa-Nihaal's relationship too.....Heer & d trio is shocked when a woman Veeraa's nearest neighbour reveals dat , shortly after d accident Gayatri arrived to d Venue & I told her all wat happened....All realize d neighbour & decide to trap her now.... πŸ˜ŠπŸ‘πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ŠπŸ‘

All leave only Heer remains in d bedroom of her house with d neighbour as Heer gives d reason of cleaning d house smartly - as per d plan.....Heer tells d neighbour dat she herself has d habit of seeing d accidents & telling people its larger dan life story in her own words-den may it be correct or wrong,Neighbour (N) is shocked but does not realize Heer's trap at all..& she (N) confesses to Heer unknowingly dat she (N) did d same thing with Gayatri & told her a false story of Veeraa & Nihaal's fight ! 😲

Hearing all dis Heer is terribly shocked & slaps d neighbour & tells her d truth dat she is Nihaal's sister & Veeraa's bhabhi- who was here to know d truth & finally succeeded in doing so as well......D trio comes inside again - as dey hear fights screamings & shoutings & Meher sees Heer slapping d N very hard on her face.......πŸ‘πŸ‘ Heer warns d N dat if she did not come & tell d truth to Gayatri in 24 hours from now, Heer will straight to d police station with her confession- which heer records in her cell smartly.....πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ƒ

Here in Heer's house - little Chahat & Geet pray to Ganpati Bappaa, for Geet to get a nice man like Prem for marriage-who can give Geet lots of love - like how prem gives heer & d faith which Prem has in Heer should be dere in him too.......Here as dere prayers to lord ganesh Progress, D neighbour agrees to help Heer in getting out the truth of Veeraa's death in front of Gayatri within 24 hours or even early....Heer is very happy & so is d trio too......Chahat & Geet prayers are over & d Ganpati idol is shown........ 😊😊😊😊😊

Heer & d trio comes back to Junejaa house along with d woman ..... Gayatri is angry seeing heer & all & Heer tries to calm her down- Heer in her mind says dat- Nihaal bhaiyyaa has had enough & now she is all set to prove his innocence as well...........😊😊😊

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Next on Tuesday only 4 sure ...... Tk care & Bye ! 😊 😊 πŸ‘
Part 14....
Heer asks Gayatri to calm down & Heer in her mind says dat- Nihaal bhaiyyaa has had enough & now she is all set to prove his innocence as well........Heer signals d lady to tell d truth & d lady tells all the truth & how she lied to G3 dat day- six years ago........G3 goes into flashback & remembers d scene- she realizes d woman & identifies her as well- seeing dis Heer is satisfied in her mind for taking out d right woman from so many people & thanx God 2 give her d strength she always wanted......... πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ƒπŸ‘

Gayatri also gets d flashback of all wat she did to Heer.....Gayatri is shocked & is about to hug Heer - but before she reaches, she sees Veeraa's photo in between & tells heer dat she knows all dis is a 'Naatak' (Drama) & d woman is lying- G3 is about to slap Heer when lalit holds her hand & slaps her (G3) on her face thrice........All are shocked ..... Heer tries to stop l bu L gives another tight one on G's face & says watever Heer is saying is right & I knew d truth of veeraa till now Gayatri .......... 😊

Gayatri is very very shocked now......😲😲Lalit tells her all d story dat took place six years ago & how he & Nihaal-made a plan to ignore veeraa- to make her love for her hubby Nihaal, come out in d true sense as soon as possible- But as soon as dere plan ended Veeraa's life also ended & everything got devastated again one day.........Tears are continuously flowing from G3's eyes & verse from Geetaa- Yada yada hee dharmasya ' plays in d background.... Heer is happy , Epi ends on heer's cute smile......πŸ‘πŸ˜Š πŸ‘
Next on Friday only 4 sure ...... Tk care & Bye ! 😊 😊 πŸ‘

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Part 15....πŸ˜ŠπŸ‘πŸ˜†
Gayatri hugs Heer & tells Heer dat she is leaving d Juneja house now - As after wat she has done she can't feel d same respect in d house & has not got d courage to look into any body's eyes as well... Heer says, Maa if you leave me & go , how will I be able to keep d family united because you are d most respectful person in d entire house for me... please don't leave me & go maa- please don't - I beg you maa..... Gayatri goes to Meherr & catches her hand with love & tells Meher to beat her (Gaya3) & says - Y did she keep quite when in d absence of her husband as well.......Meherr says Because I respect you maa & love u as well......Gayatri falls on Lalit's feet & says I beg you please talk to me - I have realized my mistake......Lalit hugs Gayatri- All are very very happy.........😊

Chahat comes & asks y d choclatewaalii aunty is crying & Heer says Chahat she is Dadi & not aunty....G smiles away .... Chahat says she did no it at all- Maya says she did not no many things till now......Heer is confused & Meherr asks wat she is talking about & Maya says- Nihaal Bhaiyyaa....... G is sad again as she remembers all wat happened to Nihaal after Veeraa's death because of Her & dat too inspite of being innocent..........😭😭😭 Gayatri again asks for forgiveness to Nihaal as well in her own mind......πŸ‘πŸ‘ All start thinking of Nihaal & Heer says dat she is appealing in favour of Nihaal in d supreme court agin......Maya says were the lawyer will come from & Geet says, I'll handle Nihaal's case for sure........Heer in flashback remembers how geet became a lawyer three years back when heer was staying with Her.πŸ‘

Heer says but Geet this is your first case & its indeed a very complicated one- dere is no one to help you as well.... Meherr says dere is didi & all looked confused & Meherr says, Maya 's dad & Herman???? Heer says den y don't we let Herman handle dis case ..... Geet says after I win this case- It would be very very good for my practice as dis is a hard case for sure & as it is dad & Hermann & dad are helping her so indirectly dey are involved too, Cocludes Maya & G3 is very happy along with Lalit & all others.....πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜ŠPreet calls maya's dad - tell him all d story & Maya's dad comes to stay for a while- till d case finishes in d Junejaa house itself....... Ganpati Visarjan takes place in d house & all feel dat Ganesh ji has taken away with him- All d negative vibes & bad things of d house & now all good will only happen for sure in any case.........Epi ends on Premeer's happy faces in close - ups !!!!!!!!! πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜Š


Next on Monday only 4 sure ......d FF slowly progresses towards its end - after Geet & Nihaal's marriage this ff ends, as its a happy family now, still if u want me to continue PM me please guys- But frankly- this ending would b logical & dere's no use of pulling d story after it looses its potential to generate d earlier excitement....πŸ˜­πŸ˜•πŸ˜² Tk care & Bye ! 😊 πŸ‘

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Part 16....πŸ˜ŠπŸ‘
Gayatri Sits in d hall & thinks y without knowing the truth, she behaved bad with Heer & Meherr ??? Meherr comes & tells Gayatri dat Maya's dad has come to stay here till nihaal Bhaiyyaa's case is over.Gayatri says , Its a very very good news & I know for sure dat God will Help Geet & Maya's dad in rescuing Nihaal at any case....Lalit , Maya Preet & premeer come and say - today dey are proud of Gaya3 & Hermann says he is proud of his Sasurr jii.....All have a laugh..Premeer r happy....😊😊

Gayatri goes in her room & Chahat follows her in d room.....& asks - Choclatewaalii aunty- y did you trouble my prem dad & Heer mamma....Gayatri is very embarressed catches her own ears & in a kidding manner asks for forgiveness from chahat.......πŸ˜†πŸ‘ Gayatri remembers dat Veeraa was also d same....Gayatri thanks God for giving her back her Veeraa in d form of Chahat...... Chahat warns gayatri not to trouble premeeer & G pretends to get scared & agrees........ Heer sees dis & calls Chahat loudly........ πŸ˜‘πŸ˜­πŸ˜†

Heer is about to slap Chahat & shouts- is dis d hell way of tlking to elders ???? chahat is scared.....😲😭 She promises Heer she'll never do dat again at all in any case for sure........Gayatri comes & says - she didn't mind chahat at all but instead found back her Veeraa in d form of Chahat.Gayatri says six years ago I punished you for taking away my Veeraa But today I thank u for giving back my veeraa to me in d form of Chahat.......heer smiles.....Prem enters gayatri leaves & Chahat hugs Prem & cries aloud........

Prem reaches in & asks Heer y she made Chahat cry & Heer says- " Tum hii sambhaalo apne Nakchadii beti ko...."πŸ˜† Prem says - Nakchadi to meri biwi bhi hain- use bhi to sambhalnaa padegaa naa......πŸ˜†........Prem is about to hug Heer wen Chahat enters & ask prem wat he was doing.......Heer is shy.....Prem embarressed.....Chahat very happy ....... 😊😊😊 Heer says - Prem I'll beat you now......& Prem yells back - usee bahane tum mere kareeb aakar mujhe chhooo logee Heer....Maroo mujhe ...... Bahot maaro

Geet discuss-es Nihaal's case with Maya 's dad & tells him to Help her simulteneously when d case is going on....Heer asks maya's dad ...... Till d case stands for hearing in d court, can Nihaal bhaiyyaa be bought home........Mayaa's dad says - Its very difficult but not impossible at all for sure......Geet & Maya's dad (MD) leave to d court & Heer & Meherr along with d entire Juneja house pray for Nihaal to return back in d house soon.....All are happy.......Epi ends on Heer's confused face........πŸ˜•πŸ˜Š

Next on Wednesday only 4 sure.....Nihaal returns on Wednesday i.e. Day after-Tomorrow on temporary bail only.......😊 ......d FF slowly progresses towards its end - after Geet & Nihaal's marriage this ff ends, as its a happy family now, still if u want me to continue PM me please guys.........😊😭

Part 17....πŸ˜ŠπŸ‘

In d court room......The 'Magisterate' calls over Nihaal's bail plea for the purpose of giving d decision & conducting furthur investigations- after Geet & Mayaa's dad are successful in proving dat Nihaal is a man of Good character & his guarantee of character can easily be taken.....Plus as he has bared more dan 5 years of punishment without him being Prooved d murderer - d court should grant him a temporary bail or leave him on 'parolle' for some period of time........The decision is taken immediately after d interwal - in Nihaal's favour & with d help of Lawyer Maya's dad Geet is successful in her first step for sure.........πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜† Nihaal-Geet & Maya's dad come in Junejaa house.Meheerr is happy & hugs Nihaal & so is Prem too.πŸ˜ƒ


Gayatri & Heer are crying- Gayatri for getting d chance to realize her mistake & apolozise to Nihaal & Heer for fulfill her promise given to God-of bringing Nihaal back & now in future proving him innocent as well........Geet hugs Heer- Chahat enters in & asks Heer who is Nihaal & y Heer is crying so badly, even when all d others are happy......Geet replies-u won't understand chahat.....but only d thing is Nihaal ji is ur Mamaa.......πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜†


Lalit also asks for forgiveness from Nihaal & says dat It was due to his plan of Ignoring Veeraa- Gayatri mis-understood him & so did Veeraa.....Gayatri says - now all d truth is out & I have realized my mistake as well......y are u blaming yourself now??? Don't worry.....All will be fine like d earlier days.....Nihaal goes towards Veeraa's photo & remembers in flashback-Veeraa's death & how he could not save her ...He cries...G3 very sad ....... 😭😭

All are happy.....Geet feels Nihaal is like Prem only & starts getting attracted towards Nihaal now....... as Nihaal is prem's xerox copy...(I didn't find a good word for it ...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†) In Premeer's Room- Chahat says she wants to go to bed with Nihaal mamaa today & Prem tells Heer dat dere daughter is so smart... she knows to reserve d privacy between her parents.....Heer says, - "Bilkool tum pe gayii haim Prem......." Prem holds Heer's hand & pulls her on d bed & says- since Chahat is grown up now - she should have a brother as well..... Heer feels shy & tries to get up Prem pulls her again & kisses her forehead & Hugs Heer...Epi ends on Heer's Happy - Happy & shy - shy face...Lol very cute smily face (Aditi's ).πŸ˜ŠπŸ‘πŸ˜ƒ

Next on Friday only 4 sure....The FF slowly progresses towards its end - After Geet & Nihaal's marriage this ff ends, as its a happy family now, still if u want me to continue PM me please guys.........😊😭



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nice u should continue asap!!!
i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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luved it it was very good plzzzzzzzzzzzz continue asap
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great start...cant wait for the next part...continue soon and PM me when u update please...😊
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awesome second part too...thanks for the PM and continue soon. 😊
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Nice FF hope it happens in reality too I mean in the Show thanks!
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continue asap love t pm me alsoo
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awesome part....πŸ‘ thanks for the PM and continue soon. 😊
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hey awesome third part!!!!!
can u please make ur parts a little longer??? (just a request)
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