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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: shabo24

Oh my gosh.<br><br>A fanfic? OK that does it, you are just mental. N! A one shot would have been fine! You really need to elaborate everything don't you? *shakes head* Gosh you are just bonkers. Stupid Lalit. Hurting my Preet. And I love my daddy. *giggles*<br><br>Gosh, you my friend are one of a kind. Thank you! 🤗<br><br>--shabz<br><br>p.s. GOOOOOOOOOD LUCKKKKKKKKK!<br>



Princess Zee! 😆 I mean, S!!!!!!!! 🤗 Yeah! I love your daddy too 😆
Hope the rest is not too disappointing! Still, you'll read it, won't you *puppy dog eyes*
Thanks for the wishes!!!! Finally, I am a free bird... Next chapters coming up...
Love:-Nonee
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Posted: 16 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

OMG! N! 😛<br><br>You really are amazing!! I can't wait to read more, but I'll have you know the first part itself was so cool, and it's so cute and different! 😃<br><br>Love you,<br><br>Me<br>



Thanks Me! That's so sweet. Hope the rest doesn't disappoint though! Big hugs:)
Love you too....Nonee
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: urworstnitemare

Too poofed to read it...reading will probably make me unpoofed so not gonna read it when I;m poofed. Will come back when I'm naturally not poofed and become hyper. Woah I make ur FF sound like a drug *giggles.



COme back soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And ohh good luck with exams, bet u'll do awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


5 minutes later:

That was awesome N!!!! I love the way you write! Reminded me of all those fantasy books I used to read!😳I seriously miss them sooo very much! Is it fantasy? is it fantasy? Are there going to be beasts and kings and queens? a witch etc? Aw you lucky ducklying Shabz...Princess Zee lmao loved it!!!!! Happy birthdya Princess Zee!!!!!! Loved your parents btw!



Aviiiii*big hugs* You're so adorable *hugs again* You always make me smile.....:)

Thanks so much! Making me blush! And at the time, I have to disappoint you, my dear...It's not fantasy.....no beasts, no kings and no queens, no witches....Awww, so sorry!!!!!

Princess Zee is cute, isn't she. I loved that bit too, laughs!

And thanks for the wishes!!!!!!! Exams are OVER and DONE with............Yay!!!!!! Party time.....

Big hugs:)
Love:-Nonee
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Posted: 16 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: LilyGurl

that was awesome happy birthday shabo



Thanks so much Lily. Am glad you liked it.
Big hug:)
Love:-Nonee
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Posted: 16 years ago
#15
Princess Zee, here's the next part...Big hug:) We're gonna be celebrating your sixteenth..........for a long time....

Sorry to disappoint with the rest of this, I wish this was fantasy myself. I started out to write something like that but it ended quite another way, I'm afraid! Still, here it is. Posting two chapters today, cause I just realised that chap 2 is quite short! And i am impatient...😆

Love:-Nonee

Chapter 2

"What is wrong with him Mommy?" Shabzie asked her mother quietly, looking at the little boy seated in her mother's study, looking down at his toes.

"He's very sad Shabzie. His Mommy has gone far far away and she won't be coming back. He misses her very very much. Would you like to take him and show him around. He will be staying with us for some time until his father gets back."

Shabzie watched her mother kneel in front of the little boy and take his hands in hers. The boy looked at her mother. "Preet, this is Shabzie, she's almost the same age as you are and she would like to be your friend."

The boy, Preet, looked at her but Shabzie had the feeling that although he was looking at her, he couldn't really see her.

She wondered what to say to him and looked at her mother, who had walked to her dresser and was standing there looking at them. Her mother nodded encouragingly.

Suddenly she noticed something clutched in his hand and she brightened, "Is that a dragon? I love dragons!"

He looked down and clutched his dragon even more fiercely.

Shabzie held her other hand out and showed him Pebbles.

"This is my baby Roo, Pebbles. Pebbles loves dragons as well. Pebbles would like to make a new friend. What is his name?"

He looked at Pebbles, shook his head slightly and then looked back down at his toes.

Shabzie stomped off to her mother, "He doesn't talk at all Mommy. I don't like him." She flounced off, pouting, without casting another look at the boy.

Dee Kapoor sighed and looked at the little boy who continued to look at his toes, as if nothing had happened. She sat down next to him and put an arm around him. She could feel the boy shiver and almost recoil from her touch. He was such an adorable little boy. And his eyes, just like Gayatri's. So like Gayatri's, it almost hurt to look into them. Hazelnut brown with long curling eyelashes.

Gayatri, her dearest friend, her sister! How thrilled they had been that they would again be living so close to one another. And all of a sudden, just like that, she was gone, victim to a freak accident, as she was driving to meet them. It was so unbelievable.

Lalit had been unconsolable. The tragedy had unhinged him. And he had just turned on his son. His six year old son who hadn't spoken a word since she had walked into the house and seen him hiding in Gayatri's room, shivering in a corner, his stuffed dragon clutched tightly under his arm.

Dee didn't know what to do. True, Lalit was a business associate of Anand but it had been Gayatri and her who had been the best of friends. She had never really been able to make Lalit out. Whenever Lalit had been in New York, he had met with them and based on her interaction with him, she had known that Lalit was crazy about his wife. That had thrilled her. Gayatri had always been such a romantic, she deserved every happiness. And she had so looked forward to seeing Preet after hearing so much, seeing so many pictures that Gayatri had sent her. But not in these circumstances…..

She looked at Preet again. His attention was caught by the silver framed photograph of Gayatri and her, taken outside Surval Mont-Fleuri, Montreux. Last year at school. Her heart felt so heavy as she looked at the two of them, hatless in the bright sun, carefree smiles on their faces, ready to take on the world.

She lifted the frame and held it out before him. He just stared at it unblinkingly without making a move to touch it.

She could feel the tears coming on and she placed the picture next to him and murmured, "I'll just get you something to drink, my dear," before walking quickly out of the room.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#16
Chapter 3 up for you S! Just one thing. I've come to understand that you don't care much for our canine friends!!!!Sigh! I didn't know! Can you please bear with them for the duration of this Chapter. Not that they do much or anything! Still, thought I'd mention it.

Chapter 3

Shabzie peered into the room. She saw that boy, Preet, still seated in the same chair. He was holding something in his hands and was looking intently at it.

Shabzie wondered what she ought to do. She had seen the reproachful look her mother had sent her way as she had flounced out of the room earlier. She knew she had behaved badly.

And then she had come across her Mother sobbing in her parent's room upstairs. She had rushed into her mother's arms, really upset. It was the first time she had seen her mother cry and she knew it was all her fault. Because she had been rude to the boy downstairs. The boy whose mother had left him and gone far far away.

She would make things better, she promised herself, she would make mother proud of her.

She walked in and stood in front of him. "I'm sorry," she said softly. "I didn't mean to say what I did before."

He looked up as she spoke.

"What are you looking at?" she asked, curious.

He held the picture out to her, wordlessly.

"Mamma and Aunty G!" she began cheerfully and then recalling what her Mum had just said to her, looked at the patterns on the carpet.

"Aunty G looks so pretty," she said quietly, still looking at the carpet.

"Like a princess," she said after a bit.

He just continued to stare at the picture.

"We have two dogs. Do you like dogs?"

She hurried on, "One is Percival and the other is Galahad. They are very friendly. I love them."

"And we have a tree house in the garden. Daddy had it built last year. It's got this rope ladder and it is a lot of fun."

"Are you angry with me?" she asked him finally, having run out of everything to say. "Is that why you're saying nothing to me?"

He shook his head slowly.

She brightened. Mommy would be pleased. "So, Friends?"

When he still didn't say anything, she held Pebbles out to him.

"At least be friends with Pebbles. She's okay even if you don't speak to her at all. And it's like magic. Pebbles makes everything better. Once when Daddy and Mommy were cross with me, I cried all night and Pebbles made everything okay. Swear!" She crossed her heart.

"I've never ever given Pebbles to anyone before," she told him earnestly as she placed Pebbles next to Preet.

"When you feel better, you can give Pebbles back to me," she told him as she put her arms around him. "Mommy and Daddy always give me BBB hugs when I'm sad. Big Brown Bear hugs. I always feel good after."

"I'm going to the playroom. Nate's also coming. He's my friend. If you want to come, it's the room directly below this one on the second level. Okay," she told him after a moment.

"Make things okay for him Pebbles," she instructed her Roo solemnly and skipped out of the room.

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Posted: 16 years ago
#17
MINE!

First of all - yea I'm not the biggest dog fan, I'm just scared of them. But I don't mind them - from afar. 😆 Coming to the parts...

oh no. G-mom died. Even though I don't like her in the show, she seemed so sweet in the first part and now she's gone. And now Preet's dad is being an a*s. Poor Preet, the first part was so sad, how he just wouldn't say anything. *sigh* I love my mommy as well. 😆

The second part!!!!!!!!!!! Well, really the third. But in today's postings, the second! It was kinda bittersweet y;know? I loved how quiet preet is kinda shell shocked right? AND I AM SO COOL! 😎 He didn't say a single word I kept blabbering. 😆 But that's adorable - how she gave up Pebbles - teddy bears do make everything better! :)

We are going to be celebrating for a while no? 😆 Keep posting, I love it and thanks again! 🤗

--shabz
Edited by shabo24 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Aww, N, I feel like giving Preet a huge hug! From the first part it's obvious how close he and his mother are, and how distant his father is from them, and now, his support has been snatched away from him.

Can I just say I love the innocence Shabzie portrays? So unlike the Shabo we know (and love!) yet so believable, if she hadn't been corrupted by TV and boys.

Continue soon! It's so intriguing. And Nate? Ab yeh kaun hai?

Love,
Radz

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Nathaniel Archibald.....*hears B! sighing* And writing his name down makes me think of.....Chuckkkkk....*faints* I so love the way Chuck drawls Nate's name....so slowly and so smirkily (I know that's not a word..still!) it sends a shiver down my spine!!!!!
Edited by noneeM - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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N, go get ready for your party.

What is Nate doing here though?

Love,
Radz

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