New SS: Tanhai Part 9 pg69 Dec 27 - Page 11

Awesome part as usual from you Jaz...
beautifully written... 👏
Jaz you are making me cry...i'm feeling so pain for Heer...she is wearing White and has become emotionless and does not believe in god any more...and childhood FB's 😭
you have described a beautiful relation between Heer and her female family members...
Hope she will never ever talk to his brothers....
and Prem and you have to bring him back...heer is just incomplete without him
BRING PREM BACK BRING PREM BACK BRING PREM BACK
and now these monster brother up to Veera....now Veera and Heer should stand up together and teach these men a lesson which they will never forget...
can't wait to read the next update

and to answer your question..yeah my name is Sarah same as your niece 😊

Awww ...poor Heer...i feel her pain she has lived with all this for 7 years...and reliving all her memories....awesome update as usual...

awesome update
*SPEECHLESS*
i wonder what heer will do to stop this sagai!!!!
anyways great update
continue asap
thanks for the pm
pm me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i loved it

I am here! 😎

*Edit*

Jaz Di! *Squishy Hug* So how have you been? *ahem* as you can probably tell, im in a hyper mood right now, and I have know idea why?! 😆 But anyways, I'll get to the comment ASAP!

This update was phenomenal! As always Jaz Di you have the most amazing talent in writing FF's! I love reading them! 😳 The way you showed the flashbacks of little Premeer was so C-U-T-E! *pinches cheeks* Prem is such a sweetie pie! And Heer is adorable! Now I REALLY wish Prem is alive, and he better be! 😉 😆 Right Jaz Di?!?! Hehehe.

My poor Heer, she's been depressed all these 7 years! I feel so bad for her man! *Gives her a Jadoo Ki Jhappi* I hope some chamatkaar happens quickly so we can have our old Heer back! 😃

OMG! The stupid brothers and bauji are making Veera's life miserable now? 😲 How dare they?! I hope Heer does something fast! So Veera's life doesn't get ruined! Can't wait to read what's next Di! Update soon! 😃

Luv,
Garima 😳

love ur ff.............👍🏼

a wonderful update..............👏

can't wait to c prem back though..............😍

plz update sooooooooooooon..................................

updated my post.... and jaz, thanks for the compliment... feels real nice to read from a great writer like u!

very nice i hope veera doesn't have 2 suffer like heer thouigh i think heer wont let that happen 2 her baby sis

Kamal

all mine =)

PS Jaz, no worries about the reply - I didn't really give you a real comment on the last part anyway...anyway, more to come...Sunday maybe? If not, early next wk for sure =) (hmmm...but don't hold me to it...you know how it is. lol)

yeh log baaz nahi ate!!!😡 heer kuch karo...prem can't die okay.. i dont want to believe it.. u gotta do something!!!!

continue soonn!!!