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okaayy so instead of bombarding ur inbox, with PMs i'm going to be more polite and comment on ur story :)
well starting with veera's rishta..well still don't understand why Heer's family chose not to tell her, i mean if veera's okay with the proposal, then heer's reaction is bound to be "normal" LOL
i really liked the convo b/w heer and veera. i'm sure it made heer realize of what she's been doing to herself...(not tht she's to be blamed) and for veera to just spill everything so innocently..seemed very sweet :) loved that scene to the coree!!!!!!!
moving on to the flashback!!!! I LOVED ITT!!! i mean just the mention of prem makes my heart skip several beats...(and to think u'd kill him..tsk...tskk 😆) but one thing i must commend u on is the way u've portrayed premeer!! i mean they're def. differ from the premeer in kis desh, and they're also differ from any other "typical-love-story" type of couple! i love how prem's so humble..and completely unaware of his status at school, and i love how reality about her family's status hit heer in the face...LOL....i mean to think of it...it is def. sad to have all the boys scared of asking you out because of ur brothers....if that was me....i'd runaway from home or get a new ID :DD LMAO
but i simply adored the way premeer conversed...i mean i was literally blushing!!!!! i love how prem said hansi tou phansi, and how he asked heer out in the first place, they way he said haan bhi aur naa bhi, they way he just casually sat in front of her and ate her fries...and again so casually asked her about what's bothering her!!! their friendship never ceases to amaze me!!! and the couple themselves are a treat to read about in this ff!!! :D:D:D:D
and i also loved the way maya and heer talked about premeer's relationship being "official" it was tooo cute and funnyy!!!
btw...did i ever mention how much i love ur sense of humour!! i loved the way the bhabhis' caught the brothers spying on their sister....and i can't believe im actually admitting to like the brothers...but in this one, and i must add, one and only scene, i couldn't help admiring and laughing at rishab's and nihaal's remarks: "mein veera pe nazar rakhunga....haan bhaiya agarr us manmeet ne kuch bhi kiya, tou mein usse kha jaaounga" 🤣
hmm....moving towards the end....im glad at the way veera and manmeet's relationship is taking shape, i just hope that manmeet remains loyal..and isnt business hungry like his and veera's fathers
and now for some questions:
wen is prem coming back...and yes i mean coming back from the dead???? LOL
and im hoping to read more details on prem's death....i mean was he just left to rot in the forest/jungle??? i have a strong feeling that his friends might've rescued him...and he probably stayed away from heer for her own safety...rather than his safety (seeing as how prem's character is ☺️) but then again...all of this is just a simple and common prediction, and knowing u, i doubt ur story would be so predictable LOL....
....kk i think im suffering from short-term memory loss again...because i forgot the other question i had to ask!!!!!!!
but anyways...the last bit left me wondering!!! like intensely wondering!!!!!!! im still trying to figure out the meaning behind heer's words!!! i think she's at peace now knowing that her brother's decision is not ruining veera's life..i mean her brother's decision didn't work out for her....but im sure its satifying for her to know that its working out fr her lil sister! :D
well i think i've written enough fr now...im running out of time actually...
sehri's in a couple of hours, and i plan on starting to read one of ur other ffs at least!! plus i didnt watch kis desh this past week as i was busy with family stuff, so i gtg catch tht as well!!!! LOL
keep me posted
and keep writing BRILLIANTLY (sorry i still havent had a chance to check thesaurus.com)
love you
tc
Samra
P.S. would it be okay if i called u jaz api, instead of jaz di...LOL....and also...i mean its the month of ramadan...u know..blessings, being kind, and of course being generous...so would it be possible fr u to update sooner..and of course longer 😳 LOL....just keeddingg...its okay..i understand where ur coming from being this busyysyy :)
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