New SS: Tanhai Part 9 pg69 Dec 27 - Page 21

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Posted: 16 years ago
another amazingggggggg update...........👏

loved the romantic premeer scene...................😳

the ending was so saddddddddd.......................😔

can't wait 4 prem 2 come back 4rm the dead and claim his heer.............😍

but who is this preet!!!!!!!!!!!!!..............🤔

plz update soooooonnnnnnnnnnnnn.....................
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesoem update
continue asap
thanks for the pm
pm me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
*mine mine mine*
BTWWWW,, PREET MEHTA???? okay, this BETTERRR be prem jhuneja! varna tumhari khair nahiiii!!!!! *sticks tongue out at you*
we'll be back for more...but all i can think of right now is that this preet mehta guy definitely plays a verryy important role! hainaa?! and i was going to ask you why preet wasnt in here :-( BUT YESSS! finally! preet aa gaya..but we want PREMMMM!!! *sob sob* ..
okay okay, time for class! will be back!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Wassup Jazzy Jazz, I would say ok update b/c me Prem still did not maar an entry, beside that a pretty rocking update👏👏👏, nonetheless there were somethings that made me go hummm....so here hey go:

1) ok so why did Veera wait till the last minute to decide what she is gonna wear to her engagement, aren't Maans supposed to be uber rich, wouldn't Veera have a bunch of spare new cloths lying around, what about time management with all the bahabis??? very bad Veera and very shopaholic bahabis

anyhoo, my heart went awwww, when poor Heer thought that Veera was upset about something else, something serious, and our Veera nikli materialistic......no one is as nice as you Heer

2)So if Veera freaked about kapraas, what about the facials and other girlish getup thingamajigs??? didn't she wanna get her nails done???

3) so how dense can these engagement visiting aunties can be, if younger sister is getting engaged and older sister is wearing white, it should be clear that she is a widow, why pour salt over beechari Heer

4) So are the jallad Maan brother's ashamed of their behavior or their pride is nicked b/c they have a widow sister at home.....I wonder

whatever, now the big part.......the first date was soooo😍😍😍, I mean it was perfect, if Matt Damon would ever take me on a date, I wish it could be just like Prem's, I do wish I could go out with me Prem, but unlike Prem, I am afraid of all the Prem dewaanis they might just assassinate me and then console Prem for the tragedy.....well what if I hijack Prem and we go on a date, or better yet Prem, Matt, Luke Malby and I go on a date,,,,yum yum, oh we can go to "Cheese Cake Factory" or better yet a secluded romantic corner

ok enough of my fantasy,btw I was so sorry for Heer, I mean she loves her sister to death, but she also feels envious of Veera's happiness and then feels guilty for the thought😭😭😭, enough of the torture, please give Prem back to Heer, let her be happy you Jallad.....oh wait Preet Mehta???, is this our Prem doing a Gurav-- the guy with hole in his heart.......so Prem is back......bring out the fireworks🥳, Jazz Prem should be back....warna!!!!

back to the point, the date song was the best ever and so apt, also the love dovey conversation was brilliant.....I mean the whole update was mind blowing, thank you for writing a good sized update, this'll hold me like for a day so you better start writing another 17 pager update, b/c I can't wait.....kapish

oh btw on the topic of Maan Men punishment, what if we hang them upside down, make them smell cow dung and force them to eat moldy cheese..... easy punishment right, let me think of more, you get busy writing Missy😊
Edited by fungrl - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
fabulous update as usual from you Jaz…the start was amazing… 👍🏼 …Veera was crying for a second I thought she is not happy…but what she was crying because she can not decide what to wear…was very funny….and the flash back was awesome...☺️ ☺️ ☺️ I do also feel to cry to heer remembers her old days with prem 😭 😭 …..and then the old lady scene with Heer was very touching..i almost cried…she miss Prem a lot.. 😭
you have described her feelings beautifully…loved it Jaz…but I'm saying this again as I can't stand Heer's pain
BRING PREM BACK BRING PREM BACK BRING PREM BACK BRING PREM BACK
Can't wait for the next part…
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Posted: 16 years ago
do i really need to tell you time and time again that you are an awesome writter???
simply beautiful...
want to say much more but time is very short i have my paper tomorrow i cudnt resist your FF thats why read it...
regards,
Suhana.
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Posted: 16 years ago
oh my god, this is really sad.
the flashback was so romantic and cute....loved it
cant wait for the next part...continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Jaz!
Great update. Very happy for Veera but at the same time very sad for Heer that she has to be part of all the celebrations that she wished he had done with Prem.
"You don't love her because she is beautiful. She is beautiful because you love her." I'm in love with this sentence. I even shared it with my boyfriend and he loves it too. He says its so deep. I put it as my msn pm, I hope you don't mind. Did you come up with on your own? (Don't mind, just curious)
The last paragraph is really touching. It actually explains to us how much Heer is hurting since Prem left her. Waiting for more!
Nadia
P.S. Ramzam Mubarak to you and your family!
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Posted: 16 years ago

edit later...

hey jaz...

ooh...finally i got time to write comments...usually i dnt leave a long comment fr any ff that i read...but now that yr ff is an exceptional story i should be different in ma commenting style too..ryt????😉

where will i start now..i will go in the order of the story itself...

veera is freaking out for her engagement dress...you said it so well..how the sis-in-laws also made it a point that they too went shoppping ..!! and man.. they blackmailed their husbands into givng them the credit cards..!!😃..😆

and premeers first date...wah wah...he booked the whole place fr them...he is a sweetheart...😳😳😳.i doubt whether there are ppl on earth who are so sweet and caring n loving as prem...

that saree was so nice..😊..i liked it very much too.. was telling mama i want a saree like that..!!😃

and maya's excuse..lol..she is so clever...even in serial she is..but never uses fr good purpose naa...!!..😉😉

that song for their first date was perfect.. i simply loved it.. all those words went so well..!

and she said 'yes' to the marriage at the age of 15..!!!.. ooh..ooohhh.... 😊😊😊..😳

and i loved the fact that heer was in her widow atire..! and her dialogues to manmeets grandma..

and why did balraj say that heer wasnt married..i guess he plans to get her married off..!!😡but now that heer is strong i dnt worry..!! she can tell her opinion anywhere..she has the guts now..i wish that she had that 7 years ago..then prem must have been with her..!!

and preet is making the entry...i guess..preet will help heer to get her prem...someway or the other...

i cant wait to read the next update...love yr writing..if i am asked to select the best ff writer in the forum i will not have to think twice..!

your ff has gt a maturity feeling in it.. u know..nothing is made "huge".. everything is in the ryt quantity,...romance, tragedy, anger, love,...everything...all the relations are so well potrayed..

thanx fr the pm..

with love...sandy..😊😊😊

Edited by stunninstar - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
*reserved*
hey jaz....
hows everything going... i hope u had a great weekend... mine was boring to say the least... 😆.... i have a really bad feeling me will stop commenting on tanhai, after reading this part... me will sach mein stop... me warning u... 🤣.... u give me too much tears and i am unable to bare it... arrhh, u are simply a great writer....
okie, now without my bak-bak, me will start commenting on the part... my first reactions: 😕.... *nahin*.... 😲... veera, poor girl, what did those idiots do now?? phir... 😕.... kya?? 🤣.... omg, *pinches veera's two cheeks hardly* aww, poor baby, she must so awfully in dismay after all the nervousness, shyness came together... and a wardrobe full of clothes, yet nothing to wear? we girls bhi na, shopping ke liye koi bhi bahana chalega.... 🤣.... and i just loved the 3 tailing along... ooh, they are the typical bhabhis... and i love them... 😳
omg, heer, *wipes her tears*... poor, poor girl.... i just know how she feels right about now... what was her mistake? what did she do wrong? what crime has she commited? she too is a girl, with a lot of dreams, who wants a lot in life.. she too wanted to share her hapiness, her shyness, her nervousness, her love, her life with her family... she too wanted to feel the pamper and importance her little sister is getting, she too wanted to feel the little joy of being teased before her wedding, she too wanted to see love-filled eyes of her family, who is estatic because she's happy.... she too wanted to wait for her groom in a horse, who'd take her away to heaven, she too wanted to get married with happiness and tears at the same time... alas, this would never happen.... and why would this be taken away from her? because, and only because she loved a middle-class guy, who couldnt offer anything but love to her family.... damn these juneja men, they are completely shameless, arrogant creatures... 😡
credit cards... 🤣, ooh, classic men actions... i love it!! and their shopping would never have ended so... umm... 🤔... early if it wasnt for the engagement nah? 🤣... women.... *thinking if i'm not exactly the same* 🤣... okie, we all are such shopping maniacs...
ohh, heer.... poor girl... even thoda makeup, and she felt uncomfortable... poor girl, come on... it's totally fine if u put on a little make-up... prem would be happy up there seeing you dress up a little bit... he also wants to see his heer become what she used to be.... a girl in real terms! (and no jaz, absolutely not what ur thinking.... if u think i'm believing prem is dead, think again.... 🤣, i was just writing what heer should feel, believing prem is no more.... not at all what reality actually is... me will not give up as easily as u think!! 🤣)... haye, prem, your heer needs u ever so badly, pls come back soon (dont ever listen to that ebil jaz... 🤣) if only u were'nt writing this ff, i'd have stopped reading it in depression of my prem not being there... but trust u right? me is trusting u, if u let me down.... it's gonna be worse than just an andolan...
on a more serious note; aah, veera must have looked stunnigly beautiful... oh, isnt she a sweet heart unlike the one in the show? and manmeet... haila, i never imagined i was ever gonna say this, but if i cant get prem, then manmeet chalega.... *dreamy muh*... haye, he's a prince for veera, an absolute prince, and me loving the fact that even if there's a business deal going on, there is still that emotion of love all over the place... it's spread through... i just think it's perfect... if i just forget what happened to heer, i'd have thought this was the most ideal relationship of all; everyone was happy; mann family, manmeet, heer, and most importantly, veera... oh, it's just so perfect to be true, and that's exactly why it isnt.... heer and her sadness, her pain, and tears, they over shadow even veera and manmeet's true love... at least for me... or maybe i'm just being baised? dunno, but i feel a moment's happiness for veera, and a stream of pain for heer... if only prem was here... i'm sure he'd be.. by the wedding? 😉... 😆... come jazzy!! pretty please, with honey, roses and all the sweet things ever to be brought in the face of earth!! 😆 maan jao na!!
flashback : ooh, did i ever mention how much i adore maya... kaash she'd like this in the show... i can totally imagine her, as the sweet and caring bhabi she is in tanhai.... *sigh*... oh well, if not there then here i guess.... i just loved her idea... so well thought isnt it? i mean going to meet her dad, and heer.... 🤣... ooh, maya, my simpathies with u all the way.... "It took all of Maya's self control to keep from smacking Heer upside the head".... jaz u totally rocked in those lines, that had me in splits... heer can be so... so .... so dense... ... totally the exact word to describe her behaviour in that scene... and harmu... 🤣... what a chicken he is.... just had me in more splits... omg, that particular scene was hilarious to say the least....
aur aye haye... saree.... ooh, too cute... and demanding (🤣) for heer too... but prem, u are an angel.. haye, *prays* when will an angel in my life come... preferably that would be prem.... 😳.... ..."tu nahin aayegi?"...heer u totally crack me up... it's your first date, with your dream guy, and you ask your friend why she isnt comming over for tea?🤣, ooh, do you want her to be the proof of your first kiss? ☺️...ookie i have lost it nah? god help!.... and the pendant... oh prem, i just love that love of his... so pure, so real, so deep... omg, even if he doesnt have money, he bought heer that.... ooh, angel, jaz will bring u back... haina jaz? 😛..... ooh, and u just dont know how much i love that song... everything... aye haye, sooo.. romantic... so reminds me of premeer this particular song, after u wrote it on them... omg, loving it to bits... even more than i used to now....
"dont trip on the saree"... 🤣, oh heer u innocent little thing,.. oh how much i adore these simple gestures... *sigh*.... and that "daar" dialogue... omg... am so gooey over that... so cute.... and "Tum kissi aur ki hojao, yeh main khabi nahin seh sakta. Tum mere ho, sirf mere,"..... *dies*......omg, omg, omg, u think u wont kill anyone by writing this? well u just got ur first culprit.... *dies again*....... 😍... omg, prem, kitne haq se bola... seriously... i was just day-dreaming all along... ooh, and i felt a hard pinch when prem thought heer doesnt reciprocate his feelings... and that sad gesture, and when she said "i love u too".... i totally loved that scene.. haye... and that kiss... ☺️...... ooh, it was just so inncoently written... again, amazing...but the shaadi ki baat made me 🤣... it was a little premature wasnt it? ... but cute none the less on prem's side....
"You don't love her because she is beautiful. She is beautiful because you love her."
oh, so well written these lines... it completely descibed what she was feeling at that moment... so real... me loves this line... really....
"Tum hi mere daulat ho, paisoon se mera kya lena dehna,".... oh did i also mention that i hate u jaz? well if i havent i do now... omg, how can u kill (not really, but that's what ur trying to convey 😆) the guy who said thse beautiful line.... i wanna kill u now.... *hmph*... but, but, but, u'll bring him back wont u? *kaan pakding for repeating this line numerous times*... i just cant help myself... 😆... me missing prem... 😭....
my comment is getting way out of control, i'd have written about what manmeet's daadi said, but my comment is getting tooooo long, so in short, i just love this daadi, coz i thought she'd make a hugama on what a widow is doing in a marriage... and whose horrid villains.... i felt bad for a split second for them but that moment already passed!!
and, and, and.... i have completely, without notice ignored these lines... "Preet Mehta nahin aaya?" ... i know exactly what u are trying to convey and trying to do at the same time, but nooooooo way we will accept that... noooo way!! preet?? u did this in "heer's secrer" but there prem has gray shades, here prem is an angel and alive, so no preet or anyone can come take his place.... never.... *folds hands and shakes hands for a firm no*.... but i'll buy that, if prem would come back in preet's name 🤣... it's totally acceptable.... 😆....
omg, very long coment this is.... but i totally enjoyed this update... next would have prem in the present right?😉.... here i go again... 🤣.... expecting an even better (and longer 😉) update... for now, take care... and enjoy ur week!!
cess
Edited by Cess- - 16 years ago

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