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hey guys some of you may already know me from AC its aashifa and I thought why not post it here aswell thanks to cute_bears advice.
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NEXT UPDATE SATURDAY!!!!
so here is the character sketch and chapter 1 tell me what you think plzzz
JUNEJA'S
Lalit Juneja:A succesfull business man who even though is far from his own land has a strong connection to his desh.
Lalit Juneja:A succesfull business man who even though is far from his own land has a strong connection to his desh.
Gaytri: A nice woman,maa and wife although at hands she can become to motherly.
the children of the good people:
the children of the good people:
Prem Juneja: Single, and the girl catcher(well he does not catch girls) he is the babe magnet you could say but he has no interets in this type of stuff because he has not found his dream girl yet!!!interests are to follow in his fathers footsteps and become a great business man, brother, husband and father.
Preet Juneja: the naughtiest with his older bro hitesh and younger sister Kuldi he likes to tease his dad and mum and has bad grades in school
Hitesh Juneja : (kinda like harman) is just as naughty as preet
but is succesful in his career
but is succesful in his career
Kulraj juneja: an adorable little sister who likes to socialise and gossip!!!
THE MAANS:
Balraj Maan:;a also succesful business man away from home in london but moved bakc now and is best friends with Lalit junja
Teji maan: A wonderfull mother to all 3 daughters but picks sides
Heer maan: eldest daughter of all 3, is intellegent and her beauty attracts many boys but she is not like that she is simple and susheel she likes to study and read and takes care of everything and everyone but not herself.
Meher Maan: TO TO MODERN and her nick name is anorexia
trust she is really really skinny and goes clubbing all the time!!! well she did but ever since she met a certain some one she starts to change!!!
trust she is really really skinny and goes clubbing all the time!!! well she did but ever since she met a certain some one she starts to change!!!
Jassmeet Maan:in short jaasi
she is classy geeky and is pretty but doubts herself
she is classy geeky and is pretty but doubts herself
ok here is chapter 1:
CHAPTER ONE
It had been such a long time since Lalit and Balraaj met almost five yrs now, none of their children ever met though all to busy in their own lives. They both had children Lalit had 4 and Balraaj had 3.
Ta Tum............Ta Tum(lol soz guys could not think of right sound)
Hello?.....asked a busy balraaj
Aiy Ball thu ambala poonch gya kab kaise???.......Lalit asked
Ha mein thu pishle saahle he yaahain agayain.....heer teji meher aur jassi ke saath!!!Thu ne mujhe yaad karliya?? Balraaj asked and answered at the same time
Arre yeh saab choor zara piche dekh!..... Lalit replied in return
Piche lekin kyun????.................Balraaj questioned
Thu dekhnaa!!!!!!!!!!...............Lalit said angrily now
Achaa Achaa!!!!.................Balraaj replied with the same angriness
BALLU,...........,LALLU both shouted across the hall and ran for a hug(I mean even in this old age they still got it)
Arre yaar main tere naal gaal nai karni?!!!! Balraaj said after hugging him
KYUN???.....................Lalit asked in worry and anger
Chal thu yeh saab chur aur bata bkhi saab kasein hai??............Balraaj asked
Thu khud puchle.............came in return
paar kahai hai?.............Balraaj questioned
ARRE TUM SAAB LOGHE BAHAR AJAOU!!! Lalit shouted to the rest eagerly waiting to meet their dads friend outside
sorry dude's and dudettes's it is a short update but thts all I can do for now
It had been such a long time since Lalit and Balraaj met almost five yrs now, none of their children ever met though all to busy in their own lives. They both had children Lalit had 4 and Balraaj had 3.
Ta Tum............Ta Tum(lol soz guys could not think of right sound)
Hello?.....asked a busy balraaj
Aiy Ball thu ambala poonch gya kab kaise???.......Lalit asked
Ha mein thu pishle saahle he yaahain agayain.....heer teji meher aur jassi ke saath!!!Thu ne mujhe yaad karliya?? Balraaj asked and answered at the same time
Arre yeh saab choor zara piche dekh!..... Lalit replied in return
Piche lekin kyun????.................Balraaj questioned
Thu dekhnaa!!!!!!!!!!...............Lalit said angrily now
Achaa Achaa!!!!.................Balraaj replied with the same angriness
BALLU,...........,LALLU both shouted across the hall and ran for a hug(I mean even in this old age they still got it)
Arre yaar main tere naal gaal nai karni?!!!! Balraaj said after hugging him
KYUN???.....................Lalit asked in worry and anger
Chal thu yeh saab chur aur bata bkhi saab kasein hai??............Balraaj asked
Thu khud puchle.............came in return
paar kahai hai?.............Balraaj questioned
ARRE TUM SAAB LOGHE BAHAR AJAOU!!! Lalit shouted to the rest eagerly waiting to meet their dads friend outside
sorry dude's and dudettes's it is a short update but thts all I can do for now
COMMENT AND CRITISIZE ALL APPRECIATED
NEXT UPDATE SATURDAY!!!!
Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 2
