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Aradhna

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Posted: 16 years ago

#91

Jaz, OMG, how can Heer stay with the family? After what they did to her? Don't they feel guilty? That they're the reason Heer's a widow? They don't care, and Heer, Heer is still with them. I understand Heer staying for her mom, her sister and Bhabhis, but for her to interact with her brothers and her father, it must be tough. Poor Heer.

I love that she doesn't hold it against her Bhabhis, her sister and her mother though. And the relation she has with the kids is sweet as well. But how can her brothers do this again? What they did to Heer, now they're doing to Veera? I hope Veera does not get hurt like Heer. I hope Heer talks to her.

The flashbacks were sweet. Prem and Heer are perfect together, since childhood. So innocent, and simple was their love.

What are you going to do now I wonder...

Waiting...

Love,
Radz

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jass2897

@jass2897

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Posted: 16 years ago

#92

the best part ever i wonder wat heer will do i cant wait for ur update.................if u can could u pm me

ravina

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purplestar22

@purplestar22

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Posted: 16 years ago

#93

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I again read this chapter like 100 times😆

This chapter was sooo sad, the way Heer was remembering all her moments wih Prem from the day she met him! Its so sad how Heer doesnt sit in the pujas anymore and she didnt even really remember her moms b-day. I really loved this line "The daughter in her hated that she caused her family such pain. However, the other side, the one who had been Prem's wife, felt a strange sense of peace at seeing them suffer." I loved how Preeti calls Heer Massi! I loved the halwa flashback!! Oh great now the so called brothers want to ruin Veeras life as well??? Btw why arent they in jail??? They deserve to rot there forever😡. Im sure Heer will make sure that nothing happens to Veera!!

Ps: I hope Prems alive!😳

Edited by purplestar22 - 16 years ago

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Parisa

@XSilentPrayersX

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Posted: 16 years ago

#94

BEAUTIFULL SS

I JUST LOVED IT but i miss prem alot poor heer ab aur kitna royege please prem ko jaldi wapas le awoo

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stunninstar

@stunninstar

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Posted: 16 years ago

#95

wonderful update....u are the best yaar... u write in a special style... wowww... those flashbacks were wonderful...i loved them.. and gajar ka halwa.. so sweet of heer to do that for prem...

your story is truely eternal one..i wish ekta makes a serial with you as its creative head...i bet it will be superhit.. try sending this story to her,...u will be make the next sensational writer...pakka,,,😊

and i loved the way the story is going.. but those brothers..i know they did it without thinking mmuch...due to the uconditional love for there sissie..but they killed prem!!! i can never forgive them..

how can they live so "shamelessly"???!!!.. after killing their brother in law..killing their sisters dreamz...and they all are living a happy life with their wives and children in front of her... i think this suffering is not enough for them... heer shouldnot even talk to or smile with them...

i cant wait to read the next part...thanks fr the pm dear...tc...and keep rocking!

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topsyturvy23

@topsyturvy23

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Posted: 16 years ago

#96

hey first of all a very long part indeed n a fabulous one too..............i wonder wat will heer do now..........plz update soon ..........i am dying to knw wat happens next...thanks for pm

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Maha

@-Maha-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#97

edit later😊

👏

amazing dear really fantastic part.flashbacks were tooooo gd

what will heer do now?confused😕

and i want to tell you one thing😳

i will kill you if you dont bring prem back😆

but again just love this part

update soon and pm me

maha

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Bhavna

@sourpuss

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Posted: 16 years ago

#98

Ahh Di, don't worry about not replying to the comment! :D

Ahh, so instead of Preet we get Preeti? Ingenious, Di! *applauds* 🤣 But anyway, the relationship between Heer and Preeti is adorable. So I'm guessing that Heer still gets along well with her bhabhis and mum, but not so much with her brothers?

OMG the flashbacks were so cute!! I wish there would be more of Prem though...*pouts* And not just kid-Prem, but older, hunkier Prem...😍 Hinthint, Di? 😆

Can't wait for the next part!

Love,

Bhav (:

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Suhana Ahmed

@Suhana Ahmed

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Posted: 16 years ago

#99

hey jaz,

wow... amazing amazing update!!!

too good.... very very well written....

this FF of yours has come upto number 1 of my favorite list... and this just in only two parts....

the flashbacks were fabulous...

i cried again after reading this part... when you described Heer... how she only wears white sari...

oh no... those Mann monsters are upto ruining another life now...

i really really wish Heer is able to do something for her sis...

plz plz update soon... i am very much eager to read more of it...

and yes, thanx for the pm....

take care,

regards,

Suhana.

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@shabo24

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Posted: 16 years ago

#100

WHY IS SHE NOT LIVING WITH PREM'S MOTHER??????!?! I would have loved to see her brothers come to a little hut to come tell her to come home and her to be like "this is my home..."

Gosh, her relationship with the woman of the household is so untainted. :) I love it!! And the children are so cute! :D Love them as well, and the sweet fights they were getting into! Heer and Prem as kids were so *insert another way to say adorable here* Especially the "bhaiya" thing. 😆

The NERVE of her brothers!?!?! Holy crap, that's disgusting. One the same day, the same lines. Urg. Continue soon di!

Again, Ramdan starts tomorrow, so probably not going to be leaving comments for a while, but will drop one whenever possiable. :D

--shabz

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